ArHi SS : !!Eclipse!! *Thread 2 link, PG 1*

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zebali

@zebali

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#721

fist part was awesome.

👏👏👏.

loved it.

tf sharing.

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oopppsss

@oopppsss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#722

Awesome prologue...very interesting start.I am in Arshi land already...16+ content is adding to their passion for each other. Well done.

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oopppsss

@oopppsss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#723

Hey Kiran...your own version of the fashion show,I must say is mesmerising and the lead's chemistry is sizzling...I am loving it 😉

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: oopppsss
Awesome prologue...very interesting start.I am in Arshi land already...16+ content is adding to their passion for each other. Well done.

Originally posted by: oopppsss
Hey Kiran...your own version of the fashion show,I must say is mesmerising and the lead's chemistry is sizzling...I am loving it 😉

Thank you.. 😳

I am glad you're enjoying the story so far :)

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oopppsss

@oopppsss

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#725

Chapter 2 is hot hot hot.they are both in a daze...so am I.

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oopppsss

@oopppsss

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Posted: 11 years ago

#726

Superlike...they both are equally strong individuals...the story is getting interesting.

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sanjeewi15

@sanjeewi15

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#727

Interesting story... still in the 4th part... will give descriptive comment after reading the other parts... :) :)

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Shameela

@Sam_Faizal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#728

Just about to start reading eclipse, will be commenting more soon.

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Pearl_Oyster

@Pearl_Oyster

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#729

Originally posted by: jani_faizal
Just about to start reading eclipse, will be commenting more soon.

You're most welcome to join this 'Eclipsed' journey of Arnav Khushi 😉

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AASHI

@aashi_taichi

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#730

As per ur rule commenting for 5 chapters in dis...d prologue was so damakedaar with desperation n z dt guilt in khushi words n eyes...here he z rude n grumpy at its peak...deir meeting z as epic of her falling n him saving his damsel in distress
n dn d ferious counter back to eachother...his proposal was so insane n khushi did right in showing him dt not all girls belong to his criteria of thinking i like dis trait of her alot...abhay z falling for khushi cannt she realize it...d attration z hanging like sword bern them to cut it at any tym wn dey let deir guard down esp. Khushi