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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina25

awesome...😊

but confused in starting😕
love this part
riya came to know arjunis her best friend😊
but still many more truth have to know😊
con soon thanks for pm



Originally posted by: atharin

nice update dear
loved it
continue soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Black_Angel

Lovely update👏

Thanks for pm



Originally posted by: pango

awesome update

loved it
thanx for pm
continue soon



Originally posted by: amazingariya

oh! simply awsm updt lovd it😛



Originally posted by: amazingariya

oh! simply awsm updt lovd it😛

Originally posted by: cutiepieShreya

tooo nyc update...
its jst awsm...
poorr riya...
bt wht hpnd 2her
hope tht arjub ubdrstnd his feelngs 4riya
luved it...
plzzz dr cont soonnn...
n do pm me of ur stories



Originally posted by: GOLD.A

It was so beautiful piya

& painful as well
poor riya & Arjun both are suffering on their ways
Marias son is so sweet
at least he brought smile on her face
poor riya is deeply broken of all this
what arjun 2 weeks se ghar nahin aaya😲
OMG riya sses the diary that arjun is her childhood friend
ab aur kitna pareshaan karogi use😭😭😭
Arjun too was stunned to know that riya knows the truth
Riya is really softto handle this
OMG she fainted hope she is fine
Thanks for the PM
Continue soon😊


u wellcom thank buddy...for tje comments...just wait u will get to know all...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: skrafty

awesome update

interesting
continue soon



Originally posted by: 1993.ssg

Superb update. Arjun really love Riya but he is still want revenage. Riya loved Arjun? Love rahul riya moment. Who is man and the girl in the starting? Thanks for pm. Conti soon.





Originally posted by: Aabish_02

Awesome superb part
love it
cont soon



Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm part
Loved it dear
Supperbbb... as always...
Cont sooon
Thanks for PN

Originally posted by: Aabish_02

Awesome superb part
love it
cont soon



Originally posted by: angelarya

Awesome
superb
loved it
finally Riya comes to know the truth
Continue soon
Thanks for the pm



Originally posted by: pihu_angad

awesome update dear..

bechare Ariya... misunderstandings khatam hi nhi hoti unki...
continue soon..




Originally posted by: nata.aa

wow
superb
mind blowing update
loves shree n arjun convo
rahul is so cute
whose bring smile on riya's face
loved it
OMG wat happen to riya
plz conti soon
thnx for pm dr



thanks buddy for the comment u will come to know all very soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashmijoseph

awesome update

continue soon dear...

Originally posted by: ArjunfanNAJAAN

its an awesome update.
ow rahul is cute.
thanks for the PM.

Originally posted by: tani.m

simply amazing update
loved it
Thnks for pm.
.plz update soon


thanks buddy
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sudikshya

that was a super duper updt rahul is so cute😛he made riya smile by his childish antics 😊ohh little rahul went to arjun's di's room and riya was afraidas the haunted memory came again to her mindwow she read arjun's diary and came to know that he is he childhood best friend junu [as i have read this in previos updts am i right ??]😲poor riya locked herself in her room and arjun came home after soo many days wow she hugged him😳but soon pushed him away aur sara sach jan ne ke baad uska gussa hona jayaj tha omg iss arjun ki buddhi bhrasht ho gayi thi kya ?😡jo usne riya ko firse daraya dhamkaya huh buddhuram bechari riya faint hope she gain conciousness soon 😭and godd who was torchering thay lady 😡i think it was mr mukherjee torchering latika as she failed to seduce arjun urrggghhh😡 this mukherjee use toh nark mein bhi jagah naa mile😡plzz isska pardafash jaldi kardo DII taki ariya romance dekhne ko mile really want to see some😉plzz jaldise ariya ke misunderstanding dur karo aur love track with the spice of romance shuru karo 😳😳😳 waiting waiting and of course overallmindblasting update 👏and pllzz apni iss choti behen ko thodi help kardo as i dont know much about computer programming so mujhe iss forum ke aadhe se jyaada cheejein samajh nahi aati so plzz mujhe apni buddy list mein shamil kardo and ho sake toh apna blog address ghi de dena really want to read all full updts of this story plzz mein toh lambe lambecomments bhi deti hoon so plzz continue soon as i told u before also 😊that this story has got into my nerves and cant survive withot reading it😉 so plzz apni iss choti behena ke liye plzzz contine sooon pplzzz 😭


thank u for the comment...i will try but right now only give teaser.. ups just relex...all past going to reval very soon...
yes i add u in my buddy...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shivi1997

Hope arjun ko jaldi pata chal jaye b4 it gets too late..
Main ni chahti ri ki halat arjun ki di ke jaisi ho..
I wanna kill ri's dad
he is a bloody jerk n a b*****d
i just hate him..
Hope ri get well soon



Originally posted by: Areesha566

awesome didu

love it👏👏
i don't think mr. mukh is behind all this😕
rahul is soo cute love him a lot🤗
poor riya😭😭😭
plz plz continue soon
waiting




Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

nice realy nice

amazing update
just loved it
eager to read more
update soon plz


thanks buddy just little wait...everythink gonna be all right
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanafr

Fab fantastic awesome update
loveitt api
thanks for pm
cont soon

Originally posted by: shahela15

Lovely update...both arjun and riya are suffering but in their own way

Now riya knows arjun is her childhood friend

Riya fainted...hope she is fine and also hope that the mu between Ariya will end soon

Plz update soon.


thanks buddy just wait for few more chap...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 19-:TEASER...

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I will kill u Arjun if anything happened to my daughter...
Mr mukh yelled...

Do whatever u want i dont care...Arjun shouted back...
Now leave my way...
U have no right to stoped me...
U r talking about right..???
I have all dam right...she is my daughter ..mr mukh said...

Not now ..she was ur daughter mr mukhergee...
Now she is my wife...only mine...
No one have a right on her n specialy u...
.
Now just leave my way...n get the hell out of here...
But Arjun ek baar hamen Riya se milane do...mrs mukhergee plead...
.
Plz Arjun...u considered me as ur mother...
It was past mrs mukhergee...
N past cant changed for any one..

Mujhe achhe se pata hai, what kind of people u r...
But Arjun beta...
Dont called me beta...Arjun shouted back...
.
Ur husband was the one...u distroyed my life..my family..
I will make sure he will pay for that...
.
Mr mukhergee:- Tumhen jo sonchana hai soncho, even tumhen jo kerna hai vo ker lo...but ab Riya tumhare sath nahi rahegi...
.
Or eske liye mujhe jo kerna pade main vo karonga...
.
Arjun:- ohh realy...Main bhi dekhata hoon tum Riya ko mujhase dur kaise le jaate ho...
He give one dead glare...pushed mr mukhergee aside..n walked inside the ICU...
~~~

He went close to her and stood by her side...
She was lying life less on a bed...


He first was afraid to touch her

She was going to open her eyes, but didn't when Arjun spoke up.

"Riya, if you think that I am capable of your apology, please forgive me,"

he whispered, and wrapped his hands gently around her hand.

His voice was heavy that reflected the pain in his heart. His voice was broken as he was trying to held back his cry ...

I have lost many things in my life...its difficult for me to trust every one...
Bez hamen jin per sabse jayada bharosa hota hai...
Akser vahi hamara bharosa todaten hai...
.
I m realy sorry..bez i dont trust u...i thought ...he gluped...i thought..u r involed in all that...but i was wrong...
.
U r innocent n i punished u..for no reasion...
I know u will never forgive me but belived me Riya...

"I still love you, Riya...If you
would ask, I would put my heart in front of you...

Riya, today I want to tell you something that I never found the courage to say it to you...
.
.
Okk wait for update...but there is one surprised...
Must be few reader dont like...lolll
.
.
NOW U WILL SEE..ARJUN CARE SIDE FOR RIYA...
IS RIYA BELIVED ARJUN AGAIN...???
OR ITS RIYA...WHO WILL help ARJUN TO COME OUT HIS PAST..??
JUST WAit...
PS:-I M REALY NOT SATISFY THE RESPONSE...
AT LEAST GUYS LEAVE FEW WORD...BUT FORGET IT...
I M NOT GOING TO WRITE ANY LONG UPDATE NOW..THATS IT...
.
LOVE PIYA...

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
i m first
great teaser

looking forward to the update

pls give long updates


dont punish your regular readers.

we always look forward to ur next updates,not just bleeding heart, but for other updates
too

👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
wonderful teaser 👏
piya

waiting egarly for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...waiting to see arjun removing all of riya's pain with his love n care...continue soon di...😊

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