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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

beautiful story. .. serene and innocent..
really beautiful...

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Camlin

@Camlin

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

You have captured the essence of each moment they shared, right from the childhood up till when they went to Mumbai, so brilliantly. I especially liked the part where they felt glide of love for the first time. A loquacious Khushi and an almost unobtrusive Arnav, they form such a perfect pair a perfect pair. The passiveness and innocence captured in your each word is truly amazing. You are truly a great writer.

PS - I connected more with their childhood days since I went to St. Xavier's school and had a similar friend, only difference is he is my best friend there is no romantic angle.😆😆

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Simran

@dmg123

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Happy New Year!

Just finished reading!

Absolutely wonderful! Arnav and Khushi's friendship is so sweet!

I liked NK...he was a nice character. Will we see him more soon?

The last 2 chapters were so awesome!

The way Arnav asked Khushi her dreams and then said he would fulfill all of them was great!

The titles of each chapter is well chosen!

Great job!

Cannot wait to read more!

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Finally finished all updates. really sweet story.

I was almost thinking that something might happen either before they leave for Mumbai or after they reach there. Some MU or fight(as happens in many FFs) but thankfully they are still bonded as they were!

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

I remember seeing this when you had just started to post and I wanted to be able to read. Alas, like most treasures that you can't see right away for their worth, I misplace this one too. So this morning, with a few minutes of indulgence at my disposal, I used google and IF to edge my way through to these moments!

And with just one OS read - Happy Birthday - might i say that I am so glad to now be with you on this journey. Such a beautiful little introduction to the two best friends and the little birthday celebration. Of times that were younger and carefree...such honesty that only childhood can bring.

Beautiful start and I know this is going to be a great journey. I will catch up with the rest and leave my thoughts behind as I can. Till then - keep writing - you are so good at it!!

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meera30

@meera30

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

Sports Day was fun!! I like NK and Lavanya...:)

But Sunflowers was simply beautiful! You know while i am reading this, I feel like I am looking at a series of the best photographs in somebody's collection - ones that someone will pay heavily to acquire rights for and make best selling wallpapers!

The entire love discovery and the subtle change in what has only been platonic was so soulful. And it is still tinged with innocence that only childhood friends carry with them lifelong.

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

OS 5 Amazing...Cute ArShi 😊

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happypeace

@happypeace

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#138

just came across this... must saw uve done a wonderful job!

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#139

Ahh lovely so slowly realisation is setting in for arnav about how vital khushi is for him...while khushi remains clueless.

I loved the beautiful picture you painted of arnav and khushi on the lovely beach. Arnav's moment of fear thinking of loosing khushi was just too good and so well written.

I love the way they take comfort in each other's arms...it seems so natural. Their hugs just strike the right note.

I am sure they will leave no stones unturned to fulfill each other's dreams.

Thanks for the pm manreet...another fabulous snippet.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#140

Tum kaise itna sweet likh leti ho? And ye dono kaise realize karenge that they are in love? I am now really interested in knowing what would be the trigger in making them realize that they love each other don't know since when..

This shot was visually very soothing. And the gestures which they indulged in , be it a little teasing, embracing, putting her head over his shoulder was very heart warming.. And best part ofcourse was the sharing of dreams. How many do that? It spoke of so much. The feeling of sharing, trust and that -I ll make them true for you- kind of emotion dominant...it just won over my heart.