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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-10

arre waah...kya baat hai...she is truly Jr. MSK...she did nicely with that Tara, but god how rude she was with the doll and than that last stroke she gave to her...i was all 🤣

iss tara ki besharmi ki koyi hadd hi nahi hai yaar...now meera is understanding and all, but hope that her trust and patience doesn't break in the future..

yeh kamiya hates maan, but now she is planning differently to take the reins I wonder

Love of Maaneet is just getting stronger with every passing day...feels nice to see them connected emotionally and physically😉, i know now I sound besharam😆😆

Past...yeh ho kya raha hai...well even I was shocked, but little less than all reading him lifting her like a dool...thats so cute and he feeling her pain too being far...oh Geet she is so helpless, loves him and wanna forget him too but can't

but one soul, Adi, is excited for Maan not knowing J, restlessness and helplessness of 3 people...hope something good is to happen seeing his positivity.
Awww Maan behaving in that way anger, smile and J is so different and I am loving it..felt cute

Yaar seems like they met when Maan was 18 and maybe he was addicted to drugs at that time too and so he doesn't remember that phase and Geet...well that is what I could understand, hope I am getting it right😛

oh well I guess he is J, just that he is good at not showing his emotions, except his atttitude😉

Hope prem isn't falling for her and now her gestures around him hope doesn't send any wrong signals to him aur waise toh ke bahut hi gussa aur J hai

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Part-11


Antara is back with her nasty behaviour, wasn't Tara enough for shamelessness that she too joined but yeah antara seems more shameless😆, hope they don't become partners in plotting...gosh the revelation of Maaneet marriage, the events leading to it was unexpected..I mean I wasn't expecting to come out this way😛😆...but wowww
ohhhooo Sasha is useful for something...gosh yeh Maan bhi too much hai...its kinda his revenge too for what all she has done to Geet to separate her from Maan's life...but then knowing a glimpse of her, feels good too..but I wonder what her come back will do too😳

love their romance and passion, but yup they really need to careful with kids around and knowing Mariah's state they can't take any risk

Aag dono taraf hai...both Jealous..yeh prem ka mujhe kuch samaj nahi aata..is he just a frnd or he loves her..well Geet doesn't have any feelings for him, but yeah when he is around Maan is defo around that makes her unconcern to everything around😳😆

so Annie is the one Geet was getting J with...but this J and restless anger don't want them to have dinner together...but yaar Annie Khurana has gone deaf, good going dear

Possessive ladies gonna act soon I guess, Tara, Antara and Sasha😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-12

Never felt so good to see Sasha in a story😛😆. Loved her calmness and friendly nature with one and all and the way she was happy seeing Maan happy and gelled with all the Khuranas😳

so she is back for good and has resumed duties...waiting to read more in that regard or say Sasha-Antara face-off

Past mein past...uff when will Maan realize how and when he have seen her

Awww hate it when he is so rude to her, but can't help it, after all its MSK whose mode changes like hell...liked their silent understanding and comfort, thought its tough for one to hide the pain and one the restlessness or helplessness

woohooo she took shots, i wonder whats gonna happen now..but liked the softness of him but till when😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-13

Woww cuties in the office with their mom

Uff Antara..how cruel she is...aww she slapped that little girl😡, but got what she deserved with chotu pataka😉 though her warning is scary and the way she was looking at bhoomi, I am scared

ohhhooo Maan all romantic and then made Antara burn to ashes too

Love Geet's attitude around Antara

Good to Mariah gonna start a new phase of her life...hope she does cross it bravely with her parents help

Past is very interesting too...the way they are fighting with their feelings is nicely written dear

I wish this comes to an end and they express and know things of their sweet past

Can't see Geet's pain and Maan's confusion or unawareness


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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-14

Love the sweet family moments...everyone so happy and content and in so much love

ahhaaa...Geet had thought over Antara's reactions, but hope she remembers it and discusses it with Maan

Their romance was hot as ever😉

past...ohhooo...so Maan isn't totally unaware of her, he did have dreams of Geet, but not clear ones...just a memory kinda of thing

Seems like destiny/fate just wanna bring them together and want to see them like that forever and thus something or other is coming and making them face each other in a new light every time and intensifying their feelings😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part-15

Start of the update with total droolinggg😉

ahhaaa...Tara is back and fierce, but not at all easy to deal with Maan. Whatever he said is true, but I am worried now as Dev is around and this mad girl gonna take advantage of it for sure😡

Antara is worse than I thought...oh do I hate her, yup a lot more now knowing her desires

Well yes i thought it would be Tara only that she would be meeting...gosh now 2 evils planning off...what will happen to maaneet...me worried

past...A drooly update huh...now Maan drooling her, tooo affected, possessive and J and determination...and to top it all anger and rage...deadly combo

ohh...I love Annie yaar😉😆

Annie-Maan is so frank and different...like that

Geet got zor ka jatka zor se at the end knowing the surroundings truly😳
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RECAP

PRESENT

Maan gave a small but genuine smile and closed his eyes.Geet went to bring the breakfast tray for him.Geet had decided something to do and she was very much determined of it as she was the half percent share holder of KC.Geet made Maan to have breakfast and made him sleep giving pain killers which he took making all kind of faces with Milk when she glared at him and threatened him to stuff it inside his mouth.

PAST

She dint wake hearing the sounds while he stood staring at her sleeping form.So innocent he thought...her angelic face which had the most beautiful smile..her almond eyes for which he was mesmerised made him stare at her lovingly.She was indeed cute and innocent.When she gets angry on that time she would turn more cute with wide almond eyes and fires spitting from it.This made him hardened more and he looked at her more lovingly.

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PART 19

PRESENT

Geet entered the KC with furious expression.Rumours abt Maan being seduced by Antara had reached the office staff and they were gossiping around abt that only.

When Geet entered then she heard their conversation and snarled at them,"Dont u have any work to do instead of gossiping around?Go back to ur work if u love ur job,move it!"

One of the staff spoke boldly to Geet,"Ma'am,we heard rumour that Antara and Maan sir...!"

Before he would complete he stopped seeing Geet's furious almond eyes.Geet came towards him and spoke calmly controlling every rage,"If u were in Maan's situation then what would u do?"

That man stammered and immediately shut his mouth feeling embarassed.True that people gossip around abt other's life but when it comes to their life then they become serious.

Geet spoke furiously,"Now listen to me carefully,Ur Maan sir came back to this company becoz of u guys.He dint wanted u to be jobless once again becoz of the stupidity Naintara and Kamiya did.He dint wanted u guys to be victims of their selfishness.But u guys still think abt him so cheap.What is my husband i know?U no need to ask me what is my husband.Its high time u stop bitching around and do some constructive work which earns u money and respect rather than gossiping around abt ur boss or else leave the job.U guys r need of the job in this reputed company to brighten ur future.We're not need of u,becoz if u leave then another will come...but for u..if u leave then nothing gonna come,just remember that!"

Geet glared at the man last time and entered Maan's cabin and made several important calls.That man walked away when all the staff started to point fingers towards him and started their gossip.

Sasha came inside and asked,"What u gonna do Geet?She's one of the client!We cant do anything!"

Geet said furiously,"That's why she's sitting on our head!Am not letting her sit on Maan's head once again!"

On that time Antara entered wearing very short skirt which was tightly fitted bulging her curves and her skinny body.Geet looked towards the exit of office where she saw Antara entering and ordered the very same peon to stop her.

Peon spoke politely blocking her way,"Ma'am,u r not allowed in this office!"

Antara was furious and snarled,"Who the hell r u to stop me?"

Peon spoke,"Its boss's orders!"

Antara was shocked and said,"What?How can he stop me?Dont he remember that am one of the client.Am gonna destroy his career,if he wont ask me sorry!"

But a strong voice came,"Then do that,go and destroy it!"

Antara spurn around and saw Geet standing with folded hands.Her eyes were spitting fire but her face was calm and in control.

Antara said dismissively,"Geet!"

Geet said in the very same tone,"Antara!"

Antara looked at Geet intently and studied her body language and spoke,"Look Geet,what u heard r...!"

Before she would complete her face was hit by some bundles of papers.Antara was shocked and looked down to get the papers.

Antara snarled holding the papers,"What the hell is that Geet?"

Geet said firmly,"Ur termination papers,Antara!U r no longer my client and u can continue ur works from some other architects or construction company.Ur compensations if we r unable to complete the works and ur character certificate where u cant able to get those constructions be completed in future.U have made ur company at loss Antara becoz of ur lust.U r making ur company's employees jobless.U r now nothing but a common person now becoz i have bought all ur company shares in my name.Now u and ur family r nothing but a beggars category...why am cursing beggars?They become beggars becoz of their fate but some ppl become beggars who not love the hard work.U r in that category,selfish beggar!Now get lost and face this world becoz this isnt the end of ur suffering!"

Antara was shocked hearing the lioness Geet.She never expected this side of Geet which exists inside her.She had woken the devil Geet by seducing her husband.On that time she got a phone and she received it.When she heard what the caller said then her ground slipped from her feet.

Antara kept back the phone and snarled,"What r u doing Geet?U filed a case against me from my own husband!What did u say to him that he's asking divorce from me?"

Geet turned and said,"Its high time he gets to know ur games...ur lust games if i have to speak clear!"

Antara came forward to slap but Geet held it and threw it aside and said,"Now police gonna come to arrest u,becoz i had taken restraining orders from the court to me and my family and most importantly Maan Singh Khurana against u Antara.I think u hv got the copy of court order this morning,yet u came here and u gonna pay for this.Sasha phone the police now!"

Sasha was very glad and was enjoying Antara's destruction.She informed the police and police came to arrest Antara.Antara shouted and screamed that she gonna destroy Geet's life but Geet only stood seeing her plights with blank expression.

When Antara was escorted by police Sasha said to Geet,"U r not the Geet which i saw when u joined this office for the first time!U r different...u r...!"

But Geet spoke cutting her words,"U thought me as scary kitten...who know only to be afraid and waits for others help in trouble!"

Sasha was a bit shocked and spoke,"I dint mean that...!"

Geet said softly,"U can say anything to me Sasha..dont be afraid!"

Sasha dint say anything but Geet went on turning towards the window where she saw Antara being dragged and press snapping photographs,"Sasha,i was always in danger from childhood and i always tried to face the problems rather than running away!In childhood,ppl tried to burn me alive in my house only,just becoz am a girl.I always thought that girls are the weak target to those lusty,greedy men.But Antara changed my opinion..she changed my POV entirely and made me trust that there r greedy and lusty women too like her...my experiences made me strong Sasha but i dint show my strong side to anyone...its my camouflage to shock numerous Antaras and Maan knows abt this.Now Antara's sins has been spilling from the flask...now her destruction is very near and for this situation she's the sole responsible."

Here Maan got up after a peaceful nap and his headache has been stopped.He yawned and looked around him to get Bhoomi was asleep in her crib.He wondered that why he dint heard her crying sessions out of hunger.But then thought that he was under the medicine.He got up and took a long hot shower and came back to wear a track and vest and walked outside his room.He went to kitchen to get some water when he saw Soumya preparing dinner.

Maan asked,"Mom,can u give me a glass of water?"

Soumya was shocked to see him there and asked,"What r u doing here beta?U need to rest go back to ur room!"

Maan said softly,"Mom,calm down!Am ok!My head isnt paining.I was hungry and thirsty so came to kitchen!Give me a glass of water first!"

Soumya poured some water to the glass and passed it to Maan.Maan gulped it and sighed feeling the coolness of the water and asked,"Where's Geet?"

Soumya said that Geet went to library to prepare for her lecture.Maan nodded and came back to the hall where a newsflash was flashing which Siddharth was watching intently with impressive eyes.Maan looked up and saw Antara being dragged.He was shocked and when he listened to the full news then he was more shocked and scared.On that time Geet entered the KM and gave a full dimple smile looking him fit and fine.

Geet said,"Hey baby...how r u?"

She hugged him and kissed his forehead when she felt the change then she looked up puzzled.

His eyes were scared and he dragged her towards the room and spoke,"What is going on Jaan?What's that news about Antara?"

Geet sighed and made him to sit and said,"Maan,let me handle this situation.U stay away from this one!"

Maan said with fear,"But Antara can do anything jaan!"

Geet said stroking his cheeks,"Dont worry!Nothing will happen to me!That's not fair,u look more sexy in this scary state.I dont like this!"

Maan immediately melted and pulled her on his lap and took her lips.He kissed her with immense love yet passionately.When they broke apart then they were breathless.On that time a pair of jingling anklets sound came and she slid from his lap and sat beside him when Mariah entered and ran to her father.

Maan lifted her smiling widely and pecked her forehead and asked,"Hey butterscotch,what did u do today?"Mariah spoke in tit bits,"School...games...breakfast...lunch...dinner...eat!"She meant that she went to kindergarten school.There she played games and before that she had breakfast and then lunch.Now she's hungry and have to have dinner.Maan smiled and asked abt that further when she said in tit bits once again while Geet left them to have hot shower and help her MIL in dinner.

PAST


Maan looked around and saw her note book open and he saw some word which is written repeatedly.He gave a closer look and saw the word which was "My Maan" Maan was shocked looking at it.He thought,"She thinks me as hers!"His heart swelled in pride looking at the word.From that moment he felt he gonna grab her and kiss her vigorously from lips to toes...from ankle to navel...from forehead to her breasts.He hardened immediately as if he gonna get satisfied.But most importantly he felt her love in those words.He felt like grabbing her and hiding her from the world and love her till she was sore...and then he would soothe her pain.He would wipe out the pain from those almond eyes...he would call her nick names..he would swallow all her cute tantrums...he would love to bear her tantrums...he would give her this world's happiness...he would grab her body and pull her towards him kissing those ruby plump lips with immense passion...he would feel her breathless and then he would supply his air inside her throat...he would say breathe my air honey...he would bite those slender neck which teases him and tantalizes him to grab it and mark it as his own by bruising it.He dint know what was happening inside him.But he wanted to grab her and love her there and then.He would coax her and coo her.He would pet her and milk her desires and he would eat her alive by his passion...he would give her this world's love which he's having inside his heart.His heart raced faster..he wanted to kiss her all over the body and love her for eternity...

With this imaginations he stood there staring at her hungrily when Geet stirred and lifted her sleepy head.She cutely rubbed her almond eyes and looked up to get Maan standing there.Geet was shocked and she squeaked with fear and fell off from her chair which she was moving back to stand.

Maan was alarmed and came forward speaking,"Careful Ms.Handa!"

Geet blinked when Maan stretched his hand to help her.She took it and once again current run down her spine.She took it and stood firmly still trying to compose herself.She was indeed dreaming abt him only and when he stood in front of her then she cant stop blushing furiously.Maan admired her rosy cheeks and try to suppress his smile.She was indeed looking more cute with those rosy red cheeks.Geet tried to calm herself but she felt that his thumb was rubbing the back of her hand.Geet stumbled keeping her feet on his feet and realising that it was his feet but he snaked his hand around her small waist and made her steady perfectly.Maan controlled his brewing desires and tried to compose himself as her back had rubbed his hardness.He was having imagination to take her from back.

He immediately wiped off those imaginations from his mind and spoke,"Are u alright Ms.Handa!What were u doing in my library?"

Geet was scared now as he gonna shout for using his things and spoke meekly,"I was writing thesis abt Kalidasa's Kumaara Sambhava Chapter 01.Am sorry sir i need to use ur library for my work.It wont happen further..sorry for using ur things...!"

Before she rant the sorry for hundredth time he kept his long finger on those petal lips.Geet was shocked feeling strong yet long white finger on her lip.She wanted to bit the pad of his finger but resisted.

Maan spoke gently,"Its ok,u can use my private library!In fact i was abt to suggest u this only in my next class but i guess Prem did that work.U r most welcome to this library Ms.Handa!But why were u sleeping here.If someone locked u here then what would happen?Its lucky that i saw lights or else i would too go locking my office.U need to be more careful Ms.Handa.Did u had ur lunch?"

Geet was abt to lie him but seeing his genuine concern she said the truth,"No!"

Maan was worried now,"U need to think abt ur appetite too Ms.Handa!How abt a delicious dinner in xyz hotel?"

Geet immediately refused,"Its ok sir,i will prepare something when i reach home.Dont be bothered!"

Maan said furiously,"Ms.Handa u can prepare midnight snack when u reach home and for that u need strength too.But right now u r really need of food so dont deny!"

Geet was scared seeing his sudden anger and he sensed too and calmed down immediately and stretched his hand and spoke,"Let me pamper u Ms.Handa!"

Geet was shocked hearing the word pamper from his mouth and he immediately took her soft hand and dragged her from the library.He locked his office and made her sit in the car and for safety measure he put the seat belt brushing his fingers on her soft skin.She blushed furiously feeling that tingling sensation.


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Awsommmiiieee dis is getting intrsting...well Antara got a gud lesson 4m tigress Geet...Maan was lil worried but Geet assured him...past was also sweet...waiting 4 dinner & Maan's pampering...well Sam's entry upcuming wndr wht is she lyk? Nxt chp sooon!!!
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Sherni GMSK.. wow that ***** had a taste of it :) ..

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