ArHi SS: A Thing Called Marriage#3 *Complete*

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Gagan

@GigiP

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#431

I just recently came across your story and I want to thank you...

Thank you thank you thank you sooo much...firstly i love the fact that its the person arnav and khushi are in love with as oppose to their appearance... secondly I love the realism in your story... the realistic moments, emotions, reactions and situations... i love the fact that they are human and not "perfect" i love it that there are flaws with the characters.

I especially love the fact that khushi and anjali are strong and independent women that are making their own decisions and not depending others to make decisions for them and write out their life..

Also you have written it well the concept and the way in which the story has turned out so far is fantastic i love it...

Please do continue soon looking forward to reading on... 😃

Edited by gagoo - 11 years ago

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bs1224

@bs1224

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#432

Anjali and.shyam are progressing in their marriage...

Still overcoming the hurdles of past...

Arnav is unique.. Who romances with his wife while talking to his PA...

Khushi would be show stopper...

Loved it

Finally their relations are turning in to a bit of husband and wife...

Thanks for pm

Sorry could not comment on last update...

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avchowdhury

@avchowdhury

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#433

read the whole story awesome

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#434

You describe very beautifully Shayam and Anjali scene...

😆 he kissed her while talking on the phone and Aman 🤢...

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chaitali

@chaitali12

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#435

shyam n anjali. .hope for the best. .
bad days are gone. .
omg..khushi n showstopper. .
will Arnav allow..
sounds great

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Aditi

@uv-crazyfan

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Teaser:

As he looked in her eyes, he was startled to find a steely determination in it like she would do anything to win her life against the horrible fear of death. He leaned back involuntarily the moment she looked up at him in something akin to...hope.

He felt terrible for her, wondering how is he going to handle all this alone. Just when everything was going good and now, he didn't know when will he be at peace again.

"You will handle everything, don't you?"

His heart and mind struggled for the shredded piece of sanity, threatening to disappear any moment.

Against his own best judgement, he found himself nodding. Making another promise.

So readers, what do you think is going on here? 😉 I am trying to type and update soon. I just need some time...till then feel free to wonder what twist ATCM is going to take...

one more thing, i have created an fb account for all the readers of my stories...feel free to ask anything...

just one warning, I don't socialize much...and my replies will be delayed a lot

link to my account :

http://www.facebook.com/aditi.mahajan.7737

Edit : This teaser is not at all about Khushi

Edited by uv-crazyfan - 11 years ago