Arshi SS #3: Baby Hold On *Part 16, pg 1* (NEW thread link pg 144)

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mishti_17

@mishti_17

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Posted: 11 years ago

#861

That was indeed a memorable birthday for Khushi.. ☺️ Arnav made it one... Loved it.. The way they confessed their love for each other..

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storytellerm

@storytellerm

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Posted: 11 years ago

#862

omg they did it
wow
grt part
yipeee
he proposed
loved it

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 11 years ago

#863

just wanted to say

what hawttt update

thanx for that

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pinkly

@pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#864

Tina, I read the last chapter again. So beautifully written. Sometimes I feel words like - Beautiful Wonderful, Amazing are too less to explain your writing. Loved the last chapter. Continue soon...

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lin2002

@lin2002

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Posted: 11 years ago

#865

wow...such a...''powerful update'''...haha...seems like no words can ever describe ur work...hatsoff👍🏼.

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MidnightReader

@MidnightReader

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Posted: 11 years ago

#866

Hi Tina, 😊

What a amazing update. 👏 Arnav's nightgown gift and having Khushi's favourite food showed how much Arnav pay attention to Khushi. The rain dripping in the cabin was a nice addition as it made for a romantic atmosphere. ⭐️

Tina did you write the poem? Everything was nicely written, Arnav presenting the poem to Khushi and then so sweetly proposing marriage to her. 👏😊

Wonderful part Tina! 😊Just one question how many languages Arnav knows and how does he know them? I mean I didn't know Arnav can sing and that to in Spanish. It was a wonderful surpirse for Khushi, especially since he danced as well with her. Serenading Khushi is Spanish and then also saying something in French. Arnav is very talented. ⭐️

I have a feeling Shyam is going to make an entry pretty soon.

The next part has a interesting title, "Deadline"... Is it about Khushi and Arnav reaching Delhi on time or Shyam coming back...

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aquagal

@aquagal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#867

Sorry for being so late. I don't know why I'm unable to comment on blog itself. But anyways here I am.😊
This was passionate with desires running high. It was kind of sweet for Arnav trying to reign in control and Khushi demanding that she needed him with her in every way possible. The resulting effects are yet to be seen. I hope it's going to be trouble free for them.
Deadline - In reaching back to Delhi or in removing Mr. Butterball😉