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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#91

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As I was reading this a quote popped into my head and I found it quite fitting so here it is - "What one loves in childhood stays in the heart forever."

Arnav and Khushi have loved each other since childhood and they are undoubted not only going to stay in each other's hearts for forever, but also with each other.

In all honestly, as I was reading the parts about the farewell party and dance all I was shouting in my mind was "KISS KISS KISS!" Like a ten year old :P

Anyways, each part makes me love this series more because I'm reminded of my own relationship and just the fact that you've made this story so simple and serene and beautiful :)

Can't wait for the next part! :)

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 11 years ago

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#92

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

Res

~unres~

Loved the tendor love brewing between the childhood sweethearts which they are yet oblivious to but starting to get the pangs of. It feels food to know thier parents are also supportive of their kids' friendship & love towards each other.

If they are heading to Mumbai, which city are they in now?

I thought this was set in some countryside in your conutnry :)

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago

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Arshix144

@Arshix144

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

Paint it red indeed! ;)

OS 4 has left me in puddle of mush and I can't shake this warm and fuzzy feeling! This special mutual affection that you just brought to light with Arnav and Khushi exchanging envelopes and reading each other's results was extra ordinarily beautiful. That moment of pure bliss & happiness to discover that their hard work paid off and that they won't be separated as they both made it to the same college was perfection.

This unspoken love and connection that is obviously more than friendship, was explored here as Arnav put his arm around Khushi's waist to bring her closer whilst confirming with his mom if the photo was perfect. I found myself agreeing with Arnav's mom about the sheer perfection of that moment & that picture! ;-) Then we have the RED moment where Arnav compliments his Khushi and Khushi responds in the only way we all know her to respond that is blush in all shades of red making her lovely nose red in the process! Loved this IPK moment that you recreated here, by the end of this part I was smiling from ear to ear heck I am still smiling while typing this and you are responsible for it Man!

So thank you for making us smile and giving us yet another wonderful update and I don't even have to tell you that I look forward to the next update because you know that already, don't you?! ;)

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msmarple

@msmarple

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

Just caughts up with nos. 3 & 4.

Loved them both.

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Jyothsna

@joe4joe

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#96

awsm
just love arnav's mom
the way u write,mindblowing

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Ohhlalal love is definitely in the air and all around...i loved this one.

Left me with a fuzzy smile and a huge grin. I loved the way you brought out the deep connection that arnav and khushi share so beautifully.

The scene where arnav very casually pulls khushi closer to make the picture perfect was just awesome...mazaa agaya padhke.

Their little dance towards the end with teasing naughty arnav was just the perfect cherry on this delicious cake.

Loved the garden pic, arnav and khushi's look...

i wonder what mumbai holds in store for them. Will we get to see temptations for arnav in d form of Lavanya or sheetal. I am sure jo bhi ho these two will come out of it stronger.

Cant wait to read the next update.

Thanks for the pm.

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javeria

@Javeria3991

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#98

This is the sweetest shot I read in this series. I love it. ❤️

Arnav and Khushi going to prom, together n are very close. They are adorable best friends n lovers. 😳

How fastly their relation has been transform. Their presence for each other is enough to fade away the nervousness, anxious and anger they hold.

Now their bright eyes are reflecting the feelings they hold for each other, love , indeed the most beautiful feeling.

They are making memories because soon they will leave their homes n step into the outside world. So cute. 😳

I hope their secret garden will remain the same but I won't be because Arnav and Khushi make it lively. That place exist because of them.

I am waiting eagerly to read what the new city , Mumbai, hold for them.

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Manreet dear,

That was a lovely update.

Actually I look forward to reading your writings.

You have described each and every nuance and expressions of Khushi so well that I felt it was witnessing it.

Lovely way with descriptive words and you capture each and every nuance be it visible at a glance or visible only when observed at close quarters only.

Enjoyed it thoroughly.

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#100

I'm loving this...just saw d pic of their secret garden n its really beautiful...both r made for each other bas...everytime i read ur update i have this huge grin plastered across my face n i bet its d same with all those people who r reading ur work...kudos to u girl..