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incarnadine

@incarnadine

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Lovely lovely start Shiza!

Your characterization of a strong-minded Khushi, the kind-hearted Mr. Shiven and of course Arnav, was beautiful!

I love the way Arnav is Khushi's strength in battling this disease.

Life is so unpredictable. It can bring so much joy and yet at the same cause so much pain. My heart goes out to both of them...

I love stories that have a musical backdrop. I love anything to do with music! Thank you for writing this! And thank you Kiya, for giving Shiza this idea 😊

Looking forward to the next update! :) xx

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rukuswasthika

@rukuswasthika

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

this is awesome.i am eagerly waiting for the next part

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Seeta

@LadyR

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

I loved the way you described her bicycle ride to her lesson, I cried when I read she could no longer play due to the pain and instantly thought she may have Parkinson's.

It truly is a condition that takes over your life, it is rare in young people but dies happen, Khushi is married to a wonderful guy , I am glad she experienced that happiness , my baby sister has Parkinson's and we cry with her her, as she wants to get married, be loved...we try to do everything we can to help her be independent but it's not always that easy but she had a strong zest for life...

Really beautifully written...

Look forward to part two

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dilectus

@dilectus

Navigator

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Very nice!!! Waiting eagerly for next part!!

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Peda

@Peda

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Thanks so much for the pm.

I will be reading this with trepedation because after reading part one I can already feel the heart strings unwinding...is this going to be a tear jerker or a hapily ever after?

I really enjoyed it though.

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PhoenixTears

@PhoenixTears

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Thank you for writing such beautiful and heartening story.. Never knw anything about this disease and I pray to god to give such love and support to anyone who suffers from this or any disease. Brilliant work 👏👏👏

Edited by PhenoixTears - 11 years ago

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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

The beginning was so carefree and full of life..and the end so poignant.

I really hope Khushi makes it through this episode! She is so brave, to go suffer through so much and to be so young...

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Amazing part updt next part soon thanx for pm

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

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Truly I applaud you for being bold enough to write out of the box. Not many authors will attempt to write stories that are not warm and fuzzy, but you do it and depict it so brilliantly!

Edited by ssyahoo - 11 years ago