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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

aawww...it was beautifull... lovely lovelyyy mannu...

me loveddd ittt...

bas ek baat samaj ni aayi... how come he knew end mei ki her name was kria??? *kaanfussed*

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

this is beautiful...

but the suspense it creates is more beautiful...

And the way the two meet.. Haye.. aise toh fiction mein hi ho sakta hai.. KriYansh ke saath..

but I pity Rey.. bechare ka mann mein kitne ladoo futey hongey when he wouls have seen her wet.. her clothes sticking to her..

par bechare toh kiss mein hi nipat gaya... ;)

I like this mysterious K..

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smileysmi

@smileysmi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

beautiful..

written so fabulously...

👏

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

awesome update

totally loved it

lekin di ye apne drable kyu lika

continue na plsss

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Shanaya

@Lovelylavender

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Woooww yaar!!
Wonderful!!
D way u described reys confusion was sooprr!
Kria was megical!! Lol!!!
But d best was d last smil btwn dem!!
Luvd it!!
Thnx fr pm :)

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MANAVI KHATTER

@dazzlingmanavi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awsm os mannu

very different concept

i really loved it

kriyaansh kiss...hayeee

kriya a magical mystery...wow and very interesting

well written

u used all three words so yippie...hugs from my side

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madhu

@Madhu_ArSha

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

500 words AGAIN :'(
itna bada torture :'(
but mannu yaar.. Charan kaha h aapke? Matlab itte chottu se os mein u described d whole scenario so well.. Really Loved it...
Bahut massst os tha..

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

This is nice...
Too much into fantasy does no suit me...
So yeah this was some change

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Meenal

@Meesocute

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Very different concept.
Loved it..magical mystery
beautiful...
Very expressive...
Loved rey's emotions...
Phele toh i thought it was rey's dream..hehehe