ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 4- Chapter 33 to Chapter 40

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A.S.K

@ToughStuff

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#931

Superb update!! very well written!!! Yeah didn't expect Asad to b in his room!!! Finally Dilshaad came to know Rashid 's truth!!! Asad found her!!! Thank God no no thank u!! as u wrote it!!! I was so scared u know!! when I read urs & akaswan 's comment dat u were thinking to give it a sad ending!!!! I was irritating bano, zola & sunny to tell u nt to give it a sad end!!! becharon ko bohat pareshaan kiya maine!!! Thanks 4 pm, Update soon!!

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: swapno

Thank you so much Swapna...🤗
I am patting my back for this update...
You know why??
Because I wanted to give you all a different side of the story..
Really glad that you liked it..
And really happy to make you surprised...😊
I will try to update soon..😉

yes...U have given us a different story... 👏 ..chalo I vl also pat on ur back for this awesome update n fantastic story...I'm in so love with your FF yar...update soon
😭

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago

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BeIndependent

@BeIndependent

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#933

hi swapno.😊

it was awesome👏

finally dilshad realized her mistake😊
loved asad n dil canvo..how hurt they are😭
i ve said b4 tht i lve hw they understand each other splly asad..😛😃

thanks to his ocd tht made him stop😉😆😆
but asad slept🤣..waha janab so rhe the and itna hungama ho gya😆😆

dis park is really special 4 them😃😳😳

wonderful update..😛😃
continue soon 😃😛
thanks 4 pm😃

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...parth...

@...parth...

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#934

OMG he ws in his room????😲 that too during whole drama...

woah really surprising

his ws smthing against my prediction

finally dilu realize his double standrd hubby 🥱

n last paragraph ws really romantic 😳

thnx fr pm 😃

n sorry fr late cmnt 😛

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Applef

@Applef

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#935

awesome update..

he was there in his room only??..

dilshad is regretting everything after she has done those..

loved asad's explanations for not leaving..

he loves his family so much...

poor zoya..

she got really scared..

the last part was really amazing..

update soon..

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#936

beautiful update
omg zoya left to find asad
and asad never left in the first place
exactly y would he leave HIS house...haha too good
now he have to go find zoya
dilshad in regrets she should be u didnt listen to ur son
who supported u all these yrs
thank god he found her now they will fight AGAIN
continue soon

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Sabina

@Guguminti

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#937

🤗🤗

Awesome Update yaar

How do you manage to write so well ??

Next update very soon haa

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jasmine ansari

@AMMY12

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#938

awsm part.
Superb one.
Luvd it.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c

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Sadia Sharmeen Swapno

@swapno

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#939

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

lol sads i loved ur comment too 🤣
that rashu bandar thing is very good n suitable for him 🤣👏
yaa zoya is really now most imp person in his life 👏😳
are love is not only blind its andha, behera, lulaa, langda,etc 🤣
u shld kill him in ur next part tel that he was going on road listening music
aise hi aur kisi ne car se tapka diya uss bandar ko 😲🤣
pleasure is mine sharu 😆
yaar baksh to dia na par ye next update ke liye tha ye abhi nhi chalu hoga ye 2 din
baad hoga kyunki u updated today so 2 days rest for u n then u know 😈🤣
abhi nhi ayegi wo moti bhaisi 🤣🤢🤣

😲 😊 tujhe lagta hain rashu bandar music suntahain??

Yaar...2 din sirf?? baksh de...kam se kam 1 week tak...😆