VirMan Three Shot - Stereo Hearts *Part 3 Updated! Pg - 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
awesome start
loved it
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
awesome start
waiting for the next one
Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: swathinair

Awesome

So manvi is working n responsible person

Diff story

Waiting for future updates


Thank you so much :D
Posted: 11 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: basket_101

Res

--Edited :)

Heyyy!
First of all, I was so glad I decided to check IF at such an odd time 😆
My first day back to classes, disgusting weather outside, and the sleep deprived chick
Bad combination
So I guess something turned out good this morning, and that was reading the 1st part of this TS 😃
I'm really eager to read more
I love the concept, it is all too real
I'm really glad Manvi spoke out; it was important for everyone to know about her feelings
Waiting for the next part 😳
Take care,
Hinal


Haha, aw it truly is a bad combination!
Thanks a ton! I'm glad you like it :D
Will update soon!

Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Syed695

Awesome Start..!! Like ur stories and 1 shot as wel..Waiting fr next n Thanks for the PM!!


Thanks a million :D It really means a lot!
Posted: 11 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Linaya

Well, I have read it once but I would love to read it all over again!


I am again saying this Stellu, You are such a wonderful writer!


Awww, really? Look who's talking :D Thank you so much dear! Love ya <3
Posted: 11 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: richa002

Awsome...i love concept...
U r such an amazing writer...
Manvi is feeling used...
Update soon... Thanxxx for.pm


Thank you :) Will definitely update today!!!!
Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Note: Italics = Part which Maanvi never sent!

Part II


"You love him" the words of Viren Jiju echoed in her mind. That was it; the 3 words which made her complicated life even more complicated. She sat up on the bed, wiping her sweat. It was 1:00 AM and the words still hadn't left her mind. It was a haunting thought, falling for her best friend. Her childhood friend. All this time, was there more to their friendship than they thought? The excitement she had in her for getting promoted looked no more to her. She remembered that when they were kids they used to trouble others and always stuck to each other through thick and thin. How could it be that she had fallen for him? The world was so cruel. When she realized the harsh truth, she could do nothing but cry. Of course, he was marrying Maya! When Maya entered their world, she changed everything. Virat and Maanvi were drifting apart and now she could almost sense it. She wanted to see Virat happy but by doing so, was she ruining her whole life? The depth of Jiju's words now seemed more clearer to her. It was not just 'you love him' but there was more to it than she thought. Was loving someone so hard? Was it necessary for every love story to be complicated? In her case, it wasn't even love story. It was just her who loved him and she wasn't even fully sure of it. How the night ended and the sun shone on her face so quickly, she didn't know but now she was sure about her feelings. Even in their friendship there was love, even in their fights but what seemed the worse to her was that even after realizing, the words didn't seem to come out. Now she truly understood that life wasn't as easy as it seemed.

You had moments of happiness but with that happiness comes great sadness too. Wherever success comes, there's failure too. And where there is love, there is sacrifice too.

-

1 month later

"Sir, I have to attend a wedding right now. How exactly do you expect me to move so quickly?... What? As soon as the wedding ends? That is like impossible in such a short notice... er yeah I get it... alright."

Jeevika entered the room where Maanvi was busy packing her clothes while getting ready.

"Mannu... why are you packing your stuff?" She asked quite surprised by the scene in front of her. "I'm sorry Di. I've been posted to Boston and my boss says that I have to move as soon as the wedding ends. He has booked the flight tickets for me. I'm so sorry but you know how important it is, right?" Maanvi hugged her Di tightly and sobbed. She took out all her frustration from the past month in the form of tears. Virat wasn't even able to talk to Maanvi. Whenever they thought of going out together and have fun, he would change the plans and go out with Maya instead. Their friendship wasn't the same anymore and she would be going away, leaving everyone she loved to a place where she would be a complete stranger.

The wedding bells rang and the priest chanted the prayers. Her eyes turned watery as she saw Virat's smiling face but there was a lost look in his eyes. As if he wasn't sure about his feelings. In the past month, Maanvi thought Virat would be sure by now but looking at him, it certainly didn't look as if he was. How could she tell Virat that she was going away and leaving forever? Would it hurt him as much as it hurt her?

-

Dear Virat,


I guess you would be married till the time I reach Boston. Life isn't the same anymore, is it? I deeply regret that I couldn't spend as much time as I was supposed to. But you are my best-friend and forgetting you would be like a lifetime punishment for me. I'm sorry but leaving all of you isn't my decision, I've been posted there because of my work and it's too important. I didn't get a chance to hug you tightly and say a goodbye; I didn't want you to be unhappy on your wedding. When you miss me, don't worry, I will reply to all your emails and yeah just remember our childhood days. Don't forget that at one time we used to be the most annoying kids ever and now look at us. You are married and I'm doing the job I always wanted to.

I'm sorry I couldn't say the words I was longing to say. I love you much more than you think I do and it's not the friendship love. I wish I could say it out loud but I know you don't love me back. You love me as a friend. In the past month whenever you had decided to go out with me, you changed your plans and that made me think if our friendship wasn't the same anymore. And now I truly think that it's true. Times change and we grow up but unfortunately it took more time for me to be mature enough, you're the wise dude!

Anyway, don't forget me! I'll always be there in your heart if not in front of you and promise me that you'll take care of Maya. Promise me that you'll never leave her and love her forever. Don't worry, everything will be alright. Your confusion won't be there anymore. Everything will be a clear picture.

Take care and stay happy!

Love,

Maanvi

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A/N

Thank you so much for the comments everyone! Sorry couldn't reply to everyone's comments. Will try to do so!
I hope you understood that the Italic part was the one which Maanvi never sent.
Love you all!

Stella

Posted: 11 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: lujeyn9

Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sound interesting
Waiting 4 next
Thanx 4 pm


Thank you! Hope you like Part 2 too :D
Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: meera.chaudhuri

Lovely update!! <3 Aww poor Mannu.. She is feeling so lonely.. Virat proposed Maya and now he is kind of scared of this whole marriage thing.. Eager to read more.. Please continue soon.. Thanks for the pm.. Take care :))


Thank you so much :D You too take care of yourself!

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