Dis-continuing Taarey:A mistake wch gave me luv of my life note pg 1 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
awesome chapter
taarey married now
curious to read further
updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
concept of the story is mindblowing
chapters r awesome
bt m angery 2 coz 2mne mujhe iss story ka pm hi nhi diya.issliye bht bht bht jada gussa hu.nxt tym mat bhulna
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
I know many of u r damm angry on me
U r mad on me but really guys sry from hrt
Actually I hav my exam tht too for boards for 12
From firday so busy in tht n yeah sry guys but after
This update my nxt update will be after 10 march n if I
Get time n I get in my mood I will update in bwt sry
Luv u all keep smiling n yeah dis valentine I lost my baby
Sis whom i meet on twitter so plz pray to get soul thank u

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Rey entered d room n saw taani who ws standing on d window lost in her thoughts ... Rey got lost seeing her ... Bt knock on d door made dem cum bk to der sense .. It ws whole gang... Knocking to wish dem all d bst ... Dis made taani blush ... N made rey realise wat nxt he has to do ... Ne never thought of all d things n responsibility dat would cum to him after marriage... He just married Taani to take revenge... N nthing else... Marrying taani ws just a part of his plan ... He was nt ready 4 all dis... Rey got so engrossed in taking revenge dat he forgot wat would be d consequences ... After lisiting to their parents n swayam... Seeing shyness on tAani's face ... He realised lots of things r excepted 4m him .. Wich he cnt ful fill. Again his mind. Ws occupied wit the thought did I made a mistake marrying taani ?? Again d battle started btwn his hrt n mind ... Bt unfortunately his mind won... Bcz ego over came his guilt... Things wich shayana tld him came in his mind.. He started getting angry .. N all his guilt vanished.. He thought jo kiya sahi kiya .. Nw I vil shw dat b**** even I am a marriage material n even a gal cn fall 4 me...

Here taani ws getting confused.. Seeing. Changing Facial expression of his husband... She ws trying to read his face .. Bt her concentration ws broken wen she saw rey going angrily towards bathroom .. She tired stopping him . Bt he didn't .. He came out in his night dress..taani ws luking at him wit questioning face .. To avoid her question rey said in a stern voice Change your clothes n go to slp.. Before taani would speak he took his pillow n slept on couch... Taani ws hell shocked... SHe didn't imagined her 1 nite after marraige ws going to be like dis... She got tears in her eyes. Bt didn't let dem come out .. She wiped it before dey come out ... Changed her clothes.. N went to slp ...
Nxt day morning

Taani woke up .. N saw rey slping upside dwn ... He smiled seeing d senerio .. Bt last nite incident crept her mind. Her smile faded away ... SHe decided to ignor him ... Bt it ws hard 4 her bcz d prsn who ws shwing luv 4 her till yesterday morning .. Den suddenly wat happened to him dat he is ignoring her ... She wanted to ask him .. Bt her self respect didn't let her..

Dis was d nly prblm wit dem ... One had ego n one had self respect ... Wich doesn't allow dem to take 1st step ...

She dressed up n went dwn ... Rey's parents we're wating 4 dem ... Taani took their blessings ... N serve dem ... Dey we're please to see their daughter in law working on d 1st day of her marraige .. Dey wene tld her nt to do . She rplied saying dat its her duty being their daughter ... They just smiled at her rply n allowed her to serve them .. They we're feeling proud to hav such a daughter in law.. After finishing their brekfast they tld taani . Dat rey is veRy luck dat he got a wife like u .. Taani didn't utter a word on dis .. She just left d place ..
Here rey got up ... He rememberd last nite incident... Guilt ws abt to cover his mind... Bt before that he brush of his thoughts... He didn't wanted to feel guilty... His hrt ws telling him he did wrong... N his mind ws saying he did rite... Conflict btwn his hrt and mind ws making him restless... He got up from d couch n went to bathroom...

Here in d hall every1 we're having their breakfast ... Every1 ws pleased to see taani's careness ... Rey came dwn after taking shower

He went dwn took d blessings of his parents...while coming up his eyes fall on taani who ws. Already staring at him with emotionless expression bt as soon as their eyes met she took away his eyes from him... He knew wat ws d reason for her behaviour... Bt decided to ignor it.. He went n sat on d opposite side of taani... N started having his brkfast...

Days went like dis... Rey and taani ignoring each other.. But taani ws very friendly with every1... She helped each and every1 in every possible way she cn... She helped. Maids in kitchen... She helped d workers by guiding them wat to clean n when.. She helped kitcken staff in cooking... Everyday she used to give 1 1 new recipe...wich tasted very good.. Every morning she used to do prayers in d house.. Pray to god for well being of this house... She helps her mother in law in choosing her dressed n jewellery.. She even designed some of her dresses... She even helps rey's dad in bussiness.. By Given suggestions regarding betterment of d business... Day by day taani ws taking away hrt of evry1 in d house.. Even d maids n workers we're happy for getting taani as their madam... Rey's parents already luved her... Bt seeing all these things... They we're very happy on their choice for their son.. Evry1 came to taani for her advise.. N taani happily would help all of them witout complaining... She behaved very sweetly with evry1 except rey... Wenever he used to cum in front of her ... Her face used to get straight without any emotions.. He tried to ignor him as much as she cn bcz she ws hell upset with rey .. He ws d 1 who she truely luved n thought dat even he luvs her.. Bt he proved her wrong ... She ws upset dat not even once. He tried to explain her dat why is he beahving like this.. Wat have she done worng dat he was ignoring her... Many times she thought to go n tlk to him... DN her self respect stopped her.. She thought that its mistake to treat her like this nd she will nt take 1st step ... She decided If he wil cum n tlk to her den nly she wil tlk to him ...
Here rey gave a damn to taani... He ws happy that taani is making his wrk easy by nt tlking to him... He knew that if taani wil tlk to him ... N behave nicely. With him again he will start feeling guilty.. N he didn't want that to happened.. He purposely used to come late home... So that he doesn't get any change to interact with her... Getting an excuse that she already slept... N in Morning he used to get up late after taani left for brk fast preparation.. He used to get dwn eat his brk fast n leave for d dance rehearsals.. His parents planned a honeymoon trip for them... But he kept on delaying it giving excuse of dance competitions.. N planning to open d academy...
Days passed like dis...their ws no improvement in their relationship...One day while rehearsing lifts rey's right arms muscle got stretch... N he ws advise by d doctor not to rehearse for atleast a week other wise his injury will nt heal ... N he won't abe able to dance for months... N doctor asked him to take complete bed rest...
On the other hand nt listening to doctors warning n in order to avoid taani rey went to rehearsals ... Seeing evry1 dance he wouldn't resist himself n even he started dancing... This made his muscles stretch more... Bt luckily it didn't let to bigger injury... Nw he ws strictly instructed by his frnds parents and doctor to take rest... He ws strictly advised by d doctor nt to move his hand

Nxt day

He just woke up from his slp .. And find taani standing in front of him with a tray ... Taani's face was full of concerned n her self respect went away wen she saw rey injured.. She decided to take d 1st step by going and talking to him .. Because she knew that rey wil need help as he is nt allowed to move his right hand... N she also knew that rey wil nt ask 4 her help.. So she decided no matter wat she will help rey to cure fast.. As his big day is cuming near wen he wants to open up his own dance academy.. He needs to recover fast n go to rehearsals Even he doesn't need her help she will help him ... It is said naa.. All ur ego n self respect goes away wen it cums to ur love ones ... Bt 1 thing didn't go away .. Ws her anger.. She ws still angry on him for his beahviour.. Beside all the things wat she decided before She decided one more thing that thought she will help rey bt she will nt be sweet to him.. She will tlk only wen their is work.. Or if he needs sumthing
so Before rey could speak she started...

T: here is ur breafast... No need to cum down.. N haa ... From tonite u will slp on bed as ur hand is injured and it wil be uncomfortable for u to slp on couch.. I wil manage it for few days... One more thing dun forget to tke ur medicines... Its kept on d table ..
Saying his she left the room...

This amazed rey...
Rey always thought that taani is quite n shy gal... This ws d 1st time he saw angry taani with full concern...
Till nw rey ws thinking that he is ignoring taani.. Bt nw he realised that taani is angry with him...
Rey had his breakfast and took his medicines as instructed by taani
D day ws going Slower for rey as he. Didn't had anything to do .. So he ws just figiting in d room.. Taking one magazine n Throwing it den taking another n doing d same... Throwing CDs here n their after checking wich cd is it.. Like this he messed up whole room.. After sumtime rey felt sleepy. As d medicine had power in it...
So he slept...
Wen he woke up he saw taani cleaning the mess he created..

R: tum q saaf kar rahi ho... Koi servant ko bol do...

T: ye mera kamra hai... Mera kamra vo log q saaf karege... Aur vese bhi muje apna kaam khud hi karna pasand hai..

R: lekin ye mess mene kiya hai. Toh tum q saaf karugi...
To this taani replied

T: q ki me aapki wife hu... Aur aap meri responsibility ho.. Naa ki un workers ki
Ab pls aab chup rahege .. Aur muje apna kaam karne dege..

Saying this again she started doing her wrk
Rey got lost in her... This was the 1st time he felt for taani
Edited by raddhi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Plz dear , tumhare res ko dekhkar update milega jaise hopes ho rahi hai kal se, dear dharti kab ki palat gayi ab toh unres karo , plz yr
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
finally u update it

it was superb

feeling sad for taani she was so happy about her marriage but he broke all her dreams

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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
I just read all three chapters in one go and I loved them!!
Hate and love shanaya for rejecting rey!!
Rey ignoring taani was sad.
Loved taani's anger filled with concern!!
Her one line dialogues were hilarious!!
Please continue soon and pm me!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
rey ko dekhkar bas ek hi gaana yaad aa raha hai
ye ladka haaye allah kaisa hai deewana
kitna mushkil hai tauba isko samjhana..
oh god!! ye ladka kab samjhega ki ye kya kar raha hai😕
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
awesome updt
loved the chapter
rey nd his so called ego
he is purposely ignoring taani
taani is so smart...
because of her self-respect she also didn't talk
rey injured ...
eagerly waiting for nxt part
updt soon


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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
amazing concept
i just loved it
so update soon and please do send me the pm...
its a request
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
it's vry beautifull,somthng new n interestng stry..i luv that..gr8 job... 😊 🥳 👍🏼

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