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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#541

Originally posted by: MarriedLove
shlok is really a devil...
continue soon...

he is human who has both colors

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Geeta

@Geeta.R

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Posted: 11 years ago

#542

A fantastic plot di!
You've handled such a sensitive topic so well!!
Kudos to you :-)
No eggs no jhootis lots of love
Please continue soon xx

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#543

Originally posted by: Geeta.R
A fantastic plot di!
You've handled such a sensitive topic so well!!
Kudos to you :-)
No eggs no jhootis lots of love
Please continue soon xx

oh dear u r so sweet

and for sure dear i will update soon but now i am going to my village so no internet for 2 or 3 days so i will update in next week 😊

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#544

hey friends i hope you all will be fine and fit , firstly thank you very much and love u all guys for this warm and great response on my story

guys i want to update next part so i need some suggestion from all of you. i am feeling bit confuse on the current situation so i need your votes on two different ways

1. add some twist which change the entire current plot, something very intense which spin your mind😲

2. or let it be like this with growing romance between Aaslok❤️

so let see which one will be your choice

drop the vote 😛

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AlbusDumbeldore

@AlbusDumbeldore

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Posted: 11 years ago

#545

1. add some twist which change the entire current plot, something very intense which spin your min

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#546

Originally posted by: anjipankaj
1. add some twist which change the entire current plot, something very intense which spin your min

1=1

2=0

😊

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goolab

@goolab

Elite

Posted: 11 years ago

#547

beautiful up date wait for more

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sonia

@lachii

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#548

do whatever but do make shlok eat shit before aastha even thinks of forgiving him...he raped her ...i cant get over it yet😭

no amount of guilt is enough...he must go through hell and aastha must try his patience...

so i think you will have to bring in twist😒

although i do not like twists in love stories but twist is needed for story

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#549

Originally posted by: goolab
beautiful up date wait for more

😆 did you read the massage

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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Posted: 11 years ago

#550

Originally posted by: lachii
do whatever but do make shlok eat shit before aastha even thinks of forgiving him...he raped her ...i cant get over it yet😭
no amount of guilt is enough...he must go through hell and aastha must try his patience...

so i think you will have to bring in twist😒
although i do not like twists in love stories but twist is needed for story

lacchi welcome back in form

love ur reaction

1=4

2=1