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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

amazing update..

Gaytri is too much..

Sanjna's entry..

Love the way damsingh support sam..

Love the scene bet sam n kids..

Lov ayesha n riya's pov..

Plz continue soon..

Thanks 4 pm


Thanks dear
Love u stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for lat commenting...
both chapters was nice and your Sanjana also.
So moms planning for sam's marriage...why this moms always put their choices on children?
Hope Dad Rathod can do something for his son.

loved those little moment's with children and S-S friendship.

do continue..& thanks for PM.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Goldie...kal update chahiye hi chahiye...😭😭😭 😭😭😭 😭😭😭 😭😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shamsad1607

Sorry for lat commenting...

both chapters was nice and your Sanjana also.
So moms planning for sam's marriage...why this moms always put their choices on children?
Hope Dad Rathod can do something for his son.

loved those little moment's with children and S-S friendship.

do continue..& thanks for PM.

Thanks dear
glad u liked it
Stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sure sameera
Cannot acees from home net is down 😭😭
Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Goldie...kal update chahiye hi chahiye...😭😭😭 😭😭😭 😭😭😭 😭😭😭

Sorry dear ghar ka net kaam nahin kar raha tha
Kya karron
sure abhi thodi der main update de doongi 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 11 A

Sameer went along with sanjana n informed arjun to take the charge of the work . After completing their work all went back to the apartment as soon as aisha marched inside the house avantika said "aisha sameer kahan hai bacche uska shayam se wait kar rahe hai usne unke saath ghoomne jaane ka vaada kiya tha" Aisha said "par wo to sanjana ke saath hai kya abhi tak laute nahin?" avantika said "nahin tu phone lagana" Aisha said "par maa sir ko aise phone karna theek nahin hai ruko main kuch karti hoon"She called riya n said "riya tumhari aur arjun sir ki help chahiye thi sir ne bachho ke saath bahar jaane ka plan banaya tha par wo sanjana ke saath hai to kyat um aur arjun sir unko ghumane lejaa sakte ho? Wo unhe bura nahin lagega "Riya said "kyu nahin waise bhi main aur arjun ghoone hi jaane wale the ek kaam karte hai tum shree aur chotu bhi aa jao saath main bahut maza aayega" aisha after initial hesitance said yes. Arjun riya chotu aisha all went with the kids n they all enjoyed a lot. Arjun was found of beaches n riya too they drove towards a clean n beautiful beach aadi exclaimed "arjun kaka ye to bahut payara hai aur yaha se sea kitna accha dikhta hai" Arjun said "haan ab chalo hum log sand castle banate hai" Annu said "Wow arjun kaka thankyou aap hamari help karoge na ?" Arjun smiled n said "haan chalo waha chalte hai" showing them a clear point on the beach kida ran n started making sand castle n arjun too helped them. Aisha shree n chotu were plainly amused to see this new side of arjun as they have never witness that a hot headed person like arjun can be so calm n patient with the kids. Riya had a wide smile on her face seeing arjun like this aisha said "riya mujhe nahin pata tha ki arjun sir baccho se itna pyar karte hai?" riya with a smile said "haan aisha jab se wo apne papa se alag hue hai tab se unhe unki kami mehsoos hoti hai aur wo is tarah jab bhi baccho ko dekhte hai to unse ghul mil jaate hai"

Kids really enjoyed themselves having special pavbhaaji and ice cream n pizza too n all were having a gala time. Soon the saw a balloon wale approaching there arjun bought balloons for the kids they were extremely happy and enjoyed a lot when they got tired they decided to go back at the same time in galaxy towers sameer enters his flat n sees that kids are missing infact entire team was not there. He got bit tensed. Avantika saw sameer coming n said "aa gaye beta tum kuch dhoond rahe ho?" Samper said "aunty aapne baccho ko dekha hai ? aur baaki sab bhi nazar nahin aa rahe hai kahin haye hai kya ?" Avantika said "sameer shayad tum bhool gaye tumne bbaccho se kaha tha kitum unhe ghumane le jaaoge aur wo shyam se tumara intizaar bhi kar rahe the aur jab tum nahin aaye to maine aisha se kaha to wo arjun riya shree sabko saath leke baccho ko ghumane le gaye hai taaki baccho ko bura na lage abhi riya ka phone bhi aaya thawo log abhi bas aa jayenge kuch der main aur khana bhi sabne bahar kha liya hai so tum preshaan mat hoo waise maine tumhari pasand ki kadi banayi hai tum ander aakar khana khalo tab tak ye loog bhi aajaayenge" Sameer really felt guilty that he could not fulfill his promise to the kids but he could not help it as sanjana was his childhood friend and he had met her after a long time. Avatika served him food n he was quitely having his dinner once he was done he heard the horn of SUV and guessed that kids n entire team is back. Aisha arjun riya shree every one entered the house of aisha as aisha told them that till sameer arrives kids will stay with her and avantika at her flat.

As soon as they all saw sameer they wished him n arjun in annoyed tone said "sam tune baccho se promise kiya thana to unhe aise hi chod ke chala gaya?" Sameer said "soory arjun kya karta sanjana se main bahut saalo ke baad mila tha use mana nahin kar sakta tha use bahut bura lagta" Arjun replied "accha to kya baccho ko bura nahin laga kitu unhe promise karke bhi bahar nahi legaya ab to tujhe iski punishment milni chahiye" arjun turning to kids "kyu baccho?" Aadi said "arjun kaka sahi kaha papa ko punishment milni chahiye" arjun said "to theek hai to aaj aapdono apne arjun kaka ke paas rukoge chalochange kake jaldi se aa jao" kids ran to change n sameer said "arjun ye bahut pareshaan karenge tum"" cutting him short arjun replied "tu rehnede sam main aur riya dekh lenge" with that he marched out of the room with riya. Riya n arjun in their flat made kids lie down n put them to sleep riya after kids slept return to her room n arjun with a smile said "bacche so gaye?" Riya replied "haan so gaye" Arjun said "aaj baccho ke saath bahut maza aaya riya bahut dino baad mujhe aise baccho ke saath bahut accha laga warna time hi nahin milta hai"riya said "haan aaj mujhe bhi bahut accha laga baccho ke aane se sab kitna badal jaata hai na ?" arjun said "haan sahi keh rahi ho tum " with a pause arjun with a naughty smile pulls riya closer n says "waise main sooch raha tha kiab hame bhi planning shuru kar deni chahiye aur mujhe to aise hi cute se junior arjun aur junior riya chahiye wo bhi jaldi se jaldi" Riya hit him playfully n said "arjun app na baccho ke saath kya rahe thdoi der khud bacche ban haye hai " arjun held riya tightly closer to her n voiced out in a naughty manner "kyu tumhe nahin chahiye pyari si gudiya aur badmaash sa champ" riya hid her face shyly in arjuns chest n said "haan mujhe bhi chahiye aapko pata hai arjun aaj baccho ke saath mujhe bahut accha laga kitna badal jata hai sab baccho ke saath " Arjun said lekin phir uske liye thodi mehnat karni padegi" with that pulled riya in a hug n soon both were lost in their own love land.

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Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 11 B

Here at aishas place at the same time sameer said with a guilt on his face "I am really sorry aisha n thanks a lot tumne situation sambhall le warna dono mujhse baat bhi nahin karte" aisha with a smile said "Sir please aap mujhse sorry mat kahiye aur jinse aapko kehna chahiye wo yaha nahin hai so chuke hoonge aurek baat aapko yaad hai ki aapne mujhe kaha tha ki main aapki help karoon aadi aur annu ki zimmedari nibhane main so main bas wahi kar rahi thi" Sameer said "Thanks aisha yadi tum nahi hoti to shayad main bachho ko akele nahin sambhal pata" aisha passed him a heart felt smile n both wished good night to each other n sameer went back to his flat. Next morning aadi n annu went back to their flat n seeing their grumpy faces sameer understood that they are still annoyed with him he said holding his ears "I am so sorry bachho kal meri friend mujhe legayi thi uski job lagi hai na to wo mere ssath celebrate karna chahti thi" n addi in annoyed tone "is liye aap hame bahar le jaana bhool gaye right" Sameer made a funny face n said "isliye to sorry keh raha hoon bachoo achha ab to maine aapki punishment bhi bhugat li ab to maaf kar do" Annu said "Ok maaf kiya par aapki wo friend bilkul acchi nahin hai aisha aunty bhi to aapki friend hai na wo to kabhi zidd kar ke aapko leke nahin gayi aur aapko pata hai aisha aunty kya kehti hai?" Sameer said "kya kehti hai wo?" aadi said "yahi ki aise kharab logo se kabhi dosti nahin karni chahiye" sameer smiled at this n annu seeing this in more annoyed tone said"app has kyu rahe hai aisha aunty bilkul sahi kehti hai aap aise logo se friendship nahin karni chahiye"sameer admiring their antics said "accha theek hai ab se main aise logo se dosti nahin karronga ab jaldi jaa ke tayyiyaar ho jao warna school ke liye late ho jaayega"

They all started with normal day sameer after dropping kids to school went to the office. In the break time sameer was smiling n thinking what kids said to him in the morning. Aisha as usual came to give his coffee n saw him lost n smiling n in teasing way said "Kya baat hai sir aapki friend aayi hai isliye bahut kush hai ?" sameer smiled n said "nahin aaj baccho ne jo kaha use yaad kar ke has raha hoon" aisha with confused looks asked "aisa kya kaha baccho ne?" sameer said in a naughty tone "yahi ki unki aisha aunty kehti hai ki mujhe karab logo se dosti nahin karni chahiye " n both burst out in laughter n sameer said "aisha aam taur par maa baap baccho se ye kehte hai yaha mere bachhe mujhse ye keh rahe hai" later sameer called the day off after paper work was completed n braught kids home. Suddenly aanu said "papa aap mujhe acchi si black dress dela doge?" sameer said "beta aapko 3 din pehle hi to red dress dilayithi phir ye black dress?" Annu said "papa maine dance contest main participate kiya hai isliye main school ki dress nahin pehnungi" she pouted sameer with a smile said "Ok done kal Sunday hai to kal le chalunga tumlogo ko par tumhe dance practice kaun karayega? Tunhari koi teachers" Annu said "nahin papa koi help nahin karega hame khud se karna hai aap sikhaoge mujhe?" sameer said with a smile "main to nahin par koi aur hai jo tumhe sikha sakta hai aur wo bhi aisa ki tumhe pakka first prize milega" annu asked in an excited way "really papa kaun hai mujhe batao na?" Sameer said "aapki aisha aunty wo aapko bahut accha dance sikha sakti hai Waise ye competition kab hai?" annu said "agle Saturday ko main abhi aisha aunty ko bolke aati hoon " with that annu ran towards aisha s flat aisha was bit surprised to see annu n said "kya hua annu beta kya baat hai?" she said "aisha aunty aapko meri help karni padegi aur mujhe dance sikhana hai mere dance contest ke liye " Aisha was surprised n asked "par aapko kisne bataya ki mujhe dance aata hai?" Annu said "papa ne kya aap mujhe nahin sikhaoge?" Makes a sad face n aisha said "kyu nahin sikhaungi "annu hugged aisha hearing this n says "Thankyou aunty"

Now till the contest day aisha use to teach her n she also selected a beautiful song for her to perform in her school. On the competition day sameer asked everyone to cheer annu as she was performing for the first time. On the competition day when they were about to leave suddenly sanjana barged in to meet sameer n kids. Sameer asked sanjana to come along to annu school so that she can also cheer her in performance she plainly refused n said "na baba main kabhi apne school function pe nahin gayi to bachho ke function pe kya jaaungi?" n she went away after that. Sameer n all ETF people drove to Annus School. Function started and all performed one by one n annu to performed n that to beautifully. All cheered for her n were happy about the way she performed. Later when it was time to declare the winner all were nervous n when annus name was declared she was delighted and came on the stage to receive the award. Annu thanked the guest n said that she would like to take this award from sameer n aisha as both helped her in the performance. Aisha was bit hesitant to go on the stage but sameer holded her hand n took her along annu hugged both of them n sameer n aisha gave her the prize. Aisha was extremely touched by annus gesture she had tough time to control her tears. When she returned back home he hugged her mother n started crying avantika said "kya baat hai beta tum ro kyu rahi hoo?" aisha said "maa aaj annu ne jo kiya wo main soch bhi nahin sakti thi usne aaj jo mujhe sammaan diya hai main hamesha yaad rakhugi use" suddenly a voice said "ye sammaan tumhara haqq hai aisha 1st prize to use tumhari vajah se mila hai" she turned to see sameer smiling at her she wiped her tears n sameer said "chalo ab annu ne bulaya hai kaha hai ki use ye prize tumhari vajah se mila hai to sabse pehle celebration main main tumhe leke aau " she smiled at sameer n went along with him to celebrate annus victory.

P RECAP: Sanjanas confessing her real feelings to sameer n sameers reaction 😉

So how was it please do let me know by ur comments as I write for u guys so all ur comments, basing appreciation is more than welcome n it will only improve my work so please keep commenting n excuse for typing errors if any love u all

Regards Goldie 😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
ttthhhaaannnkk uuu 4 d wwoonnndddeerrrfffuuulll update!
Haaww... ETF team..sand castle ...bachchon k sath!!
Arjun to pakka bachcha ban gya tha...
haaww... Aisha ne annu ko dance sikhaya... so sweet!!
arey wah... champ ko 1st prize v mil gya!!
gud...
bt sanjana.. usko v ana chaiye tha...
updt soon!
loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
aaww!!
batana... err.. nachna bhul gyi..
ME FFIIRRSSTT!!!
Dhinka chika!!

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