AShlok FF - The Unusual Wedding - Part 33 Last Part updated

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

wow amazing update thank you, great ending, it's nice to things changing in their house for better, thank you for writing such great stories sweety. I hope we get to read more lovely stories from you.

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priyavin

@priyavin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Such a perfect ending, thank you for the beautiful story 👏👏

Take a break but please come back with another soon...am hooked to your stories😃

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@mailanchi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

very nicely written and ended...happy that NA has changed. Somehow I want the same to happen in EBP also...loved ur FF to the core

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Dee James

@DJames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: jeenia123

yaar i don;t have huge fan following...i have some best of friends who are keen to finish my thread...we named our group too vanarsena...😆
but your work is really wonderful...i just loved it...you know, once i had cried in reading my own update in my last FF and one i cried today...
please try something dark for next...actually i want to try too...

So sweet of you to say that...and Vanarsena hehe...enjoy it! 😉. Yup the next one I want to do something different...will see 😊

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Dee James

@DJames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: mailanchi
very nicely written and ended...happy that NA has changed. Somehow I want the same to happen in EBP also...loved ur FF to the core

So nice of you to say that. Thank you very much 😊.

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Dee James

@DJames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: priyavin
Such a perfect ending, thank you for the beautiful story 👏👏

Take a break but please come back with another soon...am hooked to your stories😃

Thank you for that beautiful comment. Yep will be back soon 😊.

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Dee James

@DJames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: rbb1
wow amazing update thank you, great ending, it's nice to things changing in their house for better, thank you for writing such great stories sweety. I hope we get to read more lovely stories from you.

THank you so much Ray. You've been one of them who have supported me since the beginning. A huge 🤗 for that. Love ya!

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AlbusDumbeldore

@AlbusDumbeldore

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Thank you for giving a lovely ff. The ending is superb and lovely. I loved the last line " to give another chance , to live".and sojal and varad got married. Thats sweet.

I loved NA and anjalis story of how anjali has tackled this whole situation and how NA came out his anger. The best part I loved that how shlok started respecting his mother after knowing NA 's truth.i wish this same thing happens in the serial. And aastha is pregnant that's sweet.this is a great great super d.uper story. Thanks for pm.

Will be waiting for your great another ff.

😊

Edited by anjipankaj - 11 years ago

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Dee James

@DJames

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: anjipankaj
Thank you for giving a lovely ff. The ending is superb and lovely. I loved the last line " to give another chance , to live".and sojal and varad got married. Yhats sweet.
I loved NA and anjalis story of how anjali has tackled this whole situation and jow NA came out his anger. The best part I loved that how shlok started respecting his mother after knowing NA 's truth.i wish this same thing happens in the serial. And aastha is pregnant that's sweet.this is a great great super d.uper story. Thanks for pm.
Will be waiting for your great another ff.
😊

I can feel your excitement in your comment and right now I have a huge grin on my face. Thank you so much for that lovely comment. 😃. Yup will be back soon with another FF.