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Oh god! What now!!!
See i had properly framed my comment in my mind! What point m gonna rit, what things i will highlight! N as arnav bellowed Move to khushi, everything else got removed from my mind!!!
Okay i didnt get what exactly happened in the end! So khushi had gone deep into woods where she heard the sound of the approaching helicopter, then she manged to come bk n see anxious arnav with the pilot? N then arnav places her n shouts move rit? Arnav came bk?? N where did this helicopter come from n most importantly why? Left us at a cliffhanger sandy! Not good ya!!
Ok i loved the begining of the chapter! That first bit was superb! Their union, them dicovering each other slowly, their making love, in those few lines you described all these things so beautifully!
As for their love making , it was wild! I am tht is the only world i can come up! N i litrlly laughed out aloud at arnav 's fondling of khushi's mounds! God it seemed to be as if he is playing basketball with them! Bouncing/ squeezing/ rolling and moving them in all possible directions!!
N you know where khushi asks Arnav about his girl count! Arnav simply dismissed her saying only she mattered! So arnavji even wen only she mattered then what business you had dating n sleeping with other women! I am assuming he has not been celibate for the past 3-4 yrs or so! N if he has been then hats off!
N one more thing i have noticed! Here n in most of the stories on this forum, n in novels too! Arnav or the alpha male protagnist is always a player, they have olympic winning record in dating girls!N those girls really dont matter! N the heroine is 99pc times virgin! Or having pre marital only with the love of his life!!With the guy being her first n last love! Now why is that so??I guess somewhere in our minds the character of a woman is still set, out perception hasnt changed!
Sandy it is nothing related to ur fiction! Its something that i always think wenever i read this 'they never mattered thing'!
Ok i guess i digressed!!!
Anyway coming back to the action thrills that you gave us at the end of the chapter, will this change the course of their lives? Is it some wild animal behind her? The man eating tiger of kumaon? Eagerly waiting to read the next part!
Loved the chapter!!
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
