ArHi SS : !!Eclipse!! *Thread 2 link, PG 1* - Page 73

fist part was awesome.

Awesome prologue...very interesting start.I am in Arshi land already...16+ content is adding to their passion for each other. Well done.

Hey Kiran...your own version of the fashion show,I must say is mesmerising and the lead's chemistry is sizzling...I am loving it 😉

Originally posted by: oopppsss

Awesome prologue...very interesting start.I am in Arshi land already...16+ content is adding to their passion for each other. Well done.

Originally posted by: oopppsss

Hey Kiran...your own version of the fashion show,I must say is mesmerising and the lead's chemistry is sizzling...I am loving it 😉

Thank you.. 😳

I am glad you're enjoying the story so far :)

Chapter 2 is hot hot hot.they are both in a daze...so am I.

Superlike...they both are equally strong individuals...the story is getting interesting.

Interesting story... still in the 4th part... will give descriptive comment after reading the other parts... :) :)

Just about to start reading eclipse, will be commenting more soon.

Originally posted by: jani_faizal

Just about to start reading eclipse, will be commenting more soon.

As per ur rule commenting for 5 chapters in dis...d prologue was so damakedaar with desperation n z dt guilt in khushi words n eyes...here he z rude n grumpy at its peak...deir meeting z as epic of her falling n him saving his damsel in distress
n dn d ferious counter back to eachother...his proposal was so insane n khushi did right in showing him dt not all girls belong to his criteria of thinking i like dis trait of her alot...abhay z falling for khushi cannt she realize it...d attration z hanging like sword bern them to cut it at any tym wn dey let deir guard down esp. Khushi