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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Res!

unres!

Okay since I have no clue about the serial Arjun there were too many characters for me to digest in this update but I will get used to them 😆

So JD and Danish killed her mom 😕 but Zoya dint quite see that happening.She just assumed it na.there is no catch in her mom's killing I hope?

Coz u wont keep it as simple as it seems.There has to be something else some secret ormaybe im using my brain in the wrong direction.

The way Asad takes care of her I just love it 😳

poor girl is so scared but Asad will let nothing happen to her 😃

YOU AND YOUR WRITING ARE JUST PERFECT! YOU DONT NEED IMPROVEMENT.how can you even doubt.im not saying this coz im your friend.You really are AWRITERATHEART! 😃 i seriously will have to keep you at gunpoint for thinking like this! imaginary gun bhi chalegi!:/

this was a short update:/

🤗

Edited by --Natasha-- - 11 years ago

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Even before I read the update im liking this so please!

I hope you are not thinking of discontinuing this RAZ! 😡 😭

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

I love how well Zoya and asad now understand each other. And about ur pm - no the story is perfectly written don't be worried. And about the drop in readerd, well maybe they're just going to catch up later on the reading! :)

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

awesome update..

poor zoya..

having nightmares about her mom..

she remembers the murderers??😲

update soon..

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Nim

@Rarepearl

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Hello dear,

Wow, I wasn't expecting an update so soon but none the less it was a pleasure reading it, as always.

Okay I'll start with Arjun's part, so he is the officer in charge of handling this case & so like this he'll interact with the Khans. Okay next time you tell me the relations between Arjun, riya, roshni, according to the serial. As I haven't seen it, its a little confusing for me. I am concentrating on the story for now hoping that you'll tell the connection between them & I won't have to guess it. Well Arjun's thought or day dream said that he has suffered in his past too.

Is the dimpled girl, Arjun remembers, Zoe?

AsYa part. Well Zoe's past story was tragic. Poor soul has been through so much. It is so typical of Zoe to not show her scared side, she always puts up a brave face but i am glad that now she has someone who knows her better. I hope Asad keeps up to his promise & is able to protect her from the criminal duo. But one thing, did they see Zoe standing there, when they burned the factory, or has she filed a case against them?

Well to be honest, i don't find anything wrong with this story. I don't know why readers won't like it. Maybe because the plot hasn't developed much so, but I'm sure as it goes on it will catch their attention. You keep up your spirits because you're doing a fantastic job at writing 👍🏼.

Love..

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EkNoKiNashedi

@Phir_Mohabbat

Trailblazer

+ 13

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

res

willl unres both together in here

unres buhahahahahah😆

okkk trust me, but last update was confusing. asya were cute as usual...oh man asad is tooo sweet and cute BF😳 hay i also want a guy like him😆

in etf...i thought that girl was sakshi...coz riya is in delhi na😆 the part with villains were confusing, glad u cleared their link with sikandar.😳

so these two bas***ds killed zoe mom. u know i had read desire so strange but in parts. i cant honestly remember that there was any mention of zainab there. i was right, this zainab part u added here. cool me likey...after all i like those ariya stories where cases were also in BG.

that fb was quite painful. hayyy i was busy drooling on asad that time😆 he is tooo cute and supportive. loved it. and now both readying themselves for face those villains. ahaan

and on the other hand, not so surprisingly, etf investigating killing of that lady. arjun think its one man show but rathore thinks both two villain killed the lady. and sakshi madam late as usual. shree liza that small part also good, like the way there were, tom and jerry. i can totally see it in front of my eyes like movie. ur writing, woman👏👏 too good. i wont be ever tired praising u.

ohooo so zoe riya besties. hmm...i wonder if riya is dead so what will be reaction of etf's after learning the truth. and why she hiding, coz danger is on zoe na.

update soon. and i was really shocked that silk so early😲 and about responses dont worry yaar, give it time maybe half of readers didnt even open pm and read it

hopefully i didnt miss anything.

with love

Me😆

Edited by Riya.S.007 - 11 years ago

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Awww awesome udapte 👏

No i understand a little more 😆

Continue soon please 😃

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benaz

@benaz

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Hiya! Sorry haven't been commenting had some problem with my laptop. But I just managed to catch up with chapters 2 and 3. they are greaaatt😊and I really like the crossover. I liked the convo between Asad-Zoya in chapter 2. they are so sweet and adorable. Even I must admit I thought it was Riya who entered Arjun's office😉I hope she makes a comeback and totally liked how Arjun thought of her in this chapter😊And Rathod haha I truly miss him and his interaction with Rawte. Thank you for keeping them alive in our minds😊Hope no harm comes to Zoya and I'm sure with Mr.Khan and Rawte it's going to be some amazing story ahead. Just get Riya back soon together with the ETF team. 😊

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linta

@Linnet

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Getting pretty interesting

Keep writing

Love it

Thanks 4 the pm

Update soon

😛

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#130

JD and Danish are such notorious killers. I hope Arjun and his team will be able to find them soon. For Zoya, I understand her desire to avenge her mother's death but I just hope Asad is always there to protect if JD and Danish are in fact coming after her!!