virman os: Yeh Hai Ashiqui End.. page 18 (03/25)

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pink1

@pink1

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#121

awesome ending at last she confess
her feeling toward him front of every one
both living happy married life

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bubbles666

@bubbles666

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

wow
super ending
u made me cry while reading
thanks for pm

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#123

SUPERB SHIVI. STORY IS SO BEAUTIFUL. U PORTREY EVERY EMOTION SO BEAUTIFULLY. REMINDS ME OF EHMMBH SERIAL AFTER A LONG TIME BECOZ OF MANVI CANCER. GOOD WORK.

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LoverBollywood

@LoverBollywood

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Awesome update..
I am just speeceless...
The songs was really good..
Awww the got twins...
I loved it..
Feel really sad you ended the story..
Thanks for the PM...

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Ridzi

@Ro-001

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Just read all the parts together
No words to describe it
You are awesome, you write very well
The words written have imprinted in my mind and heart which will never be forgetten
Thanks alot for pms
If you write more plz let me know bcoz I love your writing style

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panamaa

@panamaa

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#126

it was awesome.

i will miss this story

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Laveniya.

@Zion.Writings

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#127

bahut accha end tha <3
loved it ...
bahut rulaya par..!!!
emotions ke description ...hatts off..!!!!
will miss this OS

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prathe

@prathe

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#128

kya feeling hai yaar tune tho bilkul hi thok dia😆😉 shivi
emotions ko bahuth ache se potray kiya hai hai mein itna khush hui yeh update padh kar ki dekho hindi mein cmment karlia⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
as u r guddu says thok dia mumma😳😉

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hangok

@hangok

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#129

owww i hate it when i cant write so big comments, what i really feel about the stories...

this was just too good, sad that it comes to an end, but we know everything has an end , hope and wish to read more from you,

loved the scene where virat told on the stage about love, dont know why but the image of srk from mohabbatein cames in my mind...

thank you sooo much for this great VIRMAN os👏👏👏👏

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Meera Chaudhuri

@Lumos-Maxima

Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

Awesome update Shivi!!! ⭐️ Brilliant work! Virat's words about love was so heart warming.. How can Manvi resist such love.. Beautifully written 👏.. Loved the ending especially last few lines ❤️.. Song selection was perfect.. Superb!! Thank you for the pm.. Take care 🤗