For You Forever - An Arhi TS Pt 3A & B on pg18 -5/2

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arnavini

@arnavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#101

Aww i cant expect an update so soon after the first ... Bt m happy.. U kept ur promise and updated on said day.

It was a superb ts...
And yaa u can write a ts .. That too with excellence...
I havnt imagined a short story of 3parts can be so magnificent..
Its tremendouS...

It shows hw with passing yrs the level of maturity rises and arshi gt more and more deeper on lovr evn dey were seperated for many years...

Its a was like a magic created in small packet...
U broke a thr trend that only lengthy stories can capthre a big spectrum .. Nw i can say a 3s sply by u can break in a big spectrum. .

Its fantastic.. I likd evry frame of this ts...

Hope to catch more of ur work soon..
Plz... Gt it soon coz..
As it ended nw again m craving for sme superb story frm ur end.. bst of luck for ur futr works...

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katj

@katj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#102

It was too good. .

Just love the story. .

Very awesomely written. .

Thanks for PM

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#103

Superb chapters...beautiful end...thanks for the PM

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tintin_ruble

@tintin_ruble

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Posted: 11 years ago

#104

Amazingly nice

I loved this Three Shot. It was written beautifully.

Will wait for some more from you hairth25 😆

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henamani

@henamani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#105

ur concepts are good. i have one complain though - arnav refers to khushi as his crush - it wasnt crush, it was true love. crush is someone u forget

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sushmita ghosh

@shalunsarun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#106

Awesome ts loved... i was just craving fr ur stories u knw..spellbound thought yaar...love u fr this mmmwwwuuuaaahhh

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verisimilitude

@verisimilitude

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Posted: 11 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: henamani
ur concepts are good. i have one complain though - arnav refers to khushi as his crush - it wasnt crush, it was true love. crush is someone u forget

Actually it was presumed as crush on his part when he was a teenager. He didnt want to reveal the true love to his friends as he chose to conceal it inside him till the end. fortunately or unfortunately he got the chance to spill it out

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Param

@pup03

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Posted: 11 years ago

#108

lovely ending !!! loved it.. 😃

thanks for mail 😊

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Barunsanaya10

@Barunsanaya10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#109

Gr8 story ..
Loved the way u described dere meeting seperation n reunion in 3 parts dat too very beautifully ... :)
Feeling awwed wid d concpt:)
Do cme wid smethn Lyk dis concpt again :)