Hey Anjani!
I'm here with the comment on the second chapter!
I know I'm really late when the update was specially dedicated to me and I should have been the first one to comment. But, sometimes somethings never work out. I couldn't take time out to actually read it and when I have actually read it, I'm happy that I did.
I know your love for Sallu and I felt that this whole story is connected somehow to what he does and what he portrays.
I think, its totally my thinking, that Khushi is more like Salman Khan in many ways.
She is courageous, smart, beautiful inside-out, golden hearted and most importantly a humanitarian. She takes good care of people and especially children whom she adores, like Salman does for his NGO "Being Human".
Maybe I'm reading a little bit too much between the lines but somehow I can't help but relate Khushi's character
Khushi is totally has a human-to-human relationship with her people and I love that fact.
It is a sign of a very good upbringing. Her mother indeed had been a very warm and affectionate and good lady.
What I'm surrprised at is the fact that even after staying in Britain for so long she has never forgotten the teaching of her mother, and stood rock still on her sankars.
Well, if I had been in the place of Arnav, even I would have fallen in love with her heads down.
She is everything a man can dream of and more.
As for Arnav, I just can't help but imagine the handsome Arnav with his sunglasses on, wearing a black suit and looking ever so alluring.
You haven't given much information on what goes inside his head but all I can say is that he is from the "modern" lot of people but still has a heart.
I kept thinking and swooning on him everytime I read about him behaving in a gentlemanly manner.
I also love the fact that how in all your stories Khushi is a main character and not just a prop needed for romance.
I know some people may not prefer it but I love to see some "woman power" which makes you as a writer different from all the others.
Since, Arnav is in love and a gunda party is here for the next update, can we have some masala and some fighting scenes and Khushi caring for Arnav scenes?😆
Is it too much to ask for??
Btw how soon is soon??
When is the next part coming??
I'm eager to comment on it! :D
Stay blessed and Keep writing!
Love,
Saraa :)
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