ASYA (KABHI) FF- Given and Denied- Thread 4- Chapter 33 to Chapter 40

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akaswan

@akaswan

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#381

I know , I know ... i know ( don't ask what because i don't know)😆 but i really missed your story 🤗

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nehi0015

@nehi0015

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Posted: 11 years ago

#382

plz ...swapno cantinue ur writing. we r u missing ur story a lot.

do not such a large nap to write...plzzz

update

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Manchalateriore

@Manchalateriore

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Posted: 11 years ago

#383

Its ok if u take a break but im excited for next update

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-Prinky-

@-Prinky-

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#384

Hey sadia where r u dear...

plz continue soon...

plz plz plz come back...i miss u sooo much...

r u busy with something or still upset...

plz come back...

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NAVI55

@NAVI55

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#385

Hey...

I came across this FF on Tuesday and i have to say this is a fabulous story👍🏼

I'm still wondering why I have not come across this sooner. I have completed reading all the chapters just now and all I have to say is ...WOW.

Your characters are amazing, they compliment each other so well. The scenes you have created are brilliant...From the romance between Asad and Zoya, The growing closeness to everyone at the Khan Villa and even the drama surrounding Rashid whom I detest right now...

Your writing style is simple yet the descriptions of each scene is so vivid...

I have laughed when you have written happy scenes and have cried when the scenes were sad...All the way through though I have kept on rooting for Asad and Zoya.

I only hope that Asad can open up and tell Zoya the complete truth about his past and his father so she can help him overcome every obstacle and reveal the truth to everyone...

I know that you are upset with the fact that KSG has left QH, even I am very dissappointed but by reading your story I feel his presence here. Since I have started reading your story I am really eager to read how it will end and I hope that you will continue soon.

I have seriously become a fan of your story😃 and will be waiting for the next part...Please pm me when you update, It will be greatly appreciated by me. I have sent you a buddy request already.

Once again this is a brilliant story. The concept is lovely and your writing is commendable.👏

From your eager new reader

Navi...XOXOXO

PS: A very happy new year to you dear. Here's wishing the year ahead brings you more inspiration to write more lovely stories on IF. 🤗

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Vaishali

@MeDHellsAngel

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#386

Nyc story i lved it.
Plz do continue soon nd plz pm me

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...parth...

@...parth...

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#387

plz i wANt an update now it's enough yaaar :(

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#388

swapno...I must say U r a awesome writer...I know I'm very late BT gal ur just brilliant... I actually read OS coz they r short n I'm inactive in IF..I never read any FF..But ur FF is mashAllah..I'm still wondering why I have not come across this sooner.in just one afternoon I completed all chapters in 4 threads...I love this ASYA n u introduced a twist in each n every chapter..I'm so much addicted to this FF now...plz do update super soon...I can understand u.. even I'm missing kSG n kabhi like hell
😭 😭 ...missing KaBhi made me go through 4 threads in just one session...plz update soon...I'm sending buddy request 2 u.plz pm me...
😭 Ur new eagerly waiting reader...

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago