|Amour Indefinitely| ~ KR Drabble Series #2 (Part 41: pg 144, pms ltr) - Page 10

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Posted: 11 years ago
#91
nice update
krisha convo was amazing
in cabin convo btw kriya nd rey's pa was nice
kriya possessiveness for rey was cool
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Posted: 11 years ago
#92
Loved it
krish convo was too gud..
I want sharon to cum..she can help in bringing kriyaansh closer..
I liked d way kriya defended saying kiara is nt her step daughter.
The best part was kriya bossing over rey.
Loved d way she shooed his p.a. Away...good going kriya
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Posted: 11 years ago
#93
Sorry but this like tab isnt working.. mere cell ke through nahi ho paa raha hai..

Anyways.. I read both the parts..

I loved 23 wala more.. because there the chocolate cake was so well executed.. and when Rey expresses that its not just Kaira who loves chocolate cake as well.. I was like.. awww...

Then his lips lingering more than needed.. haye.. I just loved those bits..

I am so glad she will be seen the office as well.. ab sirf gharelu romance nahi.. office scenes bhi milenge..

well.. I thought Kria would kill that PA.. for being so close to Rey..

I am looking forward for more of it...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#94
arrey I forgot to mention that KriSha convo.. KriYansh ke chakkar mein sab bhul jaungi..

throughoutthe KriSha convo I was like kahin Rey sunn na le... Plus I expect Sharon's visit, sometime soon, to Singhania mansion.. or office..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#95
Kriya SHaron convo was nice...sharon telling her that chapter of love will never be over!!
Which btw Kriya proved it the moment she got jealous n possessive for rey!!!

Loved the update!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#96
waoo.. shar's entry is supr kool nd it made kri restless thinking about her feelings..
gr8.. waiting eagerly for nxt prt.. update soonish..😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Super Awesome

Ahmazing

Krisha were Fab

loved possesive kria

n rey he didn't evn realize dat

Update Soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
Pehle toh new thread keliye Mubarkan 🤗
2-2 chappy nai parhe thay mai ne ...

Kaira really is Cute ^_^

Aree Wah!! Kriya ne woh puraani 'Kheer & Halwe' wali rasam tor di , Kamal kita 😎...
Ishtyle se cake pesh kiya , Bua Dadi bhi kuch nai bol pai 😆...

Rey-Kriya will be working together , aur ziyada time together , maza aane wala hai 😉...

Aww!! Sharon bhi inni Cute hosakti hai , socha na tha 😆...
KriSha Bonding , Sahi sisters hain ...
Kya shi pehchaan ki Sharon ne , Bua Dadi as Villian and KR's story love story ka start 😉...
Liked how Kriya said 'My Daughter' ^_^

Aahaan!!! Jealousy starting 😉...
Kitna straight forwardly Kriya ne Rey ko keh diya , Sahi going , ese he rakhna chahiye apne Husbands ko , even if he is ur Boss 😆...

Lovving the story ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
#99

Originally posted by: lovely7010

Hello everyone. Here's the next update. Before going to the update have a look the child whom I imagine as Kaira.




Isn't she so cute?? Anyways you guys enjoy the update.



Part 23:



The next day Kriya was serving dadi bua and Preeti their morning tea when the old lady spoke.


"Kriya aap iss ghar ki nayi bahu hai aur rasam(ritual) ke hisaab se aap ko kuch meetha banana hai. Aap ko aake ek hafta ho gaya hai lekin aapne abhi tak rasoi mein kadam bhi nahi rakha. Isilye hum chahte hai ki aap aaj meetha banaye shaam ko."


"Ji dadi bua."


"Did I hear meetha? Whose making and what?" Rey asked entering living room.


"Kriya is going to make a dessert and what it would be that only Kriya knows." Preeti said.


"I haven't thought yet what I'll make. Let's see what idea I get." Saying this Kriya left for the kitchen.


After having breakfast everyone was waiting for Kriya's dessert.


"Mommy hurry up, I'm getting late for school." Kaira said.


"Coming princess." Kriya shouted from inside. After a moment Kriya entered the dinning area with a cake in her hand.


"Chocolate cake!!! Yayy..." Kaira exclaimed.


"Kriya cake at this hour of time?" Ranvijay questioned.


"I know dad, cake after breakfast is quite odd. But as the ritual states a newly wed bride has to make a dessert irrespective of what it maybe. So I thought why not make something different as kheer and halwas are quite common. Plus Kaira loves chocolate cake.


"I'm impressed Kriya. I like the way you think beta." Ranvijay praised her.


"Thanks dad."


"Cake looks yummy Kriya, serve it fast." Preeti said. Dadi bua wanted to point out some mistake but she had no scope for that as Kriya had baked the cale really well.


"Mommy it is delicious."


"Thanks sweety. Now finish it off quick I'll get your school bag." Saying this Kriya left for Kaira's room.


As she entered the room, she felt someone's prescene as well. On turning around she clashed into Rey. They were so close to each other. Their faces were just inches apart.


"Rey you here? Any work?" She asked wriggling to get out of his grip. But he pulled her even more close. The more she struggled the more he pulled her towards him.


"I wanted to inform you something."


"Wh...what?"


Leaning in towards he whispered making her shiver. "Not only Kaira loves chocolate cake but also her daddy loves chocolate cake." His breath lingered on cheek making her shudder in response.


"And the cake was deliciously yummy." He said kissing her cheek. His lips lingered on her cheek more than necessary as she clutched his shoulder for support.


He pulled back and stared her as she did the same. Both of them were going through a whirlpool of emotions. "I should be going else Kaira will get late." Kriya said.


"Uh, sure." Rey replied and stepped back watching her leave the room. Once she left he mentally slapped himself. "Argh...Rey you've become an idiot."


Rey returned back after dropping Kaira to school. Usually he leaves for office after dropping Kaira to school but today he had to return back as he forgot an important file. All the family members were assembled in the living room except badi bua.


"Err...mom, dad, Rey...emm...I actually wanted to ask something."


"Go on Kriya, you don't need to be nervous." Ranvijay said.


"Kya puchna chahti hai aap?" The old lady asked while making herself comfortable on the couch.


"Uh...Can I join the office? I get bored sitting at home. So I thought if I can join the office...only if you permit. Also, Rey need a personal assisstant and I have no problem assissting you."


"Of course you can join dearm." Ranvijay said.


"Ranvijay aap kaise ha keh sakte hai iss baat ke liye? Ghar ki bahu office mein kaam kare yeh achi baat nahi hoti. Kriya office nhi jayegi."


"Bua ji please. Aur aaj kal toh har ladki kaam karti hai aur ghar bhi sambhal sakti hai. Please maan jaiye."


"Humne keh diya na nahi. Aur Payal bhi ek doctor thi. Uhone humare kehne par apni naukari chod di thi. Jab vo humari baat maan sakti hai toh aap kyu nahi?"


This was the limit! Another comparison with Payal and she would burst out like a volcano. "Vo Payal thi aur mein Kriya hu. Hum dono mein bahut farq hai." She replied in an irritated tone trying to sound normal.


Just then, Rey got call from Mr.Bhalla saying that they've finally recruited a lady as Rey's PA.


"Kriya I'm sorry but the post of my PA has been filled just a moment ago." Rey replied. Kriya's face fell in an instant. "Kriya get ready quick as I'm getting late for office." Rey said.


"But why do I need to get ready?


"Because you are joining Singhaniya Constructions from today. Just because there is no vaccant post in the office doesn't means that you can't join us. Now hurry up."


"Thanks Rey." Kriya replied with a smile.


"Keep smiling always. You look even more beautiful." He said staring her. Once he realized that he blurted it out infront of everyone, he said "I'll br waiting for you outside," and left hurriedly leaving behind a flushed Kriya.




Like and review please. PMS will be sent tomorrow as I'm a bit busy.


loved it so so so much
Great work 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
update will be up by tonight

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