ABCD drabble OS by ..nams..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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A/N : ABCD challenge keywords- (Tantalize) (Vagabond) (Horn)- KriYansh


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"You know what Reyaansh, You are just a Vagabond! -A nomad!" the voice still rang in his ears. He had tried everything to get it out his system, but failed miserably!


The look of disappointment, the look lost-hope in her eyes made him more vulnerable. And then he left. Just like all the times. He left without a word, without a glance back.


He chased lions, he jumped with monkeys, he tangled himself with snakes; he did every freaking thing he was famous of! But it turned out that of all of a sudden, his passion had changed - from wild life to her.



His car raced through the familiar city. He couldn't fathom yet, why was he back again? His thoughts were broken by the sudden interruption of a girl. Who runs in the middle of highways? He wondered.


The horn of his vehicle went deaf into her ears, she was engrossed in saving the lost puppy. Her back facing him, he pulled the breaks with all his force. His car stopped inches away from her. but she hadn't bothered to look at him - who would have just killed her along with that puppy she was cuddling at the moment.

Once she left the puppy safely on the other side of the road she froze. There was a familiar pricking feeling at back side of her neck. When she turned around her almond eyes were met with the black ones. It was him!


She wanted to hit him, hit him so hard for leaving without a word. She wanted to kill him for giving her no reason to wait. It had always been this way! His passion for wild life and photography never kept him at home. He was a nomad in real sense.


But she was the one whom he sought comfort from. At the end of the day, when his expedition was done, it was her whom he came to. She had shared everything with him. From a pencil to her king sized bed. It would be absurd to say she shared her life with him, because he never really stayed in the life she was living.



"kria.." his voice sent shivers down her spine. Before they knew it, they were kissing each other. His kisses were tantalizing, she only wished to get more of him. But he had other things in his mind.

"shall we go home..wifey ? Your husband is very hungry!" he whispered huskily in her ears. Husband? He had never actually acknowledged her as his wife, she was his best friend. and their marriage was just his mother's last wish! For the first time in years she felt, she was married for real.


She hugged him, knowing too well why he was back. He smiled reciprocating her hug in equal passion. He knew, she knew him too well- more than he knew himself.


May be he wasn't a Vagabond anymore, he found his passion in her anymore. He was home finally!


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Trust me, never i have written anything within 500 word limit. this one is exactly 500 words 😆 and i am shocked by myself that i managed to pull it off with the word limit. warna my words are always infinte 🤣


oh and i have used all three words!!😉


for all who doesn't know the meaning of vagabond;


Vagabond : a person who wanders from place to place without a home or job.


so here in this OS, reyaansh is a freelance photographer/ a person fond of safari's.


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Read and Review!


And Very Happy New Year To All Of You! 🤗


with loads of love

nams! 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res.

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Reserved becoz I wanna be the first one to comment😆😆

It was a beautiful OS...

Nomad Reyaansh..walking away from Kria for his passion..

Everytime.

I loved how u described everything in 500 words so amazingly.

Truly spellbound.

Their feelings were penned down aptly.

Loved it in a true sense.

It had the magic throughout.

I could imagine the write-up process easily😃

Fabulous Drabble Nams.

Loved it.

*Hugs*

- Snigdha.
Edited by _Chocolate_ - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nams 🤗
Beautiful os 👏 👏
Amazingly written 👏
Loved it very much 😊
And a very happy new year 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awsome love how at last he called her wify n her emotions ll are well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was amazing and simple
loved it...

loved the you penned down!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Trust me di...
M realy hating dis Drable series waale os...
I was sooo excited for it as hume bahut saare OS milte but seeing d lenght.. My heart just breakes infinite times :'(
achh.. Enough of my rona dhona...
Gosshh di.. 500 word n still such a beautiful OS.. Really liked it ^_^
rey walked over kria just for his passion.. Waah ji waah..
Bt finally usmein akal aa gayi n he came back home :D
superb os di..
N yushh..
HAPPY WALA NEW YEAR TO U TOOO
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Beautiful OS
Amazing...
Thanx for pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful OS...
amazingly written dear..
loved it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nycly written! 👏
reyaansh nomad...
overall ausum blossom update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u used the words really well yar...i loved the concept described exactly in 500 words...not bad...vagabond rey was actually interesting...gud job

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