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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

This seems really interesting. I'd love to read more of it.

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Param

@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

interesting prologue.. action packed drama with romance.. wow sounds cool.. do continue soon.. HAPPY WRITING 😊

thanks for pm 😃

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kutkut12

@kutkut12

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

nice concept but I just wanted to know what is FBI doing in Delhi?😊 Did you mean CBI because as far as I know FBI is in USA.

But I must say that the story looks promising.👏

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DaisyHoney

@DaisyHoney

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Awesome
Waiting for the story to unfold

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

sounds interesting
looking forward to reading more

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Brilliant start... the concept sounds so interesting like the CSI and Criminal Minds series...

Well Arnav must be the man in the suit na...

Eagerly waiting for the update... 😃

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

oo this is so interesting

can't wait to read more

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Wow Excellent Start and concept is too tempting...

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#29

great start dear and Im loving the concept 😳

looking forward to read more

thanks for the PM

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#30

ANNE... I am here

genuinely sorry for being this late

Well prologue is awesome

waiting for the story

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