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thank you so much marium
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unres
it was an amazingg update
you definitely build up to something exciting rather than open with dialogue or action that will immediately capture the reader's attention.
ratcheting up tension and creating conflict,
a story tat began wit sharon finding her mate
turned into one action packed series
you definitely hav the ability to grab the attention of ur readers by introducing an unusual character or an eye-catching setting or by presenting a shocking action or dialogue rife with conflict.
i was happy to see swayam was all worked up
n just like a protector of his clan
n his mate he called for the pack meeting
the short shiv-sharon meet was interesting
i am expecting more action b/w them
tat's the speciality of you as a writer you create events and characters so entrancing and real ,engrossing my mind till the very end
do update soon 🤗
-rosy
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