Never Too Late - A D3 FanFiction [Updated Chapter 18- Page 69]8-9-2014

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kriapatel

@kriapatel

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#231

Supab love swaron tifs they were socute

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#232

As Usual Reserved..I am suffering from a major decline at reader side,Lot of PM's still in a way to reply..

I'll surly come soon with my long comment just like before..U just carry on,Do update

prateek

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kapoormenka

@kapoormenka

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Posted: 11 years ago

#233

beautiful updates loved them continue soon

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#234

even i liked the whole chapter it was amazing...
rey does not want to know to sharon that this all was done by kriya which is actual
swayan friend and swayan and sharon are show their looks to erupt a anger soon
and what in store in mmet of rey and kriya... will wait to next...
do continue soon and pm me

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#235

it was an amazingg update as a writer you are definitely doing a fab job

Bringing your characters' emotions out of the analytical, away from the general, beyond the abstract.

you hav the ability of filtering emotion through your characters' consciousness n Recreating their experience tat draws me directly into that experience.

reading tis update n many more from you

i want to share one quote wit you which suits your writing perfectly

''Although we read with our minds, the seat of artistic delight is between the shoulder blades. That little shiver behind is quite certainly the highest form of emotion that humanity has attained when evolving pure art and pure science. Let us worship the spine and its tingle.''

sharon's pov was Detailed, Wordy ,deep n flawless

She felt naked, exposed. It felt as if he could look into her eyes and strip down her soul, make it bare.

these lines made my day

you are a magician of language,

using quick and delicate wit, and a lyrical elegance

bringing freshness and power to the story

making it funny, moving, tender, brave and dangerous.

a pleasant writer, with a pleasant style,

a connoisseur of strong ideas .

sry for not commenting on ur earlier updates rini

do update soon 🤗

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Sanskriti

@SanskritiS

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+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#236

Loved this chapter

Swayam trying to analyzing Sharon's moves

n Sharon annoyed with him

The Rey's pov over Sharon was well penned

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#237

wow..superfast update.. 😃

me loving it..!!!

Rey himself texted Kriya for iv thingi..woah.. ye kya chakkar hai boss.. 😉

Reyam part was small yet awesome...as always.. I love these 2 days sooo much 😃

Loved Swaron part the most..

the fire coming from both sides is like... WOW...

loving it..

waiting for next update..

bas usmei thoda sa aur Kriyaansh ko bhi dikhana...

mai bechari Kriyaansh fan hu.. Swaron bhi hu... but Arsha Kriyaansh pehle..

so thoda taras khao mujhpe... 😆

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Khyati

@So_Naley

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#238

It was a superb update !!!!!
I love the relationship that Sharon shares with the two men in her life and the stark difference in the way they percieve her !!
They intensity btw Swaron !! Its really intriguing !!
Fascinated by how Kriya and Rey's relationship is developing !!
Dude I am in love with this Rey !! He is just too nice !! I want him !!He is purrfect duuudeee !!
And my fav part is where Swayam was abusing Sharon !! He called her a friggin Dementor !! Hahahahahahahahaha!! Awesome !!
Update soon !!

Love ,
Khyati :)