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Posted: 11 years ago
☺️☺️Body parts walla update😉..Very naughty and nice and full of spice courtesy Khushi😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
Shaadi part 1

Everything is now revealed slowly
The suspense and oh the mystery
A bride who appears so cool to be
But internally is wobbling like jelly

The young groom suave and sexy
Blunt and so forthcoming is he
Attracted to his bride immensely
Making it so clear very teasingly

A contract they signed willingly
Binding them forever in matrimony
A step taken out of sheer necessity
Meeting both their needs mutually

Her spirt her passion and intensity
She suited his plan almost perfectly
Her cooperation he needed badly
Leaving her with no choice to disagree

A dossier on her prepared carefully
To her whole life makes him privy
Her dreams and aspirations it be
Or Payal's life and love seemingly

His need to appease his family
Whom he loved wholeheartedly
For them a farce he would agree
Their happiness his aim solely

In public appear a couple happy
But strangers when in privacy
To love their lives independently
But respect their vows obviously

Attraction & desire he felt badly
And made it obvious brazenly
Enjoying flirting with her shamelessly
He wanted her he admitted openly

Questioning her rather uncomfortably
Talking about sex so very teasingly
Conjuring images so embarrassingly
Fighting temptation with difficulty

Making her blush red so profusely
Red...it appeared repeatedly
A sign & symbol or more to be...
Her acceptance of her Shaadi


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Posted: 11 years ago
hahaha..
that was good...
good going khushi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I'm waiting for the update. We all are. Is it wednesday yet?
Also, this Arnav is so saxy. so much. uff!

This story is just da bomb!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey juhi, had gone to india for a couple of wk & I come back to this awesome surprise, love the story.. Love ASR in this story.. But not more than khushi.. Beautiful SS will wait for ch 3 eagerly...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Chapter 1

Red more than a brilliant hue obviously
It's symbolises for her life in its entirety
A contract, a bond made so knowingly
Two people retaining their individuality

Their backgrounds differ drastically
One simple & one in the lap of luxury
Bound together now in matrimony
Curious I am about their life story

How will proceed now this journey
Turbulent, or be it smooth & easy
Attraction,desire they feel mutually
She treading her path very carefully

Respect he does his wife naturally
Her husband now, her life a reality,
Though missing was the ceremony
And rituals she felt subconsciously

Trust they do each other most surely
Joining them for now atleast legally
Love we hope will follow soon slowly
Red will then for her happiness be ...

The banner made brilliantly
A story is tells us silently
Haritha I applaud you truly
For your amazing creativity ...


Wow Vandana that was brilliant. I am simply amazed how you can make poem with anything and everything. I loved this. It's like you are simply talking in a beautiful language.
Like I told you earlier you should make a thread of your own with compilation of all your poems.👏
Edited by skmr.bs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am laughing, I seriously am as I completed with 1st ch and excerpt! Will comment soon😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vandana.sagar

Shaadi part 1

Everything is now revealed slowly
The suspense and oh the mystery
A bride who appears so cool to be
But internally is wobbling like jelly

The young groom suave and sexy
Blunt and so forthcoming is he
Attracted to his bride immensely
Making it so clear very teasingly

A contract they signed willingly
Binding them forever in matrimony
A step taken out of sheer necessity
Meeting both their needs mutually

Her spirt her passion and intensity
She suited his plan almost perfectly
Her cooperation he needed badly
Leaving her with no choice to disagree

A dossier on her prepared carefully
To her whole life makes him privy
Her dreams and aspirations it be
Or Payal's life and love seemingly

His need to appease his family
Whom he loved wholeheartedly
For them a farce he would agree
Their happiness his aim solely

In public appear a couple happy
But strangers when in privacy
To love their lives independently
But respect their vows obviously

Attraction & desire he felt badly
And made it obvious brazenly
Enjoying flirting with her shamelessly
He wanted her he admitted openly

Questioning her rather uncomfortably
Talking about sex so very teasingly
Conjuring images so embarrassingly
Fighting temptation with difficulty

Making her blush red so profusely
Red...it appeared repeatedly
A sign & symbol or more to be...
Her acceptance of her Shaadi



This is Fabulous just like the chapter is. You simply explained almost the whole chapter in poem. This was really cute. Loved it.
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing chapter 1... just fabulous :)
after reading the excerpt, i just can't wait for Chapter 2... update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg om g omg !!! this excert is making me crave the actual ch 2, please sooner than wed, not sure if i can wait that long!!!!!! ;)

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