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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Manreet!! First things first let me congratulate on your third endeavour as a writer! I am ecstatic because you have gone ahead and started something that I absolutely love reading and that is Happy stuff! I think I just love this concept of a series of OS's.

I will also take this opportunity to wish you a very happy 2014 and also apologize for my lateness. Of all times it's during these holidays that I was inactive (on a reading break from IF) but here I am now and let me just tell you that I thoroughly enjoyed all the three updates that you have penned down so far. While Happy Birthday showed a lovely friendship between two kids, Sport's day showed us how this friendship has grown over time into a beautiful mutual affection and finally Sunflowers had me smiling from ear to ear as Arnav and Khushi started to notice one another in a different light. What amazed me in all three of these pieces is the way you have developed these characters, given them just the right amount of innocence and purity that one can only hop to expect from kids and teenagers!

I think I just love this whole "Pyaar dosti hai" tagline that you have weaved into this story. I think we saw a glimpse of Arnav and Khushi seeing eachother differently in this chapter, there is a beautiful attraction and I can't wait to see what you have instore for them next!

Bring on the next update whenever you can! ❤️

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Oh what a beautiful moment of realization this was.

Suddenly some magic just happens simply...What is love?

Arnav and khushi are in the late teens and i guess this will be a good phase in their life for realisation to set in slowly...it should be fun.

I can't wait to read arnav and khushi's further excerpt of life and for them to embark finally on a wonderful journey of life together.

P.S: Hope your new year started with a bang...Happy 2014 :)😊

Edited by kondhili - 11 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Loved both updates Manreet.

The OS's are really living up to the title!!

This was a beautiful, tender moment of realization yet confusion of a feeling called Love!!

Wish you a Happy new year!!

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Happy Birthday

oh that was really sweet full of innocence..

brilliant idea of writing happy happy OS's..

It was a much needed one..😛

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#85

ohk this is it..

i typed my comment twice jo ki post nahi Hua..

sorry i dnt have my laptop and i typed it on my stupid cell who betrayed me...😭 i cant write it again.. Bahut lamba tha and i dnt know how to copy paste through this.. I will comment later on now.. Sorry..

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Garden is evergreen. I have come to love it so much in just these three apperances. A witness to happy surprises, of support and just being together and realizations, which infact is still dormant.

And she asked and whom.. This is really sweet and interesting. Ofcourse, none of them has realized isn't it? There hasn't been anything different to tell them so. They have been together like this always. I don't expect extraordinary. They don't happen in real life. But there is this moment. And I am happy that you taking tthem so.

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Shruti Gupta

@Shruti21

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

Sports Day

I loved this part the most.. Sabse jada.. This reminded me of my friend who had an interview in Bangalore.. He was quite sure he won't get admission but even after knowing his preparation is zero i was like arrey tera nahi hoga toh kiska hoga..i had some sort of faith and trust on him as well as god he will get through anything..he has to.. Rejection is not his cup of tea.. Khushi has that trust on Arnav.. So for me this was the best part of this series though i still have yo read the rest..

P.S- i am determined to comment today itself or else i will forget everything.. so bear with me.. N yea this comment has two more parts..😛

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palaayan

@palaayan

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Although I can't quite get the exact image I have in mind, this image provides something close to how I imagine Arnav and Khushi's secret garden to be. Please imagine a large tree by the fountain which has a wooden swing and some sunflowers nearby :)

Also a huge thank you to Kavita [kclovearshi] for teaching me how to upload images! :)

Edited by manreet_gill - 11 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Happy new year dear

These two what to do with them

They still can't see what's changed

Well yes they can be dense about their feelings for one another

But it is changing

That they feel something for one another

That Mumbai will bring them something new

Seems that their parents can tell

But not our arhi

Bless how cute they were opening their results

Well one another's anyway

Laal ho gayi well its just the start of it

Cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 11 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

Wonderful...is this love going to be sweet laddo or you going to put some spices in to it like lavanaya or sheetal or Lisa or pam...but can i tell you my secret I like spices but in mild form...I like shaddi ka laddo

Edited by ranogill - 11 years ago