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Mahaaaaaam

@_Maggie_

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Posted: 11 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: ...Mallu...
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i Cant beliveee
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Edited .. 😳
Omggg omggg !!
Mahamm u write it for me seriously or am in a dream :p
So Maham Banner was so Good Ur sparky done Good work on it 👏
Now come on OS ..
Itss amazing Loved truth and dare game BUT i was reading and making story in my mind that Virman Say i love you now but I was wrong and i read full itss Fabulouss,Mindblowing Update ..
& I love this Line u write 😃
"One Game of Truth and Dare and Everything Changed...While for some it was a Memorable Confession but for others it was the Night of the beginning of Some strong Feeling for someone"
Why should u not write FF or i thought u can participated in OS Contest also :) 😳
Thank you for writing for me I love you Maham Thankxx alott
U have ability to Write something so u should try as sis i suggest you My Maggiee :pp
Thank you so muxxhhh <3333
Love you ❤️

Milli🤗, my Behna❤️ I love you too<3 Aww I am glad you liked it😃

Last line ahaa That's sort of a Dialogue or so🤣

I am happy that ma Sis Liked her Gift😉

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Mahaaaaaam

@_Maggie_

Inactive

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Posted: 11 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.
The beginning of this OS showed how interesting it was going to be. I wanted to excite you people😆 Virat and Manvi's plan was accomplished.Yes it was Best friends, what for? 😉 But-wait- WHAT? Jeevika and green eyes?! Wow! Very nice, Magnolia.My Imagination you know😉 For the first time I'm imagining Krystle having green eyes! 😳 Jeevika's revenge to Manvi was awesome! Dateee with Virat! 😉 Bechara Uday, phas gaya. 😛 Bechara...dont be so sympathetic towards that play boy VirMan having mutual feelings. LOL. Highly awakward🤔It must be real awkward for them as they, being best friends, were going on a DATE! 😳 Jeevika, Viren, Udhay and Shivani... You guys didn't need to spy! Romance bhi nahi karne dogei kyaa?! 🤣
Romance ki dhajia uda di Manvi was smart enough to realize them wearing their disguises! 😛 VirIka, smart ho yaar tum dono! 🤣 Virat, realize hogaya tumhe? 😃 That night was special for 4 people, Shivani, Uday, Viren and Jeevika. 😳 But the next day changed Virat's life. First attempt of writing a one shot was fabulouis. The story was amazayn! The concept was phenomeniall. The ending was extraordinharry. And ur idea was brilliam! Keep writing. Please write more... Love this one to the core of my heart.
Thank you so much janny sweetheart for the sweetest comment🤗 i DIDNT really expect such response from you guys
This was my first attempt if i made any mistake so you guys can forgive me for that I know i am not a good writer like you but I tried😃
PS continue this 😉
Will think about this