ARAKSHI FF: JEEVAN KAY DIN T2 (update part 50 ) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
Sakshi n her bhabhi convo was nice
her every word completely reflected
her love,care,concern n respect for Arjun
it was really nice to witness such caring side of her
while loved Arjun
his consoling words and new ideas ideas
to handle this life all were superb
his bonding with Rahul was nice
eagerly waiting for the party
n to meet her family
and also how our ACP handles them in his own way
thanks for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely Update

Liking it more day by day

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Posted: 11 years ago
update it please please please😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
again mast update...
yar i advice u in sabki ek hardcopy nikal kar book banva lo...i sure dhamadum bikri ho jayegi..😉
so some 🤢 people are there in sakshi's familiy...
but not to fear when our arjun is here...
sakshi concern is too cute...
love arakshi's understanding...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update...
Who is this Ravi????
Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 11 years ago
HERE IS ONE OTHER PART I HOPE YOU LIKE IT
PLEASE COMMENTS ON IT AND LET ME KNOW
THANKS

JEEVAN KAY DIN PART 41

Everyone busy arranging party...catering, decoration, venue... this mansion have a one big hall...they decide to arrange party there...bhabhi invite each and every family member...baba is also very happy...he is fine...he is walking...without short breathing...eating light food...doing their own work...he feel fit himself...and happy to see his son interacted with others.

Rahul plan something to surprise sakshi and whole family...rahul know that sakshi is very shy girl and this is really big surprise for her...as she never accepted anything like this from arjun...even arjun is also hesitate to do it but rahul make ready him to do it...he tell arjun that in his family no body feel bad...instead they like this way of entertaining...because this is only family gathering...no outsider invited...so, everyone comfortable and enjoying these situation...first he refuse but in the end he agree... sakshi is a good poetry writer and write beautiful poetry...rahul show him sakshi diary...both choose one best creation and discuss all related details.

Soon, the party day comes...guest start coming till afternoon...driver and cars constantly arriving and dropping guest...(some guest comes from far, like Scotland, Ireland etc) dev and rahul check the final arrangement...

Hall is very big and wide...they hire very good catering company...they provide food with their best waiter...decorator comes and decorate the hall with flowers...small multicolour light bulbs and different satin ribbons...many big floral arrangement places ...hall floor covered with thick maroon carpet...different fragrance candles places in several places...one side have piano...near one long wall...table set for buffet...opposite side some chairs...in the middle of hall one big glass chandelier hanging...which is the main source of light...

Arjun and rahul visit the hall and satisfied everything...then they decide go and ready their self for party...both back at home side...while talking and discussing some when sakshi bump with rahul.

Rahul: oh ho, dekh kar... (He save her to fall but look her face he is bit worry and asks) kiya hua...yeh mooh per bara kyun baj rahay hain...but sakshi just ignore and rush to go calling... bhabhi, bhabhi kahaan hain aap...bhabhi.

Arjun and rahul look each other and shook their shoulder...but follow her want to know the reason of her trouble...

Sakshi ask: bhabhi, don't tell me kay woh sab jo aap nay meray room main rakha hay...mujhay woh pehanna hay...

Bhabhi: haan, wohi pehanna hay...she said calmly.

Sakshi thud on sofa...and look bhabhi innocently.

Sakshi: don't tell me kay bari mammi nay behja hay...she look her with hope.

Bhabhi smile and said: haan, unhoon nay hi behja hay...waisay toh woh tumhari birthday par daina chah rahi thi but tailor nay time par diya nahi...phir un ko pata chala kay tum idhar aa rahi ho...toh unhoon nay socha kay khud hi dain day gi...

Sakshi: kiss kay haath behja hay...

Bhabhi: raveena kay haath...woh sab unhoon nay raveena say behjwaya hay... na sirf tumharay liyay bulkay...arjun kay liyay bhi ek jora behja hay...aaj hi pehannay kay liyay...

Sakshi: ok, sirf ek baat confirm kar dain...kay unhoon nay pandit ji ko toh nahi hire kiya hayna...pata chala jiss tarah... (she pointed on her ring) unexpected engagement hui thi...pheray bhi unexpected hoon jain...

Don't worry sakshi, suhaag raat to unexpected nahi hogi...rahul tongue slip...

which make sakshi more angry and fierce...she get the cushion in hand and throw on him...he ready for her bouncer...so easily catch cushion saying: out...you are out, yaar...

sakshi run towards him and he quickly move other way...now, scene is this...rahul run to safe himself from sakshi hands...bhabhi fail to cool down sakshi...arjun hide his smile and enjoy the moment...

rahul scream on arjun: aaray bhai baccha lo mujhay warna apni shaadi...aur suhaag raat say pehlay main is duniya say kooch kar jaon ga...

arjun stop sakshi by holding her waist and capturing her in his arms...

she still try to free herself saying: please, arjun aap choor dain mujhay aaj is ki khair nahi hay...I will kill you...rahul...forget your wedding and go to hell your wedding night...you are gone...I'll see you, now (she scream on him with full fierce)

arjun: come on sakshi, cool down...kiya hua hay...mujhay batao...after some fail attempt to free herself she stop struggling.

Arjun leave her and she ignore everyone and go...but first give rahul I will see you look and left the room...arjun look bhabhi...she holding her head and sit on sofa.

Arjun : kiya hua hay...kiss baat par itna gussa...aaya hay...sakshi ko.

Bhabhi: koi bari baat nahi hay...bari mammi nay uss kay liyay suit behja hay kay aaj pehanna...zara heavy kaam ka hay...bas uss pay gussa kar rahi hay...khair chooro...tum bhi jao...tumhara bhi unhoon nay jo suit behja hay...woh press kar wa kay rakh diya hay...go and ready...hhhmmm...rahul you also go and ready ...we are already getting late...giving these instruction bhabhi goes inside and they goes to their room.

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Edited by Rehana25 - 11 years ago
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Arjun take 15 minutes to ready...he come out to see is everybody is ready or not...he found aditya(five year old boy) watching TV...he is sitting on sofa and watching kungfu panda...arjun join and sit next to him...aditya look once him ...pass smile and again watching movie...then he remind something...he pause his movie and come near him saying:

Aditya: uncle, aap police main hain...dado ki tarah...

Arjun smile and said: yes, I am in police.

Aditya thinking some and innocently ask: aap...culprits ko maartay hain...un kay saath fight kartay hain... (arjun nodded) then you are well known for karate and kungfu...

Arjun: yes, I know both of things...but why you ask?

Aditya: aap kay bas karate ki kaun si belt hay?

Arjun: black belt...arjun answer promptly.

Aditya sit straight with excitement and said: really, aap black belt ho...aap jab fight kartay ho toh aap ko un say dar nahi lagta...(he ask with full excitement in his eyes)

arjun: nahi mujhay toh dar nahi lagta.

aditya: agar aap ko choot lag jay toh...aap kay khoon nikalnay lagay ga...phir dard toh hota hoga...phir bhi dar nahi lagta.

Arjun smile to hear his innocent talk and said: hhmm...choot toh lagti hay aur dard bhi hota hay...

Aditya cut him short and said: iss liyay main police officer nahi banna chahta... .(he pouted his face...but continue saying) magar mujhay acchay lagtay hain...police walay...mujhay karate bhi pasand hay...

Arjun ask: aap ko police walay kyun acchay lagtay hain.

Aditya: iss liyay kay woh bad people ko catch kartay hain...magar jab un ka khoon nikalta hay toh mujhay bilkul accha nahi lagta...mujhay dar lagta hay...

Arjun shift more near him...hold and make him sit on his lap...kiss on his cheeks and said: dekho...aabhi tum nay khud hi kaha kay police walay bad people ko catch kartay hain...agar woh bhi tumharay tarah darnay lagain toh phir un bad people ko kaun pakray ga...jab koi un ko pakray ga nahi toh phir woh acchay logoon ko tang karain gay...(he fill power in his sentence) iss liyay police walay apnay dard ko bhool kar sirf yeh yaad rakhtay hain kay un ko iss duniya say bad people to catch karna hay aur achhay people ko sakoon say rehnay daina hay...phir un kay saath acchay logoon ki best wishes bhi hoti hain...aur sab say barh kar opperwalay ka asheerwaad hota hay...jo un ko her bari pareshaani say door rakhta hay...aur jahan tak baat khoon nikalnay ki hay...woh to thoori dair ki baat hay...phir dard bhi khatum ho jaata hay aur khoon bhi band ho jaata hay...

arjun look aditya innocent face and continue...ab tum apnay dado ko hi dekh lo...kitnay brave hain...un ko award bhi mila hay...aur aap toh un kay grandson ho aap ko toh un say bhi ziyaada brave hona chahaiy...phir apni bua ko dekho...woh kitni brave hay...been a crime journalist is not an easy job...pata hay un ko bhi ek dafa goli lagi thi...magar woh to nahi dari...aap ko bhi un sab ki tarah brave hona chahaiy...he shuffle aditya hair while finishing his talk.

Aditya listening him quietly...when arjun finish he said: aap theek kahtain hain uncle...main bhi ab police wala banno ga...mujhay karate ka shauq hay...main bhi aap ki tarah black belt loon ga...kungfu seekhoon ga(he make fist and wave in air) sab bad people ko catch karoon ga...phir aap dekhna mujhay bhi reward milay ga...arjun smile on his action and sudden emotion.

Haan meray baap...toh pehlay kiya kam hay...jo ab kungfu seekh kar hum par azmayga...rahul pick his last sentence and said entering in the room...

Aditya: ji nahi chachu aap dekhna...main bhi uncle ki tarah brave police wala banno ga...aur bad people ko Catch karoon ga.

Rahul hold his ear lobes and said: meray bacchay maaf kar day...police department main ek hi Arjun kaafi hay...toh bhi chala gaya toh beccharay culprits ka kiya hoga...woh to bhukay mar jay gain...

aditya confuse to hear this and look arjun side to explain...

arjun hug him and said: yeah, tumharay chacho joke kar rahay hain...tum say jealous ho gay hain...tum bas dil laga kar parho...karate and kungfu seekho phir dekhna...yeh kaissay seedhay ho jaiy gay...

aditya smile back and he said: you are right uncle and high five with arjun.

Rahul wide open his eyes and said: wah bhai, maan gaya...yaar dil jeetna toh koi tum say seekhay...yeh baccha jo kissi ko lift nahi karata...aaj kaissay teray saath masti kar raha hay...teray saath baitha hay...haan bhai...jis tarah uss sherni ko raam kiya hay...uss hi tarah iss ko bhi raam kar liya...hhmm...zara humhain bhi seekha do...he wink arjun and make him puzzle but soon arjun compose and said: classified knowledge hay...baad main bataoon ga...yeh batao kay sab ready ho gay aur hain kahan.

Rahul stand straight in hurry and said: aray yaar main toh bhool gaya...bhabhi nay kaha hay kay guest aana shuru ho gay hain...tum sakshi ko lay kar aa jao...main chalta hoon aaj toh full time mila hay aapni wali kay saath time spend karnay ka...he left in hurry after convey bhabhi message to arjun...and arjun go to sakshi room see if she is ready to or not...then he remember something...he go back his room and get her gift...then go to her room.


I TRY TO PUT ARAKSHI MOMENT HERE

BUT THIS PART GONE LONG SO I FINISH HERE

I TRY TO UPDATE OTHER PART SOON

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: angle1shanu

again mast update...

yar i advice u in sabki ek hardcopy nikal kar book banva lo...i sure dhamadum bikri ho jayegi..😉
so some 🤢 people are there in sakshi's familiy...
but not to fear when our arjun is here...
sakshi concern is too cute...
love arakshi's understanding...
continue soon...


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I JUST WRITE THE WAY I LOOK MY ARAKSHI
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ossum
Lv d convoy between adi and arjun
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
hmm arjun ko dil jeetna bohut acha se ata hain😆
sach mein tabhi toh sakshi ka dil bhi chura liya😳
update soon

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