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Posted: 11 years ago
I loved this chapter...This Arnav teasing Khushi and amusing by her reaction is making me fall in love with him...He gifted her All things pink...
And Now I am going to call Sameer Daddy now...Such a loving caring and understanding father...Some incident,,most probably her mother's death has caused extreme effects on Khushi's personality...And Now I guess Arnav is going to change that...
He seems to have no problems with Khushi as much Khushi is having problems with his presence...or maybe he is good with pretense...But Sameer is trying his best to make these two behave in civil manner...:)
Khushi also has bouts of creativity or music in her dreams but since she hates music so she is forcing herself tO not go on that road...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mujhe pata kya lg raha hai...Yeh K is competition mein Arnav or Khushi Duet gaayen gay...
Yeh feeling aa rahi hai ander se...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
well read Tune into Me in one go... awesome story... arnav is in music but is out of ideas and is buying music and releasing it on his name.. their fathers are best buddies and were into music.. however this is not the case with arnav-khushi.. arnav is in music but khushi is against music.. however she secretly do write lyrics following her dreams of some eyes.. which now she have got are eyes of arnav.. khushi hates arnav too.. will be looking forward to her reasons to know why she hates music and arnav... she doesn't even spare her father.. who is very sweet man.. but there have to be reasons for every behaviour.. it is beautiful story and thanks for the pm.. i am grateful to you for sending me the link.. looking forward to know more.. now arnav have come to know khushi hate music.. he will try to get into the depth to know the reasons for her hatred and why is she become one which she is.. loved the story till now.. 😃


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Posted: 11 years ago
Dedddeee Kahan Ho...
*sings*
Mujh Ko Aawaz De
Chup Gaye Ho Sanam
Tum Kahaan Main Yahaan
Tum Kahaan Main Yahaan...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Tune Into Me:

11: An Insinuation, An Innate:

"How can you possibly hate music Khushi? You of all people?" he found his voice low and inclining completely away from his senses that were probably asking him to shut up.

"And why am I even answerable to you?" she stood high on her heels, with her hands going on her hips even as her eyes continued to look at him, yet not meeting his gaze right in the eye. He caught that and his curiosity increased.

"You no longer do music?" he continued to inquire ignoring her disinterest in the topic. He then saw her roll her eyes and gather herself with answers as she looked up to meet his questioning gaze yet again.

"No.." she stated this time not blinking an eye.

"Don't play---??"

"--No"

"Guitar"

"No"

"That grand piano of------?'

"---No" she was cutting him off before he could complete and that just annoyed him, may be for the first time since he had arrived in this place. Arnav was annoyed, beyond a limit and was even furious. He still has to figure out what exactly is making him furious though.

"Don't even sing?"

"No...NO...NO!" she announced using her hands to support her answer.

"Cathy would never want you to..."

"Excuse me!" she interrupted him her voice sharply cutting him off. "There is no need to get my mother into this. This is my decision. And I'm sure she would have wanted me to do whatever that makes me happy. And I chose this!"

"Staying away from music?" he raised an eyebrow.

"Hating it!" she corrected him quite defiantly and he had to step back letting out that exasperated breath.

"You are incorrigible as ever!" he snapped, anger filling itself into his eyes as he shot one last disapproving look at her before turning around and walking away into the university.

**

Arnav-Khushi @ 14:

Yeh Tumhari Meri Baatein
Hamesha Yunhi Chalti Rahen

Yeh Hamari Mulakatein
Hamesh Yunhi Chalti Rahen

Beeetein Yunhi Apne Sare...

"Stop...stop Maddy! Just stop! That's pathetic singing!" Arnav exclaimed putting his guitar away while Aman's hands stilled in air at his sudden outburst. Khushi swallowed the further words that she had intended to sing and look to her side at him completely annoyed with his interrupting.

"It's Khushi, and pathetic? Did you just call my singing pathetic? Arnav seriously??"

The school music room was filled with musical instruments, the white surroundings filling in with grey electrical equipment forming their effective background, as Khushi stood in the center area, with her mike in hand, Aman standing behind her at drums and Arnav alongside her with his guitar which was now placed away.

"Khushi doesn't suit you, Maddy does and yes, that was pathetic singing, look at the pace of the song, it's so damn slow!"

"Exactlly, and that would not be the case if you were giving the right rhythm Arnav, what the hell have you been doing holding that guitar? Counting the strings?"

"What rhythm do you want me to give? It's not happening! The tune you chose is too slow and...and there is something missing. Even he wasn't able to tune in the drums...look at him, he looks so lost! You scared him with your singing Maddy..." Arnav said with his tongue in cheek and walked towards Aman to stand beside him.

"I was giving the beat Khushi..." Aman answered quite perplexed at being targeted as he made sure to keep his eyes away from Khushi who was now looking at him pointedly.

"He was trying to, but it's not happening, tell her that Aman, it's alright." Arnav pushed him more by slapping his back and Aman for a moment nervously looked between the two fire brands in the room. "Uh, its kind of dragged, but we can, we can work it, we can you know work something together..."

"Argh! You tell me this now!? Like seriously? How much more irresponsible can you both even get?" Khushi yelled throwing her hands in air.

"And you are very responsible to make such pathetic tune?"

They were now standing on either side of the drum equipment effectively sandwiching Aman between them, as they continued to throw daggers at each other.

"Huh! I at least made the tune and these are pretty good lyrics!"

"Of course the lyrics are good, Cathy helped you with those but it's the tune that's not working!"

"If you were not happy with the tuning, why didn't you tell me earlier? We have been practicing the same thing since a week now, and one day ahead of the competition you have the nerve to tell this now?"

"I thought we can work it somehow but this is just not happening! Something is missing in this.."

"What is missing Arnav? What?? Why not say what's missing, so we can try and incorporate it?"

"I don't know okay? This tune sucks! And I can't do it, it's not working for me"

"You are impossible Arnav! I sat with mom, made the tune sitting with it completely for two whole days, gave you a readymade melody, and made arrangements for the competition, while all you have to do is to sing it, perform it. After practicing for good five days, you chose this day to complain about everything? Why am I even stuck with you every single time!?"

"Stuck with me? Why don't you ask the music academy that somehow seems to be thinking we will get them the prizes every year!"

"Huh! It's not the music academy you jerk! It's you! You deliberately chose to get stuck with me in every damn situation. Because, its time you face the fact Arnav. You can't do anything alone! Me, my home, my mom, my music lessons...you are just stuck with me everywhere, Deliberately!!!"

"----don't give yourself such high importance, you self-obsessed geek!"

""Arnav you..."

"Okay time up, time up!" Aman finally stood up from his place after spending good few minutes of being the spectator of the verbal tennis match that was happening and Arnav continued to look at her, anger filling his nerves as her last words continued to increase his fury even more. He gave her one last angry glare, his brown orbs doing the effective job of conveying his wrath, before turning around to walk in purposeful long strides exciting himself from the room.

**

She always did that. He contemplated as his gaze was attuned to the guitar strings in his hand. It has been her own way of ending an argument. Like they say, hit in the right area where it hurts the most and she never failed to do that. Not that it affected him the way it should, somehow it didn't. But it angered and disturbed him. That much, he cannot deny. They were stuck with each other and, something or the other has always just driven them to be together in music. He had accepted it while she always found it difficult to accept. More so, they find it difficult to get along well, at least well enough to sit and be able to make one good melody.

Rage filling in his senses completely, he hit the chord of the guitar causing it to utter an angry node. And just like that, a lead riff started playing in his mind and within moments he equipped himself with the guitar and the keyboard, incorporating it into a rhythm and thus formulating a riff to the actual tune that Khushi has made. He was completely indulged in it for the next ten hours because of which he found himself rushing to the competition venue the next morning running almost an hour late to the given time. And when he finally reached, he instructed his driver to get the electrical music equipment that he brought along with him and walked inside quickly to find Khushi.

"What the hell Arnav? We lost our chance to go on the stage..." He ignored her completely walking ahead of her directly to Aman and gave him the bag that he brought with him.

"Record the riff in that keyboard and set the tempo..." he ordered and Aman nodded.

"Whats going on here?" Khushi walked in the green room almost marching around Arnav trying to figure out what was happening while Arnav completely ignored her setting the guitar and helping Aman to arrange his drums.

"Arnav!" Khushi yelled and he chose the exact moment to pause and turn back to look at her.

"What?"

"Our chance is long gone..."

"I already talked to the event manager, we will be called in again.."

"Oh, so didn't think twice to use your reputation again! Great! And all this for what? For the tune that you hated?"

"Nope, for the tune that I modified" he stated and turned to Aman. "Did you record the riif?"

"Yes Bhai.."

"Play it..."

And just as Khushi waited quite impatiently, the soft rhythm started playing from the electronic keyboard and Arnav took his position with guitar starting to play it along with the rhythm. All Khushi did was watch, with an undefined disorientation embracing her. He could tell that she was impressed, yet, he can see the rebel was still quite evident in her stance.

She hated it when he changes any of her tunes, but he ended up doing it every single time. The basic tune is what she formulates, but he had to bring in amendments to make it sound the perfect symphony which they had always managed to create, together, quite oblivious to each other.

"Would you please come and sing instead of playing a statue there?" he said after a pause.

"The slow tune doesn't fit this..."

"Exactly! So you will fasten the pace a little and modify the words to sound slightly western, thin your voice and still sing in the same tune..."

"Why don't you get your own singer who would listen to your orders?" she rolled her eyes.

"I wish I could Maddy, give your ego some rest and let's get done with this; I know you can do it"

Ye tumhari meri baatein

Hamesha yun hi chalti rahein

Ye hamari mulakaatein

Hamesha yun hi chalti rahein

Beetein yun hi apne saare din raat

Baaton se nikalti rahe nayi baat

Phir wahi baatein leke geet koi hum likhein

Jo dil ko haan sab ke dil ko chhoo le

Baatein suron mein yun hi pighalti rahein

Baatein geeton mein yun hi dhalti rahein

To her amusement, when they took the stage after about a few minutes, the words played along with the new rhythm quite perfectly and she found herself slipping into the song as her voice played with the nodes. And that's when he joined, humming along, nodding his head to the flow, multitasking with the guitar as the electronic keyboard played its part with Aman working on drums efficiently, completely in sync with one another.

Ooo..Ooo

Na na na na na na

Ooo...

Geeton mein ye haan humko khushiyon se hum saja dein

Jo sune kahe wo hum se gaao na


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Note: Riff here precisely means the starting music that plays before the lyrics of the song starts.. Its the rhythm that forms the base of the whole song... runs in the background throughout the song..

If you want to read while listening, to both versions, (only Khushi's and the actual song) read it here... Tune Into Me-11





Edited by dedeepyalove - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
They fight from start hehehee
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res!
After an eternity m on the first page!

Unres

Wonderful chapter dedee!!!

Arnav couldnot believe that khushi hates music! Not even dislikes but hates music! A girl who used to breathe music now dsnt want anything to do with it! Is it only bcoz of her mother's death or there are some other reasons for it too???

N i looovvvedd their flashback! These flaskbacks constantly highlight that both do best when they work as a team! A winning combination, which is incomplete without the other!
Though in terms of temper they brought out the worst in them but in music they brought out the best in each other!!!
N that good for nothing Aman was also there??
Is it one reason that Arnav stopped making music, as nobdy else could bring out his out of him n mediocrity he didnt like?
N this khushi always seem to be shouting ,screaming at arnav, hurting him but still is found in his vicinity only?
Now why is that khushi!!!

N loved both the melodies dedee but who was singing the solo khushi's bit? You? Its quite well sung!!

Loved the chapter dedee!!! At usual it was beautifully written!!
Lets see if arnav n khushi can drag each other out of their personal hells!!
Edited by Nandz - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
A beautiful musical update!!!!!
Read it while listening to the loveliee song ...N absolutely loved Arnavs changed version ...
How beautifully these both complete each other to bring out the best music is quiet impressive !!!!
So again Arnav is gng to need khushi for this competition but how is he ever gng to bring back that old melodious khushi who loved music soo much... Waiting eagerly to know
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Posted: 11 years ago
What a beautiful song, just heard it on your blog. Is this a movie song??
Interesting update. Keep wondering what circumstances made Arnav and Khushi what they are today.

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Posted: 11 years ago
wondering wt went wrng btwn arhi
nice updt

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