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rubikjules

@rubikjules

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

That was an amazin update! The last part especially was almost enchanting..magical..I totally enjoyed reading d update..
I've been busy lately so read part 39 n 40 bck to bck only jus nw..hence didn't comment before..
It was excellent..I love hw d pace of d story is so realistic..I'm glad d first kiss in india was nt very passionate n yet ws intimate n magical..its natural for arnav to b hesitant n fearful..I'm glad khushi took d initiative..

Part 39 was very beautifully written..very emotional..I loved it..
Wht ws arnav upto before he cme to india? I'm sure it ws somethin reckless n physically harmful...
I'm glad though tht akash isn't visiting yet..these 2 stil have a long way to go..

Thks for d superb update again katie!!

Needless to say eagerly awaitin d nxt one..!

Jules

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Suchi

@ChitraF

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Awesome part.. beautiful as always.. But still i am not understanding Khushi's point of view here, she is not ready to tell kids, about Arnav, where she is dreaming about kiss,but not sure about giving him another chance..when she is trusting Arnav now, its not unfair to kids if she is not telling them about Arnav?? Hope the day is not too far..

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#143

damn he is gonna get blasted for not kissing her

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Katie

@love_iqbal_khan

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+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Arnav1Khushi
I am first. Yesss. So happy.
The update was AWESOME. I loved each emotion. The kids were too cute. I love how Khushi was totally behaving like a hormonal teenager in the start. Well that is ASR for you! Who can resist him! LOL. When Aditya asked her why her cheek has read, I felt myself grinning. The kids are so adorable. So cute. Well brought up and nice to be around. Naughty in their own style.

Anjali imitating Khushi was top notch. I like this bold Anjali. I am glad she decided to tell Aman the past. N Aman is just the perfect man. Such an understanding and doting guy. Fun to be around.

The family bonding was utterly cute. Their evening rituals were just amazing. Arnav and Amber gardening and Khushi and Aditya dancing. I can totally picture it. I wish we had something similar to this in ipkknd. Oh well. Ur story makes it all possible.

Coming to my favorite part. You had an almost kiss. 😃 Ur almost kiss was so enticing. N when he stopped I was like, nooo. Go on dude u take this step. But I loved Khushi's anger. She was just cute. N when she stormed into his room and kissed it, I was completely on top of the world. Even though it was just a peck, they showed a certain level of intimacy and understanding. I am glad the kiss was not deepened at this stage. It makes sense. When u mentioned the kiss in the precap I expected a hot and steamy one. But this is just as good. In fact, this shows more knowledge of the other's feelings. But I gotta tell u, u BETTER have a hot and steamy kiss in one of your future updates. PLZZZ. I loved what Khushi said next. Hopefully Arnav takes this as a clue and kisses her in the following updates. I hope Arnav takes the next step in deepening their kiss or anything else for that matter because it is high time he makes a move for himself. But I can understand his mentality. N this subtle change is more suitable. Katie you proved ur an awesome writer once again. Loved it. I just gotta read it again. 😆

Thank you hun! Congrats on being first to comment.😉 You know...after not having physical intimacy and depriving your body and your hormones of that...experience...is bound to leave you thinking of it...another reality of life...no matter how fairytale-ish you try to make it...those hormones will do what they want, beyond your control.😉😆 Khushi has done a marvelous job with raising the kids...I've always portrayed her as the perfect friend, perfect wife, perfect daughter-in-law...so it was only apt to make her a perfect mother...besides...the twins were all she had, right? she loves them to death and raising kids with love rather than sternness will bear more fruitful results.

I didn't want to leap from a kiss on the cheek/intimate hugs to a full passionate/steamy kiss...given their situation..its a big leap...this was the stepping stone...eventually we will get to the steamier of kisses...😉...I know the build-up that led to the kiss took longer than the actual kiss but then again...I needed them to be "lost" in the moment which they were until Arnav realized what he almost did...and I know most readers wanted Arnav to take this step but that would be him going back on his words...he did say that Khushi will set the boundaries and he will follow...😳 There will be things that will bring them closer...just stay tuned.😉

Originally posted by: tina_1234
Awesome part

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Arilip
He he he he...read it before pm😉
Nice update loving the way their relationship is moving...

Can't blame khushi for her insecurities ...

yeap! I sent you a PM anyway..😆 Khushi is trying to guard her heart more than being insecure...and rightly so, innit?

Originally posted by: ILoveFF
fantastic ... their progress is getting stronger

Yeap...progressing one step at a time.😳

Originally posted by: IsleOfCapri
simply fabulous
loved it...

Thank you!

Originally posted by: rubikjules
That was an amazin update! The last part especially was almost enchanting..magical..I totally enjoyed reading d update..
I've been busy lately so read part 39 n 40 bck to bck only jus nw..hence didn't comment before..
It was excellent..I love hw d pace of d story is so realistic..I'm glad d first kiss in india was nt very passionate n yet ws intimate n magical..its natural for arnav to b hesitant n fearful..I'm glad khushi took d initiative..

Part 39 was very beautifully written..very emotional..I loved it..
Wht ws arnav upto before he cme to india? I'm sure it ws somethin reckless n physically harmful...
I'm glad though tht akash isn't visiting yet..these 2 stil have a long way to go..

Thks for d superb update again katie!!

Needless to say eagerly awaitin d nxt one..!

Jules

Thank you so much Jules! No worries...I know you mentioned that you've been busy..its alll good. :) I try my best to be realistic with the pace of progress in their relationship so its always a great motivator when I see a reader comment on it, so thank you especially for that! I didn't want to go from a kiss on the cheek or a make out so quickly..I guess this is the stepping stone before the more passionate stuff...

Your guess about Arnav's activities is bang on...I'll be revealing it later in the story...😳 and yes...Akash's trip isnt about to happen before Arnav and Khushi have sorted out their relationship. but the threat of his possible trip was solely put in to give Khushi a chance to talk to the family and for the two to cross that emotional barrier together, heeding and giving support to each other.😳

Originally posted by: Suchi.R
Awesome part.. beautiful as always.. But still i am not understanding Khushi's point of view here, she is not ready to tell kids, about Arnav, where she is dreaming about kiss,but not sure about giving him another chance..when she is trusting Arnav now, its not unfair to kids if she is not telling them about Arnav?? Hope the day is not too far..

Thank you! Well...you can't control what you dream, right? You can blame it on hormones if you want...but Khushi really can't control her dreams, just like Arnav can't control his nightmares. She has given him another chance to try and see if she can go abck to him as his wife...she never promised to go back with him..right now...they're dating...she trust him to an extent but does she trust him enough to go back home with him? does she trust him enough to give him the rights a husband has on his wife? Say until holding hands and hugging and kissing him is fine but she can't bring herself to go back with him...how is Arnav supposed to leave if the kids know he's their dad? Both Arnav and Khushi are trying to make sure that Khushi is ready to be Mrs. Khushi Arnav Singh Raizada in every sense of the word before the kids find out who he is.😳

Originally posted by: seeta_naips
damn he is gonna get blasted for not kissing her

Nahh...she understands why he stopped...so she gave him the 'permission' and set a new limit in the form of a quick kiss...now he better take initiative of he'll get blasted.😆😉

Edited by love_iqbal_khan - 11 years ago

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

it was beautiful but this just went to show how deeply hurt arnav is, how much he is punishing himself and how true his repentance is

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

beautiful update

loved it

thanks for the pm

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

amazing update...

khushi dreamed oh kissing arnav...😛

anjali teased her...

but stopped as khushi threat to reveal anjali's secret...😆

arshi having cute time with their babies...

arnav danced wid khushi...

oh khushi lightly peck on his lip...

arnav was 😲...

khushi was blushing...

update soon...

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Sarah

@ifsaal044

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

I just love the pace of the story. You didn't rush into forgiveness nor redemption. It was very well thought out and paced. Worth the wait for the kiss for sure.