NEW FF: Caretaker - Part 5 - Pg 127 (21/02)

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Caretaker




Teaser

He lost his Brother Akash in a train accident which occurred when he was in London 2 months back. The same brother who had abandoned his whole family for just one girl. The family denied getting him married to his love which made him leave the house forever. He left all his wealth, status and money for one middle class girl Payal Gupta. Love can make anyone do anything. And he proved that. All this happened 3 years back and the family had now lost hope of his return.

If Akash's Love gave him everything, it still wasn't for long time. Akash and Payal both died in a Train Accident while they were on a trip to Simla with their one year old baby girl Palak. Thankfully Palak was saved and now HE was in search of her. He landed in Delhi and the first thing he asked his Men to find out the baby. He couldn't save his brother and give him his rights but he will definitely give the baby her needed rights in his family. The Cabin door was knocked and his manager came in.

Jeff: Sir, Baby Palak is currently with her Aunt who is now her care taker.

"Aunt?". he questioned in surprise.

Jeff: Yes Sir. Miss Khushi Gupta, Payal Gupta's younger sister. She stays alone in Lucknow with the baby.

"Have you contacted her regarding our claim on that child?"

Jeff: We did Sir. But she is too adamant to talk. She straight away denied handing the baby to the Raizada's. She said the Raizada's don't deserve any rights to claim the baby as they had already abandoned the baby's parents 3 years back

He fisted his fingers and got up from his chair.

"Book my flight to Lucknow. I will talk to that lady myself", giving this command , Arnav Singh Raizada left for his home to pack his stuff. It was decided he will not return back until he gets the baby from her.

Author's Note

Another Fan Fiction which revolved in my tiny head from long. I will officially start this by next week guys.





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Posted: 11 years ago
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Can't wait for it to start
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Wow...Delhi tycoon Lucknow mai ka Ishq Ladaai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice teaser... it reminds me of one of SRK's movie. .. I can't remember the name of the movie though. ..
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interesting

waiting for the story to unfold

thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oops lovely teaser, seems like i have fallen in love with your stories...
awesome, words fall short to send your praises for your good writing.
have you noticed, the irony of life we always get tongue tied to express good words, but our tongue lashes when we like to utter a bad word... that's mystery with words...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Man I am really excited for your ff's. How do you come up with these? They are amazing!
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Originally posted by: apekshash

oops lovely teaser, seems like i have fallen in love with your stories...

awesome, words fall short to send your praises for your good writing.
have you noticed, the irony of life we always get tongue tied to express good words, but our tongue lashes when we like to utter a bad word... that's mystery with words...

Yes thats so true. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Seem very interesting..
Plz continue soon
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Its simply aweasummm
loved the treaser concpt seems greart
wll surely join u yet again in othr journy

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