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This comment is gonna be random. I will simply state points that really stood out for me in this cute TS.

- The first time Arnav sees Khushi, he is clean bowled, the first time he emails her he drops the smug sexy, the first time he meets her he wants to have babies with her 😆

- You got me at the start! I thought it was Khushi who was pregnant with Arnav's best friend child. Thank God it was La. Phew!

- In this TS Khushi doesnt even make entry till 2/3 updates.

- Well, I am not for planet Earth either. My knowledge of cricket is zilch. Meko ek sexy, successful, sweet Raizada milega??? 😳

- When he was thinking the date is proving hard for him in many ways, I thought ke 'Abe... it is not even a date for her!'

- Only a person as arrogant as him about his virility can feel the desire to kiss someone senseless hit his groin of all places ☺️

- I liked the metaphor of gypsy thoughts wandering 👍🏼

- Every time she plays with her lips, he gets all the dirty thoughts and here she made him wait two years to kiss him. But the gentleman that he is... he never forced her either ❤️

- She made him wait another three for the baby he wanted since the first time he met her??? 😲 And all for a little lie he spoke to meet her???? *Face palm*

- He stayed true to his words... As shameless about hickeys whether given by his friend to his wife or by himself to his Khushi 😃

- She calls him 'ji'... Kya bolun ab?

- Btw, the emails gave the story a very contemporary flavour... 😊

finally caught up with the final two parts, what an amazingly cute series Shikha, seriously. Your Arnav as ever is adorably drool worthy and your Khushi so beautifully innocent. I smiled from start to finish with this series and it really was the perfect end and start to my year!! Manno :)

The meeting between Arnav and Khushi was hilarious to read as his chat up lines fell short of the mark on an oblivious Khushi. 😆 Still he made up for it in the end, even though Khushi made him wait a long time before she married him.

lovd d story.
Lovd d background.
Superbly written.
Bt wat was missing is how arnav wooed her.
Ur os nd ts r more interesting dan ur ffs.
Pls no offence, bt i love shapit nd workholic.
Update dat too soon

I thought that it's Khushi at the first but then heaved a sigh of relief after reading La's name...
Their e-mail conversation was hilarious...
Loved the three shot... :)

its really nice concept
it was short ...sweet ...content story
loved it
the concept is awesome

That was so cute.

Brilliant end to a very cute TS! Thank you Shikha!

just read the final part... extremely sweet it was...