ArHi TS: Perceptions. *Part 2. Pg 25* (Completed) - Page 18

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Posted: 11 years ago
kabhi kabhi dil kehta hai k comment kar. ..
seriously this is something which can only be done by you. its 11.20 pm. and I read and reread this TS fir minimum 10 times.. Firstly I read this part for 2 times fir your note for two times...fir I didn't understand. . scratches head and read the first part again. .and then reread both parts and grinned. .how you manage to give surprises vey all the time...fir part mein sab show jaisa lag raha tha. . I thought you must be erasing that bad memory of show. . but then to you toh in this part rock it..when I started reading it I thought ye kya hai. .. but then. ...ohh RSP. ..aapko hug karne ka mann kar raha...its so innovative. .see this is the reason I am telling to write...

khushi as bade baap ki beti and arnav chota sa enployee.. ipk ka season two banta to ye concept kitna sahi rehta nahi?.. I love k you gave shashi a strong role here. . and n.k buaji amma side pe...Anjali yahan bhi.. shyam bhi..oh in Sabke beech a fighting over his emotions Arnav..same Arnav but in a different outfit. . I loved it bas!! marvellous! I love those lines. . still wali. <3

perceptions. .wow!

I never nag you to write. .kyunki muje nag karna nahi aata. .but in my heart I always wish k you write ArHi FFs..but I also know k Real life bhi hoti hai ..aur Sapno k duniya mein rehna possible nahi hai but do give us surprises like this. ..(main Patanahi kya likhi ja rahi hu)

*stands up and claps*
I know ye clumsy tha..


p.s I told you k meri commenting ability kamzor ho gyi hai..

p.p.s dekha kitni jaldi comment kiya...

its 11.42pm now

:)
abb pata chala Z kispe gyi hai ;)


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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok! This is not what i expected!

I read the first chapter again after reading this! So... thats why she was calculating the daily expenses...And he had actually married her for his di but for a totally different reason!
I have to tell u this...It was a bit hard for me to accept it first that Arnav is from Lucknow and khushi studied in Harvard in the start! Role reversal! ( You remember the offscreen masti when barun told ki-" It was khushi's fantasy to take Arnav down"... Thats what i felt when i read ki Khushi had actually studied in Harvard)But this is what that happens most of the time in real life.

It was a total relief when Shashi told Arnav that he wanted him to marry his daughter...

Loved the way u brought up their dialogues in the middle...It was confusing but nice! And the end was very cute and relieving...

So whats next. An SS?

~S

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Posted: 11 years ago
U surprise me every time u write...this time was no different...I wud never guessed it out...but enjoyed it so much...
Thank u for this story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww so that's the story behind the denial...intresting.

Khushi loves her Arnav soo much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
you just left me in a dazzle with this update. only one word fits perfectly and its MAGICAL
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Posted: 11 years ago
It took me by surprise and it's freaking awesome!
Sach me Alag hi duniya me chali gai
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update!!! Loved the update, it is totally different from what I thought the ending would be. I love it 😊
Please start a new story dp soon !!!!!'
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow...
Superb...
I really loved it coz I didn't expect this twist...
Brilliant...
👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow... what a 180 degree twist in story...
when i read that khushi is rich.. i reread the story thinking that maybe i read wrongly..

amazing...superb..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Fantastic update 👏
Love khushi and her pure unconditional love for Arnav. She knew Arnav's all conditions when she was falling for him. she was daughter of Shashi for whom happiness and peace matters, money cannot compete in any aspect of life. And he teach this lesson to his kids as well that's why for khushi love matters.
love the way you connected present with past.
I feel sad for Arnav, he fell in love with khushi but he thought he wasn't worth for it. He compared love with money, status and luxuries and it was because of his values and morals he was taught and learned by observing his middle class society.
I love that khushi didn't accept any more pain in their marriage and love without any specific reason and initiated step to speak out her heart as her right as a wife.
Love the end.
I enjoy a lot reading this story.
Brilliant story line.👍🏼

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