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akila_arshi

@akila_arshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

cute story..
pls pm me when u update...

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Arrey waah the bonds between arnav and khushi has just strengthened as the years go by.

I loved this NK who is playing cupid to this awesome couple. Well the emotional connect is strong and they are just 15 so there's still time i guess for Arnav and khushi to realise that they are meant for each other.

Let them bask in this wonderful friendship phase for some time. 😉

Manreet i love the way you are encapsulating this journey of Arnav and khushi into small OSs...a very different take indeed. 👏

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ameena671

@ameena671

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

wow amazing update loved it thank you for pm.

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pearl.b

@pearl.b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Its truly a beautiful peice of writing...arnav n khushi are so adorable...well they certainly love each other immensely...wanna see who is gonna realise it first?...dat was wonderful manreet...looking forward for d next one.

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Param

@pup03

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

beautiful !!! so it is all nk's game to give these two best friends time to be together.. loved nk for it.. arnav and khushi as always.. loved them...

thanks for pm 😊

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Pastellitesoulx

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

awesome updates
loved it so much

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Sarikaa97

@Sarikaa97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Hi there!
Loved it! See you don't even have to worry about living up to our expectations cause you definitely have, will and much more!!
Just made my day! Thank you:)

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Amazing loved it
pls cont soon

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-Chudel-

@-Chudel-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Firstly, you are the queen of so many genres, Manreet. You've already immortalized Arnav and Khushi in two of your stories and now Moments of a Lifetime comes across as an entirely different and brilliant concept! I was pleasantly surprised after reading it and have come to the conclusion that no matter the genre, you write everything the same way-with a lot of heart!

Having a childhood sweetheart is like every girl's fantasy.

But I am 19. And the only sweethearts in my childhood were boys who looked like Donald duck in jumpsuits. 😆

So yeah. Tough luck there.

But isn't it amazing that I get to live the fantasy through an adorable Khushi and handsome Arnav? We read to escape the real world and this has to be the awesome-est time turner ever. Ah, young love! I am speaking like a 39 years old spinster but I think that it is amazing that you have someone to trust, be friends with and fight over right from the get go.

Khushi and Arnav warm the cockles of my cynical heart and make it melt with their adorable antics in the first part. In the second bit they delight me with their unique and strong bond. Maybe it isn't love for them yet but it's friendship and trust and loyalty and hell that counts a whole lot too! NK is surprisingly mature for a 15 year old but then again, cupids come in all shapes and sizes.

I have a feeling Arnav and Khushi will start a new game. A game of stealing my heart. And they won't return it back.

But I am ready, Manreet.

Ask them to take it away!

ps- College opens up along with 3 different coachings so I'll be less active here but I'll catch up in one sweep whenever I can. Please do excuse the inordinate delays in my comments. Hope you've a fantastic year ahead. All the very best, Manreet! 🤗

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jqw2BLdDzr4[/YOUTUBE]

Edited by -Delilah- - 11 years ago