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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: i_luv_abhiya
Arghhh i want to kill dis stupid sameera. bloody bi**h. 🤬 poor khushi must b so hurt. Nice update. cn u plz gv a update were dere is no sameera. Thax fr pm.

hehehehehe well what can i say, dont kill her plzzz...woh meri imaginary character hai indirectly (mai unkii maa hui naa 😆 )

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: theezy-lovely

that was an awesome chapter dear..👏👏
the way arnav consoled sameera was lovely...😳
even though i hate sameera,😡 your way of writing is just mind blowing dear...👏👏
you are portraying the fiction very well...👍🏼
arnav feelings are given out very well👏👏
but the way he ignored khushi.. 😭even though it was unintentional... it hurts...😭😭
poor khushi... she was oblivious to the fact that sameera is envy of her...😲
but that smirk of sameera told many things to khushi...😲😲
poor sameera.. she was elated😡 thinking arnav forget everything because of her closeness and ignored khushi😡 oblivous to the fact that he is pounding over...
poor khushi she was heart broken when arnav ignored her...💔
but i guess this situation is needed for them to realize many things...

looking forward...
do update soon after you finish your exam dear...👍🏼
thnx 4 the pm 🤗

do well in the exam dear... best of luck...

thank u sooo very much theezy 😊 my papers are going really fine...all thanx to u and others...

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saima

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: rulama
Though you had been sending me PM's I was not able to read. Loved it dear.
You have shown how the scenario changes with each nuance and how both Arnav and Khushi realize what they were really feeling deep down which they had unconsciously assumed but were never really aware of!
Lovely story!

well, currently i am sending pms to all those who are in my buddy list...and i am glad that u commented...😃 thank u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

finally i got some time to read all the comments and reply to them...thanks to each and everyone who are following my story and supporting me through their comments...

i still have papers remaining but i guess i can give a small teaser now, isnt it?😉

thank u once again...😳😊 <3 <3

follow next post for the teaser...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

TEASER ( for chapter - 9 )

Yesterday , sameera have had enough of the teeny weeny moments between her arnav and that kabaab me haddi, khushi. vaise bhi a sneak-peak hardly mattered!! so while the bestie's were probably having the time of their lives and she was busy sulking listening to the additional gyaan of managing the household by her dear sasuumaa ofocurse, she decided it was time to put her lauki ki sabzi at stake and sneakily peeked inside khushi's room making sure no one noticed her going inside but then is she was preparing herself for a victory dance, she was in for a GREAT shock!!

basically between their cooking sessions, anju bhabhi had causally ranted on and on about khushi being upset reagrding something and arnav, as usual the only one person born to buy the entire tender of cheering her up had gone there... while sameera was clearly not interested in listening to khushi's dukh bhari gaatha and had paid a deaf ear to anju's blabber, she was quite curios to find out how arnav will handle the case... But to her utmost horror, what she saw made her insides burn with a primal unquenchable rage and she wanted nothing but to burn the entire world to express her terror at being summoned to something like this... she found the two of them in a deep passionate embrace having their bodies closely entwined with one another...they were locked up in each other's arms with such an intimacy that every inch of sameera, witnessing it from the threshold of khushi's room,begged to scream her lungs out at the clear betrayal by her love...

With khushi's head nestled in arnav's neck and their bodies practically glued, they looked far from being "just friends" from sameera's angle... khushi was silently murmuring something and arnav ,like a true listener was giving her his undivided attention, while his hands never stopped caressing her cheeks and hairs... from sameera' view point their position could have put even the best of lovers to shame...!!! She severely and seriously wanted to rip them apart right then and there... but how can she risk facing the wrath of arnav??? being a part of his life, for days now...one thing was very sure and that was he dont like getting disturbed when he had clearly asked for privacy... so she quietly made her way out, and without bothering to wait for arnav to drop her off like he had been doing everyday, she made her way home, alone!!

so how was it??? do tell me through ur feedbacks...😉

Edited by simmi-arshi - 11 years ago