Culaccino ~ An ArHi SS | Ch 3 Pg 45 Note Pg 58 (4/4/14)

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Arrey baba yeh kya hai????😲

A khushi who was tempted to cheat on arnav hmmm.

Kyon hua aur kaise hua yeh sab? Why was khushi even tempted to carry out something like this?

Intrigued FP and after following your other story i am sure that you will do justice to this intense drama so bring it on i say.

Thanks for the pm.

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meera06

@meera06

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

The prologue is so interesting..Waiting for you to reveal the story..

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jg12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Very interesting start - wondering what is the real reason as hope Khushi is not cheating on Arnav.

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FieryPhoenix

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: guggu
This is so interesting.

I am sure there is more to it. Khushi cheated on Arnav? That was one explosive conversation.

Looking forward for more. Very intriguing this is.

Thanks so much! Hopefully the story will live up to the expectation :D

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FieryPhoenix

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
Intriguing flow. Sounds like a cheating scandal. or maybe the guy/girl has been a douchebag.

Thanks for the feedback but I am confused...what do you mean it 'sounds' like a cheating scandal? I think that part is pretty clear...

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FieryPhoenix

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Anupama.
You totally know how to set in the emotion intended. I totally feel for Arnav and whatever be the case as she says that she couldn't understand ,didn't know..seems that he had said something hurtful and gone away.. And as much as I am repulsed and disappointed by the cheating, I am not able to bring myself against her. Need to know more.
Very intense FP..! Well written..

Reading very carefully, arent you? :D

Thanks so much for the feedback! I hope the story lives up to the expectation! :D

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FieryPhoenix

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Crazy4Sobti
It took a while, but my puppy face worked. It always works. 😳
Loved the title, so different and a deeper meaning. Mark left by a cold glass and I can already relate it to the prologue. Mark left by something that happened in the past. Wonder how thick and strong this mark is? Will they ever will be able to erase it?

This sounds pretty intense, FP. Bring it on!! You already covered so many genres in GHD that I am very confident, this story will excel the standards you set.

Good luck!!👍🏼

Thanks so much for your feedback! And for an analysis of the name as well which is spot on btw...the entire story is about that mark.

And for the last line, you deserve a hug, so yeh lo - 🤗

PS - Yes, its all due to your puppy face! Lol! :D