Smitar's : Recalling Arnav Parts 1~5 Link to #2 on Pg 1 - Page 45

Originally posted by: starsarun

I was posting comment and network got lost suddenly and run away with my comment...

I liked the update..
Tears were in My eyes...
That was so much emotional..
Thanks for udating it so soon.. :p

I can't thank you enogh for this!

Last part was so much emotional..
Khushi is happy unknown of bitter past...

But Arnav is alone even after having his whole fanily with him... He is so sad..

Whole Part shows Arnav's craving for Khushi..
I think last scene can have this song...


Tujhse naraaz nahi zindagi...
Hairaan hoon mein!
Hairaan hooon mein!...

Originally posted by: aayesha

What the...

How could you end it like that 😭 ...

Please update soon or you gonna lose your reader as I will die thinking what will happen next...

You have no idea how every day I think about this FF ...and the way Arnav will get to know about Khushi memo loss...

Please update soon please... 😳

Btw it was a amazing update...

Loved it...

But beware if you didn't update soon I will ...I Don't know what will I do except thinking and thinking some more as I don't want to die without reading the whole story 😆

Please update soon...I will be waiting 😉

Originally posted by: starsarun

For stopping Khushi making Jalebis..
I know it holds a reason.. :)

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna

fabulous Smita...all waiting worth it...beautifully written...i feel really bad for Arnav...and woh kehte hain naa, ignorance is bliss...its good she doesnt remember, at least she is happy...and finally he heard her voice...after so long...did he realized there's something unusual in her...what he's gonna do next...cant wait for the next part...
can we ask/request/demand an earlier update...thanks for the mail Rashmi...

Surely you will get it...

When the stars align...

and...

When the time is right.