ARSHI OS: What You Deserve - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
this is brilliant, i absolutely loved it! am feeling a little bloodthirsty and evil at how much i enjoyed arnav telling di to go live with her shyamji but she really deserved it, and the response she got from him 😈 u have a wonderful touch when it comes to writing about complex, deep, layered emotions, u conveyed what everyone, and especially arhi, were feeling so beautifully. i always wanted the truth of their marriage to be out and i'm so glad arnav finally saw what he needed to do to restore her image and her honour, and that khushi will start to get everything she truly deserves from him from now on 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
You wrote it so well.i liked it very much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Very good👍🏼
Wish the actual story waslike this
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
The story was sooo soo sooo awesome. Flawlessly written. Excellent execution.
You writee sooo good. You should continue writing and please send me pm of your awesome work too 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Superb OS
Hope we would get to see such strong revelations n decisions in Our IPK too ... Especially the dumb Anjali deserved this for ditching her own brother n believing that good for nothing scumbag..
Loved how Arnav prooved khushis innocence n truth In front of everyone..loved how strongly n intelligently you have portrayed Arnav Singh Raizadas characters... Which we didn't get to see ever in later episodes of IPK
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76
Such a sweet os. I didn't know how I didn't look at it forthis long
So sweet and touching, beautiful
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77
so beautifully written . loved it to the core 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78
Awesome OS
Loved it
Riazada's n Mrs Jha deserved it

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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Amazing OS. This is just what should've happened. The quote at the end got me thinking. Yes, you 'say' you have forgiven, to get peace. But there is no question of forgiveness when you are hurt and shattered. That event has already occured. The mirror is broken. You just live trying to accept your fragmented self.
Too much funda right...? But I have always wondered, as a fictional character, Khushi accepted all the abuses. But a real human being, a real daughter, a real wife, a real daughter-in-law cannot take so much. One day she will break. And then you will be left with only a very cautious and self protective person.

I have to give it to the makers of the serial that for most part of the serial, they kept the reactions of the characters realistic. Arnav deserved Khushi's forgiveness, because his apology was genuine. He didnot camouflage his need for her. In his own way, showed in his actions and reactions that he truly loved her and considered family.

Only a true apology will get a true forgiveness. An amazingly written OS. 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Awesomeee
I just loved it
Very long and the perfect thing what my heart wanted to see in the serial but it never came
loved the way Arnav supported Khushi and just took selective members for their wedding and rituals!
❤️

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