ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 4- Chapter 33 to Chapter 40 - Page 92

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Posted: 11 years ago
I always say this to you but I love your portrayal of characters. Its very true to their nature, but they grow too. Dilshad believing Rashid, but realizing he is a liar. Abandonment issues that both Asad and Zoya have, are depicted beautifully. The only problem I had was the lack of update... I thought you removed me from your pm list Please update soon!
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow.. It was awsm...
Asad coming frm his room😆 Highly unexpectd😆😆
I lovd asya scene❤️
U always make it so heart touchng..❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing..
i love d way u develope d story and character..
there s lots of developement in characters of ur story which dint take place in a single update...
love changed everyone..
atlast dilshad realises her mistake
good for her
i really thought asad left and will come back later but he didnt
this s d character growth u had shown in him
it was lovely and written well update
i loved d whole
espespecially asya..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update swapno. Loved the way you wrote about asya emotions when they were looking for each other.

Please update soon n please pm me for the next part too.
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Posted: 11 years ago
sadia!! this was the best update!!
i am angry because u didn't pm me for the last update...but i read it anyways!!!
oh god that was a terrific update...
dilshad accused her own son for that good for nothing man!! good that she realized very soon that she was wrong...
totally loved najma in lioness avtar!!! bit nobody cared for poor zoya...

but this update...it made me happy...asad is no fool to leave his house just like that...ur asad has a brain!!! congratulations...
loved the emotional reunion of mother son duo...
asya scene was...uhmmm ...ya it was sad wala cute!!! lol...
hope zoya gets pacified soon ..
and next time dare u forget to pm me...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
can i take writing tips from you??? pwweease!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
good they found each other...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow part
thanx for pm
pz pm me for next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc update. Finally zoya mili toh shi. Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the update. Continue soon

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