||ArHi SS LOST||A dark concept||16+|Prt 6&7 PG15 UPD||

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*The story didn't contain graphical content.Few events might be violent*


Prologue

Her hand raised to the curtains.She move them aside ,letting the light spread into the dark room.Her eyes glassy,face expressionless.She watch wistfully at rays.

Her heart may be deserted but may be still a flicker of emotion present in the depth of her organ.May Be a hope!


But Hope for what??


She lost,Lost everything yet nothing.

Her eyes move to the sleeping form of the person.Her hand moved to the knot of the sheath with securely held her form.The form which has been abused.

She sat beside him and stare at his face.This person is her husband.Everyday he is loving her.Trying to make her live again.Trying to know the reason behind her lifeless soul.

But can she share with him,her life,her sorrow.Probably never!!!

As her mind scream never.The flicker of emotion that raised in her eyes ,Lost.





-INDEX-

Part 1

Part 2

Part 3


Part 4

Part 5

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Maria151994 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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The concept sounds good, can't wait to read more 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Gasps*
*Fangirls*

*Fixes her non-existent glasses*

EEP! Blossom sis! You're writing a new story! <3 This was so beautifully written! You amaze me with such short but electrifying updates. I wish I can write like that.

I think the girl is Khushi...waiting for more! Congrats on the new one..update soon! :) x
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very intriguing prologue
Looking forward to read the story.
Pm me it's next update
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"Part 1"

Expectations.This word seems to be nothing for her.She saw her reflection in water.It is blur.A laugh erupt her mouth ,just like her life.
She closed her eyes for moment composing herself ,look at watch 10 PM...

Quickly she came to their room.Washing her face,She wear an elegant saree.Giving herself a last look she move downstairs for arranging food for him.


*****

He took a deep sigh as the driver finally stop ,finally home sweet home.His mind scream.

Removing his Blazer ,his hands move to his tie.But stops abruptly feeling two hands moving around his neck to untie his tie.A satisfied smile crept on his face.Her touch felt heavenly.He held those hand and gently made her stand in front him.

His heart churned as he saw her looking like a fresh flower.He smiles softly at her.

For the husbands seeing their wife refresh when they came from office is delightful but not for him.Reason?Simply cos she always try to represent herself perfect when she already is.


He only wanted to know why?


"Ji did you not like something about me?"

He looked down at her,she quickly look down.Like a typical.He held her by her shoulder and make her sat beside him on sofa.


Its still a long way knowing his wife!



*******

Kushi as usual sat beside him like dutiful wife.Hearing to his day routine.She is tired and wanted to sleep.But it is sin for her sleeping before her husband taught by some one.

"Ae chal wake up.How dare you sleep before your husband came"A women throw a hardly 16 year old off the chair.Her head hit the hard floor.

A distinct memory erupt in her mind sending shiver down her spine.

***

Arnav was speaking while eating the diner.His one hand was still on her lap.He felt a sudden jerk in her posture.

Leaving the food he asked a mentally absent kushi"Are you fine kushi"

This definitely bought her out her memory lane.Quickly nodding down she mumble "Sorry"

Arnav felt irritated at her sorry.But what can he do .If he ask what will happen to her she will become silent.As if she is talkative his heart shouted.


**************

After changing into night cloth he sat on the bed and wait for kushi to come with his coffee.
As kushi enter into the room and kept his coffee on the table.She stands and rubbed her back feeling extremely tired.

"Tired much"She turn around hearing husky voice.She quickly look down in fear...And shook her head.

*******

She sungle closer to his form as his heart beat providing soothing effect on her senses.But like all other nights sleep were far away from her.How can she sleep when faded vissions haunt her.

A girl around 16 years sitting on bed covered with roses.She was afraid hell afraid of new poeple.A man which was nearly of her father age enter into the room.With out a delay he removed his clothes and move closer her.



Kushi moved badly on the bed as she saw his hand moving on that child body.That child was shouting asking for some one as his teeth piercing her skin.


Suddenly kushi felt breathless as that abuses that little girl innocence.That girl stop breathing and fell on bed.She stared at kushi with void eyes..He killed her soul.


Kushi's eyes open but her breath chocked.She try to takke breath.But was not able to.After few minutes she stop trying and let her body fall into darkness.Void darkness.




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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing part
plz continue soon
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Now that's scary... Much scary..
Too many questions are rising in my mind ..
Was khushi that child .. Was She married before...
Why she is not willing to share it with arnav
Thanks for pm
Hopefully next update woukd clear some of my questions...
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic update
OMG poor khushi she was married at such a young age and suffered from torture. She is now married to Arnav but she can't trust Arnav who love her the way she is but she makes herself presentable because she don't to suffer the pain and domestic torture again. She is a girl with trust issues.
Arnav want to know the reason of khushi's weird behavior and i hope he soon find about it and help her out of her depression.
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing update 👏👏
Loved it 😛
OMG Khushi was being married first at age of 16
Poor she suffer so much
That's why she didnt believe on Arnav's love
Pls update next part soon 😊

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