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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

this was an amazing update..

quite a different one actually

and the sisters fight.. i never experienced it but ab kar liya..

and kriyaansh's online convo.. 👍🏼

damn cool 😳

a beautifully written chapter

please do continue and do PM me 😳

i am waiting

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

RES

unres...😊

superb strt dear..
oh ho.. sleeping in science classes! i felt sleepy in arts classes..😆😆
anyways, as usual awsm strt.. nd u r gonna focus on emotions..
gr8.. dats my most fav genre.. looking frwrd to read more..
cont. soon..😊

nd srry for ds supr late unres dear...
was juz tangled wth clg..😛 aftr all vacation ka hang ovr nhi gaya,na..😆

t.c aryuu..
luv,
di..🤗

Edited by --Orchids-- - 11 years ago

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

New story...
Yaayy.. Superb start..
Kria care free gal who slept in science lectures 🤣
n rey.. Padhaku boy who used to date his books 🤣 🤣
superb combo...
Aahhaa.. Aisi sis fyts dekh k di ki yaad aaying ;( lovly sis..
Okk 2 days kria did cum ol n rey itna bechain.. Haiyrr..
He knows sum secret of kria... Ohhooo...
Good h ji..
Lets see wat it is...
Next part k liye
Waitinf waitingg...
Ps... Loved the Banner.. Bahut achha banaya h banner aapne madam ji :D

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harshita gangwani

@harshita1996

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Hey nice concept..

Kria care free n Rey dating his books..!!hehe..

Really amazing...

The fite btw kria n her di for a charger..hehe

Thanks fr pm..

Keep writing..Update soon..will be waiting..:)

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..Re..

@..Re..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Quite intriguing

Waiting for the next chapter update soon

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tina tartari

@tinatartari

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

omg!!this is superb...

i loved the idea tat a nerd rey kept so keen interest in kriya nd nw he has found her...plus it looks 2 realistic hw the sis's fight nd charger had 2 b repaired...plx write the next part soon...

m dying 2 read it...

thnks 4 the pm..waiting 4 the next pm nw...

plx update soon...

ps u r an awesome writer,m tellng u...

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Shukti_19

@Shukti_19

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Ah-mazing Concept
looking forward to upcoming Chapters
continue soon

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anjali

@anjali22

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

amazing start

u r an awesome writer

loved it

update next part soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

amazing and concept of prologue is great well written... do continue soon and pm me

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

I like the introduction..

that had a crisp base for the story...

It seems to be a emotional and a fierce story..

But somewhere the chapter didnt reflect the same..

It was cute but not as per the introduction..

I guess things gonna take a turn with the secret thing.. I at least hope so