Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~ (THREAD 21)

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jisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#431

this was splendid...
from the very start...arnav trying to make khushi realize that he likes her...going out of his zone..
khushi...thought her swollen lips n hickeys as allergy affect... 😛😛😛
only if u remembered khushi ... 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
n then the shyam fiasco...
idiot shyam... 😛😛😛😛
n arnav slipping things out made khushi realize that arnav feels for her more than responsibility...
n the last part where she realizes her love for arnav...
n her decision to wait for arnav to realize this...
khushi's thoughts were so beautifully written n described...it felt the emotions are playing in front of our eyes...
w8ng for next..!!

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madhujasthi

@madhujasthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#432

The update is absolutely loving though I thought

There wont be any shyam after the initial part

Either way he had done gud for her

U told from jan we can have regular updates

Can we hope on that

Waiting for the next update eagerly to see

How khushi behaves after her realization of

Her love for arnav

Update soon

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Turkiye

@Turkiye

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Posted: 11 years ago

#433

nice update

The relationship moves at a realistic pace. Let's see how long it takes Mr. Raizada to get from 'you are mine' to 'I love you'.

I would love to see Khushi also emerging as a strong character rather than always needing someone or the other to protect her.

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Weasley7

@Weasley7

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Posted: 11 years ago

#434

I was a silent reader for a long time but realized that it is so wrong to not appreciate and encourage good writing. I am a big fan of your writing and the way you shape your characters. Thanks for your wonderful writing!

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aafan

@aafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#435

Wonderful update as always. Arnav was ruthless as accepted from him. He totally acted to his chAracter and justified.
Khushi is really sweet...
Allergy to alcohol ... Arnav needs a repeat performance to recap their first kiss

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hpr123

@hpr123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#436

Loved Arnav's way of showing he liked his wife. Esp when he says he lies her chuda and then goes on to elaborate how it clashes with most of her dresses and how the noise irritates him. Lol...

God, Shyam is quite dumb. He did not take into account the security cameras? At last, Khusi has realised the extent of Arnav's feelings. Waiting for the next part. :)

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sskaug25

@sskaug25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#437

A lovely update. Loved the title Arnav gave for khushi Mother Theresa. She don't want to give hurt to her enemy. So ASR back in action. Loved how he declared that you are mine from head to toe to khushi. khushi's realisation that she is in love. you have written her thoughts very well. Now ASR will have to sugar coat his dialogues to khushi. Everything was beautifully written. loved every bit of this chapter.