My *KR OneShots gallery* 2nd OS(Pt 2) pg14(1/19) - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Lovely update
Kriya gulp hard because of paul questionnaire
she really frustrated due to this but all his questions making her to open her feelings for rey
gang having mixed expression on this convo
kriya finally blurted out her feeling for rey
nd rey response was comical
love d end
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Posted: 11 years ago
#72
awesome ending !!!!! :D :D ^_^
Loved it totally <3 <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
I really thought that rey n kria will shortout their things by crying
but
as u said
they are always unpredictable
the way the confess was really different
n i just love it for that
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
You know very few writers have the ability to make the reader feel the emotions in an update , and girl you seriously have the ability. Through out the update i had a huge smile on my face . This OS was amazing. Loved it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
the pov of vented out of felling u expressed... were fabulous and perfect end... loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
loved the second OS👏 ... amazing written⭐️ ... loved the way that you explained in the second part...👍🏼
Can't wait for you next OS 😎... PM me when you have uploaded it 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Superb OS
Love it vry much
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
Awweeiiieee smi...
It was such an awsmmm OS..
Phle gang realises ki rey stil love kria.. Then unka plan No plan wala part.. 🤣 🤣
then apna possisive REY.. Haiyyee.. Kria ko lekar kisi ko bhi trust nahi kerta.. ;)
n den KR entry.. Fir apne main mahashai PAUL ki entry who is totally latto on kria... Rey ki feelings.. KR ka eyelocks.. N den finally truth out.. :D
kR being funny... Kya replies dey raha tha rey.. 🤣 🤣
kR together forever... Haiiyyyee..
Pata h.. Aisa laga raha tha ki sab mere saamne ho raha h.. U know.. Like i can see it visually... Uff... beautiful yaar... Loved it.. :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79
awesome
amazing os
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
Woah Yayy Yupiee What an Idea Didu..OS Thread Yuss

Coming towards OS as always

Awesome

Ahmazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Marvelous

Loved both

hehe the way vicky n gang teased Rey was funn

n making call Paul hehe was da best thing

sare secrets khol die

except dat Kria's Mom is nomore

Rey's antimsanskar dialogue hehe

n loved how kria confessed her love for rey infront of Paul

n Chabilal ko baatcutter nai Ramaira dhonde gi

Awlaaah thi both didu

busy wid studies so gona try n keep a track

dese were such a stress buster today

Update Soon :)

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