New SS-dard-e-ishq part 5 on pg 23 (9 feb) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Will continue for sure 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Dear Member,

Your FF has reached 15 pages, which automatically triggers the new FF rules posted in the forum, IMP: Regarding Fan Fictions - NEW RULE, based on which, we have to move this FF from IPKKND...EBP Forum to the Fan Fiction Forum.

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Posted: 11 years ago
part 4

Shlok was hurt beyond the limits as her teary face was still fresh in his mind. He cursed himself for hurting her so much but he got hurt even more when he saw her in that man's arms...he just couldn't digest this fact that his astha was hugging someone else instead of him. She cried in his arms instead of him. These thoughts angered him more and he got fruatrated even more so he decided to go to a park so he left his office and went to a park which was beautiful. This soothed him to some extent but before he could enjoy the sight he slipped in the pool of mud. He was trying to get up but was unable to do,suddenly he saw some little boys there and then noticed the string because of which he fell into this dirty mud. He looked at them and extended his hand so that they can help but instead of helping they rsn away from there. Shlok tried harder but nothing was working. Suddenly he felt a soft touch on his hand and he instantly looked up only to be in awe of a girl who was small but still trying to help him.
Girl got irritated as her all efforts were going in vain.
Girl-ohhooo..u r so huge as compared to me..wait i will ask someone to help u.
With this she went away from there and asked a man to help her. The man helped him and went away from there.
Shlok looked at her and found her resembling to his astha. Her hairs black like her,her helpful nature just like his astha...for some umknown reason he felt that its his astha.
Pari with concern-u got injured..wait i will get some water to clean your wound.
Shlok just smiled and saw her collecting water in her small palms. Due to her small hand,most of the water fell on the ground.
Pari cleaned his wound with remaining water. She sadly said-i collected so much water but it all fell on the ground.
Shlok-its ok beta...atleast u tried na..thats the thing which matters the most.
Pari smiled-i know that i can do anything...because i m pari
Shlok chuckled on her proudy tone-so ur name is pari..
Pari nodded in yes. She asked-now tell me ur name..
Shlok-i m shlok...shlok agnihotri..
Pari murmered-his last name is so difficult.
Shlok heard it-no its not that difficult..
Pari was talking to him but one of her friend called her so she bid bye to shlok and was about to leave but shlok stopped her.
He asked her for some unknown reason-hmmm..pari u visit her on regular basis..
Pari smiled-yes...if u wanna meet me next time..meet me at 5pm
Shlok smiled and she left from there. He felt happy and content with her presence. Just because of her presence he forgot his pain and worries.

After reachin his home,he called his manager. And ordered him to make changes in the contract of employes. He asked him to add a clause that if anyone wanna leave the job then they will have to give their resignation and they will have to find their replacement within 2 months plus they will make him or her understand all his duties.

Next day in the office

Astha asked the recptionist if shlok is free or not as she wanna meet him. She told astha that she can't meet the boss without the permission of his P.A. Astha went towards the girl who was standing with her back towards astha. Astha looked at her with disgust as she was wearing clothes which were too small to cover her.
Astha to herself-this shlok has kept this girl as his pa...god even ponam pandey wears more clothes as compared to her.
Neha turned round and find a girl staring at her but she was lost in some thoughts..so she snapped her fingers infront of her to get her attention.
Astha got back in her senses-i want to meet shlok...
Neha-first of all...he is not ur friend sl address him as sir and secondly why u wanna meet him.
Astha didn't like her attitude-its none of ur business...so if u won't mind can i meet him..
Neha tossed her hairs and led her to the cabin..
Astha looked at her and then her attire..she was wearing a black pencil skirt and white shirt which was so tight that her figure was visible from it..her hairs were in a high ponytail..lips were coated with gloss,eyes filled with kajal and kohl...astha didn't liked her at all..


sorry guys for this small updt but promise to updt on monday. I was very busy with my college so didn't updt this...sorry for that as well. Hope u enjoy this part. Your comments means alot to me.
Thanks
Fiza
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Posted: 11 years ago
Btw booth your links are not working
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great and awesome update. So finally shlok met his daughter. How cute that's sweet. What will be aastha's reaction. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update, loved it so much.
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Posted: 11 years ago
short but nice update, so pari helped daddy...jealous aastha, wonder what she will say to shlock? eagerly awaiting mondays update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you for the update Pari is so sweet
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Loved shlok and pari part
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Both the links u sent r not working dear

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