Bonded: Just for a favour!? PART 8 (CONCLUSION) Pg 71

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Arya Thakur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Part B they married wow...
Lovely...
I seriously Arnav in this story...
He is so cool!

Edited by Banilovesbarun - 11 years ago

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Arya Thakur

@RubblesTinTin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Part C Aww reading the ritual parts I am totally in love with this cool handsome!!!
He welcomed his bride in such a cute and adorable way! 😳
He has won my heart!!!

I am waiting impatiently please update soon!
It's again a different piece of writing from you liked it very much!
Thanks for it... 😃

Edited by Banilovesbarun - 11 years ago

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lavanyaraj

@lavanyaraj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

nice update...
hope their contract continues forever...

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Blozam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

really nice concept.loving the story...Arnav is such a caring person...❤️ ❤️ khushi will fall for him pretty soon..i m sure😆..its a SS right?..twists and turns might come up..hihi..excited...😃

hey,no offence but i wanted to make you aware of something, umm..the word you used in 'part B' has to be "Maa Shaa Allah", not 'mashallah'..its an Islamic+arabic word. the meaning changes the way we pronounce it..so, we have to spell it right.. I hope you understand 😊

Edited by Blozam - 11 years ago

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Raji Senthilkumar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Superb superb superb Parts
Love it a lot
Liked d way of story simple nd cutee Arshi
Will u pm me when u update
Eagerly wAiting 4 this story next update

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Claudia

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Amazing update
loved this caring Arnav...
waiting for the next

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NidhiAS.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Banilovesbarun
Part A: Awesome wow!
Arnav agreed to marry Khushi...
And it's just a contract marriage!? 😭
But I hope it just doesn't end there!

Hopefully!

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NidhiAS.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: Banilovesbarun
Part B they married wow...
Lovely...
I seriously Arnav in this story...
He is so cool!

I am loving writing about this cool ASR!

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NidhiAS.Raizada

@NidhiAS.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: Banilovesbarun
Part C Aww reading the ritual parts I am totally in love with this cool handsome!!!
He welcomed his bride in such a cute and adorable way! 😳
He has won my heart!!!

I am waiting impatiently please update soon!
It's again a different piece of writing from you liked it very much!
Thanks for it... 😃

I will update soon!

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NidhiAS.Raizada

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Posted: 11 years ago

#70

Teaser!

"I know, I haven't talked much about my family. Because I never felt the need too. I have my parents, but they never became one," he said with frequent pauses in between.

"I have grown up seeing their fights. Not a single day had passed when they didn't fight. I always wished for my mother's love if not dad's, but she didn't either, just like dad as he was always busy with fight if not that then his business. She wishes, still, I was never born. She calls me her biggest mistake," he told her.

I have started to write the next chapter!!!
Will update once I am done writing!