AASHLOK INTEZAAR --last part , pg-17@20JAN2104

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dakshaavi

@dakshaavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

thanq for p.m. read part 1 just now liked it.

will check next part .

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Anusha

@Anusha16

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#42

one word... emotional...😭

this is the most emotional OS i have ever read about ashlok... ur very good.

Hope the last part is the end of her mysery and the start of her happiness...😊

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maivelli

@maivelli

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#43

this is so emotional
feelin bad fr astha update soon

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sonia

@lachii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

oh god jaldi ker do update...please

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lechu

@-LECHU-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

totally emotional update...

the pain of an young woman

isolated in husband's house well portrayed

you deserves a big applause...👏 👏 👏

he ignores her

but still she loves him like anything

craving for his presence...love

beautifully written...

will her long wait be in vain?😔

waiting...

do write more works on ashlok

(i know about your laziness but still...😛)

A BIG THANKS FOR THE PM🤗

Edited by -LECHU- - 11 years ago

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Roshani

@lively_roshani

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+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

gr8

please update last part soon

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niki795

@niki795

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

awesome superb emotional update
loved it
poor astha has to and still suffering...
her in laws are such disgusting people
but shlok is no less... If he likes her he should be supporting her and comfort her... He didn't even say a word
plz do continue soon
thanks for the pm