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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Live-life

Omg...That was a fantabulous update (I overuse this word a lot when I comment so don't mind okay 😉)

From the first word to the last...I have to confess I was hooked! LIke literally hooked!
I mean from the first scene to the last was like totally fantabulous! 😃 I love the addition of Mincecraft in this one...when bored with life play mine craft! That's what people in my class do...24 hours bas Mince craft...I mean get a life already peeps! 😆
SO the phone call was really touching though...Arjun...trying to cover his emotions...and he even is good at it..but people like me instantly know when he does that! So Kab tai bachoge bahcu! Well the reunion of the three friends would be interesting to read because..hehe they are all my favorite! 😛 Do you read minds or something??! 😆 The last part when Asad said "Take care of yourself" I was like Oh god!!!! Can you guys hug already this is getting too emotional!...And mujhe apnea tears control bout mushkil hota hai! 😆 Hopefully when they meet they will hug "fingers crossed"
Hmm...Now coming to the ETF...oh god! I miss them like hell everyday..these Fan fictions are the only way to keep them alive! But Arjun is getting more suspicious of Rathore now...heheh..Old habits die hard!😆 Perks of being an Asian/and more importantly Arjun suryakant Rawte! 😉
Now coming to the girlies...well it wasn't like the typical girl talk...hehe Thank god! But It was nice to see Zoya's worry for her friend..that's what friends are for na! 😳 And awww the convo between Riya and Asad and Zoya was sooo adorable...hehe I especially love the part where Riya tells Asad that he would even build a castle for Zoya! So cute!...Pure love..hayeee!
And then I especially love the part where hE goes "Tumse kcuh baat karni hai"
Zoya: "Kya hua"
Asad: "Ye hua"
And then kisses her And i AM just like "Am I in heaven?" It was such a romantic kiss hayeee!!!! ☺️☺️ I love love!
Well this was definitely a fantabulous update Ra.one! Hyaeee! oh and I love how Asad knows that the minute he asked Arjun to come to his house he knew that Zoya's security was in safe hands...it's called trust! 😃 Friends forever!
*Khushi ke aasoon*

What a great update...and excise me for commenting now...just so u know I have read all the parts..u know na that sometimes a big Dq! 😆
Oh btw...I love you Ra.one...and U know that!
🤗❤️ so much that I was about to shoot you today 🤣
But oh well had ek friend kamina hota hai!
Thanks for the pm and pleas eplease please
continue soon!
😃 Love u again!


Don't mind it at al! Hahaha, I am a huge Minecrafter. It's one of my favourite games of all times. So yeah, I do need to get a life. Oho, how can I forget the Arjun emotion expert. Hahaha.
Don't think I read minds but if I did then trust me, you would be the first to know. Well hugging over the phone is scientifically impossible but in imagination, anything is possible.
I know, I miss the team and the show itself. Agreed!
Of course, Arjun never misses anything so Rathore's actions are hard to miss.
Well my dear I am so glad that you are liking it and trust me the whole scene between Riya, Asad, and Zoya is also my favourite. It's just so commonly sweet. Hahaha, lots of people are liking that scene.

Chod na, even if you hadn't read the last updates I wouldn't care. You're a sweetheart and I simply love hearing your point of view. Oh definitely a big DQ. Hahaha.

That I know! Love you too! Pyaar ki had maine dekh hi li. Itna pyaar ke jaan bhi le sakti ho. 😆 Will continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

I'm guessing you enjoyed it.

Originally posted by: Shubh007

Awesome update...👏

Really like it...😊


Thanks!

Originally posted by: ABBY92

First of all, I Love Raz, so yeah, I did read your note.

Now, to the update. Can't believed Asad used to be best friends with Arjun and Sameer. I'm looking forward to the time when ETF will come over to the Khan Mansion and realise all of them are interconnected cause of one single case !!


Haha, thanks for reading the an and for the comment.

Originally posted by: Ta33iiE

Omg Sameer Arjun Riya Zoya and Asad under one roof - it'll be explosive - can't wait! :)


Will continue soon!

Originally posted by: noesha

I just looove your writing :D thanks for the pm!

I Love Raz haha ;)


Thank you! Hahaha, thanks again for reading the AN!

Originally posted by: -LiveLoveLaugh-

Thanks for replying to my comment, Raz! (I SO love your name. Sounds so cool. 😆)

Anyways, I liked the update! The friendship-thing between Asad-Sameer-Arjun? That was so sad. I wonder what'll happen when they meet again.
Loving Zoya and Riya, again! 😃
"You know Asad, when we were younger, Zoe always used to say, "If I ever get married, it will be to an architect." I used to ask her why and she would reply that if she married an architect, he would build her the house of her dreams," Riya told him. Asad chuckled and glanced at Zoya who had turned slightly pink and had shoved Riya as she was laughing.
^This was SO cute. For some reason, I just adored this part. ❤️
Really enjoyed Asad-Zoya, too. How they spent time together at the end, aw how cute. It's the little things like that, that make me happy. Ugh, I sound like some philosopher or depressed person or something. Just forget I said anything. 🤔 😆
And yesss, #KaBhiSwag. I just made that up right now. Do you think that would trend if I started it? 😆 'Cause everyone's all like "#WeSupportKSG" or "WeStandByKSG", and I'm just like, "#ISupportMyself. Oh. Awkward." But I miss KaBhi like hell, and I just feel so sad and I wish they'd come back and I miss KSG's short hair and I JUST MISS THEM, OKAY? 😭 🥺 I'll never get over it. *Sigh* But I'm happy this story is KaBhi. 😳 *runs off to go cry in the corner* 😆
Ugh, now I sound too overdramatic. What am I gonna do with myself? 🤢
Anyways, continue soon! 😃
-Fari. 😳 ❤️


I reply to everyone. Hahaha, you think so? I've never really liked my name that much but had to stick with it because of my lovely parents. You know what, I wonder what's going to happen too 😕.
Hahaha, I liked writing that part too. Best friends always spill your secrets to your boyfriend/fiance/husband whatnot.
No you don't sound depressed at all. Maybe quite philosophic but trust me, I go into my philosophic mode all the time. 😆
Oh defos it'll trend! If not, I'll trend it. You know with me ever so handy marshmallow bazooka. Oh don't worry, I know what you mean. Except I'm like #INeedToGetALife. 😆 I miss them too and that's why I said, my written works are only KaBhi, however, readers may wish to choose RaBhi but I'm fine with that as long as no one starts to get violent (I'm warning anyone who's thinking of getting violent. I've got a marshmallow bazooka and I ain't afraid to use it).
Lol, trust me. Sometimes being dramatic helps. You should see me when I'm stuck in line to get my morning coffee. Turn into a full fledged Drama Queen. 😆


Thanks dear!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

awsome update..

Continue soon..

Thanks 4 pm


Thank you!

Originally posted by: pinkerbell

superb part dear

loved ittt
thanks for the pm


Thanks!

Originally posted by: Ramlath

Lovely update...
Pls continue soon...


Thanks!

Originally posted by: QuboolHaiAsya

I love raz 😊
Nice upd!!
P.S Wen r u updating ethreal treasures??


Lol, thanks for readin the AN. Ethereal Treasures will update soon. Just been having some serious time constraints.


Saw!

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is amazing...

fabulous...
luv teh way hw concern is asad for zoya...
arjun n sameer will be coming n riya is also there...
very very interesting...
thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...


Thanks Jaz!

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen

Awsumm Raz..Read both parts in one go!! Loved it!! Aww..AsYa is sooo much in love..❤️❤️ Very Cute! Loved Riya-Zoya frndship too..Finally Riya arrives in Mumbai! Loved Rathore's Concern fr her! Felt bad fr Riya when she was thinking about Arjun!! OMG!!! Dats intrestinggg...😲 Asad is SamJun's frnd!! Loved the way he is still standing up fr Arjun..So he called him up fr Zoya's protection!! Loved AsYa again..❤️❤️ Aww..Asad Calls him Juno!! Me too calls him Juno Boy! Hayee! Mera Juno Boy..❤️❤️ The name sounds so cute on him na?? 😃 Thanxx fr pm..Continuee Soonz!


Thanks Shan! Lol, I didn't know you called him Juno. I just thought that the name suited him coming from a best friend. Lol. Will continue soon!

Originally posted by: anopama

"I love Raz"
loved the update
asya loved each other so much
he just wants to be wit her
so asad and the two were or r friends
riya see asya love for each other
so cant wait for tomorrow for all to come face to face
zoya protection put in place
continue


Hahaha, thanks for reading AN! Will continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Mind blowing update dear.

Just loved it.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.


Thanks!

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

Hey!

Raz! how are you???

The story is going on amazing and im waiting do see how are yougoing to link everything:)

The updates are as usual fab;)

Do I need to say that I LOVE YOU MISS! 😃

Sorry dropping in a very short comment tat too for two chapters but im busy with my studies:/

Update soon:D


Look who decided to come out of hibernation. Lol, jokes! Hahaha, thanks for reading the AN. No prob!


Thanks!

Originally posted by: rads73937

Aww.

Asad is really sweet.
Loved the last part.
Thanx for the pm. Take care.


Thank you!

Originally posted by: -Crazy4AsYa-

i love raz...lol !! you r cool...

i loved the update...
arjun...Sam...n asad were friends...nice going!!
looking forward to the next update!!
continue soon


Lol, thanks for reading AN and for the comment. Will continue soon!

Originally posted by: geet7057

nice story :) I read all these chapps today...awsumm..
in last chap romantic scene ws so adorable...
n their frndshp...awsum...

plz update soonnn dear..u r great writer...gud job..awsum.. :)


Thanks!

Originally posted by: zola007

just read the 3 last updates !

Loved it !
Loving their friendship
Thanks for the pm (:


No prob!

Originally posted by: A.Kh_20

sorry for late comment but awesome chaps!! thnku buddy!!


No worries, thanks!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aadi720

wonderful concept...

wow Arjun-sam-asad are best friends and on the flip side Riya-zoya are best friends, this is really intresting...
eagerly waiting for the next part...
continue soon!!!!!!!!
plz add me to your pm list...


Thank you! Glad you're enjoying it. Just send me a buddy request and you'll be added to PM List.

Originally posted by: skavya

Awesome update..!!!!

Asad-Arjun & Sam r best friends...nice...
so the ETF team will come to KV...Will Riya & Arjun came face to face in next update...
plz contonue soon...
& Yes...I Love Raz..!!!
Thanks for pm


Thanks! Let's see what happens. Lol, thanks for reading AN as well.

Originally posted by: ASYA4eveAAA

resss..

will unress after exams !


Good luck for exams!! *buckets full of shamrocks*


Thanks!

Originally posted by: Live-life

Update soon rA.ONE!

MISS YOU!!!
😃🤗


Thanks my dear! Back now! Muah!



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

so asad , sam and arjun friends...
he need their help... to keep zoya save...

love the little twist...



Originally posted by: Linsie

Coz now Ria is there with zoya... so when they meet...
more coming...

is a another reason for asad behavior towards life and
how zoya change it...

love the update... waiting for the next



Originally posted by: Linsie

update soon

update soon


update soon



Originally posted by: Linsie

11 days already ...update soon...








Wow! Thanks so much for being such a sweetheart. Seriously love you for all the support given!
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Posted: 11 years ago
ok now i read the full chaps in 1 go!! *screaming* its amazing
first time im reading a story other than ariya..i loved this cross over..
i can see asya in front of me n also samjun glares n attitude...
but 1 complaint , n guess this may b a complaint of few others 2, y r u so late??...its more than 2 weeks u have updated this...plz cont soon
n i ant even guess what could happen next...when ariya will meet...sam wiil come to know theey r heading 2wards asad n riya 2(oh no!!), zoy awill know about basteria incident ...n lots
uff tired of thinging n typing 2😆🤢

so plz plz cont soon n pm me whenever u give an update
n ya ILR
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb
Does arjun and Sameer know that riya is with asad and zoya
Cotinue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

ok now i read the full chaps in 1 go!! *screaming* its amazing

first time im reading a story other than ariya..i loved this cross over..
i can see asya in front of me n also samjun glares n attitude...
but 1 complaint , n guess this may b a complaint of few others 2, y r u so late??...its more than 2 weeks u have updated this...plz cont soon
n i ant even guess what could happen next...when ariya will meet...sam wiil come to know theey r heading 2wards asad n riya 2(oh no!!), zoy awill know about basteria incident ...n lots
uff tired of thinging n typing 2😆🤢

so plz plz cont soon n pm me whenever u give an update
n ya ILR


Well I'm glad you like it so much. I know, I've been getting that complaint a lot but I have to juggle a personal life, work, studying, and exams so there are some sever time constraints. I'm trying to get back on track but life is just way too hectic right now 😭.
Will update soon though!
Lol, thanks for reading AN.

Originally posted by: rinku95

Superb
Does arjun and Sameer know that riya is with asad and zoya
Cotinue soon


No they don't know and that's the fun part!
Thanks will continue soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
so r u gng 2 update 2mrrw..(in hope)

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