arshi-( Ippknd)- OS -The Cinderella Kiss * Completed * - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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just read cindrella kiss this is lovely too trying to find sheesh mahal
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Posted: 11 years ago
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was a beautiful one...I loved your writing style and characterization of Arshi.. It really went well with the story... I think actually it made the story more interesting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 1...
Sweet... both accident kiss... nice touch
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Posted: 11 years ago
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chapter 2...
all emotion..running high ..with the close
friendship arnav and khushi share...

finally the clue ...for the kiss
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 3..
Nice both found each other... all worries out
nice...

love the ending...
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I loved how you infused the story of Cinderella into one of Arnav and Khushi.
While it was the slipper in the earlier one, this tale had a much more abstract sign of recognition.

Loved it!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved how you presented the fairy tale in your own way.
Very sweet story.
Thanks Eccentrica, for the link.

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